FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 91

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

i sooo wish Madhu takes the 2 lacs today itself and on the pretense of meeting Manav for last time. she takes him and flees to another part of the country before that ugly Tuesday comes.. WHy doesshe have to be so mahaan.. let her be selfish too..

let RK pay for it or get destroyed or whatever...
he is a selfish man.. he took all he needed from Madhu.. became a man again eating away her presence and breathing through her soul and when it was time to return for favour.. he is selfish..
he cant let go off his properties because the so called honour and hardwork of his family is at stake.

in a house where adultery is encouraged and practised so shamelessly, I am confused where the HONOUR is..

he gave her away so easily... no doubt he is suffering too but his suffering is nothing compared to what Madhu is going through...

Originally posted by: rdave1

This feedback will make no sense at all. I read the chapter the night before then just closed the tab, I couldn't think. I couldn't stop crying and even now just thinking about it brings tears to my eyes. My heart just breaks for Madhu. She is right sometimes death is a better option then living a life that you longer have control over. It's sad and unfortunate that just like every other man in her life she had trusted RK betrayed that trust. What breaks my heart even more is that she has resigned herself to her fate, burned all of her dreams one by one. And she gave RK a cop for doing this to her because according to her she forgot her place in his life, he didn't.

I do hope there is another chapter tonight because this has become an addiction.

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Yeh kasoor mera hai ke yakeen kiya hai

Dil teri hi khatir rakh chod diya hai

Brilliant . Loved it . 👏👍🏼⭐️

may b this is hw d real world is . may b this is hw ppl r . Thats why i always say dat ur stories n characters r soo real n it feels like its hpnin in real ity.

No, im not angry wid RK at all 😆 bcz he nvr promised madhu anything . He didnt commit to her anything . He didnt love her . so why to blame him.

Like a customer he took wat every he cud n watever he wanted frm her n when her presence effected his reputation n respect in society he decided to send her back to hell . poor girl is at fault here. she shud hav learnt lesson bfr but no she didnt . Dats why destiny taught her a big lesson one more time . I dnt think she wud trust anyone in her frm now onwards . she wud nvr make dreamy castles in air now bcz her heart n trust n dreams hav been broken beyond limits now.

Yes, i expected some humanity n sympathy frm RK after he had shown so much care fr her . I thot he wud atleast buy her frm tony n then free her . But no , he cudnt even do dat . May b in his own problems n tension it didnt click his mind to buy her n then free her immediately .

Or may be he didnt want to spend so much on her when he knew in return he wud hav to free her without getting anything back frm her .

poor girl cant even kill herself bcz she has a lil brother.

Hw i wish madhu to elope frm RK's house bfr tony takes her along wid him . she cud leave RK 's house n then take her brother along wid her n go to sum faraway place where she cud study further n then teach economy . where she cud see her brother studying n growing in front of her .😊

Originally posted by: aaliya14

When in a situation like this all a person can think of is IF he had made the right choice and thas what is happening with madhu as she thinks about . she just trusts people to quickly. i can't even make a guess of whats going to happen. continue soon

Originally posted by: coolashu

I have re-read the updates 3 times now and still cant decide whom to feel more bad for, Rishabh or Madhu. He broke down once he saw Madhu breaking down😭😭 I have no words for Madhu again.😭 He was innocent and mercilessly cheated and she is suffering from the beginning. Looks like destiny gave her a break from all the suffering for these 3 months. Please don't let him send her back to Tony and update soon.

PS: Every time I think the prologue is up next, you surprise me😉 First I thought after chapter 17 is the prologue and now was thinking after Chapter 20..Is the prologue in next chapter???🤔😛

Originally posted by: ananya2010

I was going through the Forum yesterday and by chance happen to read this story, read all the 21 chapters in one go, finished reading by 2am but did not stop reading it and must say what an emotional story i had missed so many days.

Originally posted by: ananya2010

I have not cried in these few years that much i cried reading your story, by the time i finished the 21st chapter my vision had become blurred due to crying. I felt as if i am reading some real life incident.

Originally posted by: stay_on_waves

Hay dear nice and emotional update, in part 20 RK refferred Madhu as a lie as if he doesn't believe her anymore but in this update he knows very well what damage he is causing to her, he knows she doesn't belong to that world and even then he is sending her there? why would he do that why Is he so helpless is it about money he don't have much money now or is it a dirty game of Dipali and bhatia's which tied his hands in this matter or mixture of both which made him weak and helpless like this? Whatever it is, I think he had reffered his dreams of living happily with Madhu as a lie in Part 20.
Regarding Madhu, her inner turmoil was expressed well with more briefing about her character. Now it all makes sense that how can she bear that much and still a ray of hope made her positive about future. Her trust had been broken again and again and even then she Is reasoning herself to live with it.
If there is no problem regarding money then RK can buy her and free her but i m curious what made him look like he doesn't have any other option then sending Madhu back to hell.. I hope it would not happen somehow RK stopes this all .

TERI MEHFIL BHI GAYI
CHAHNY WALY BHI GAYEY
SHAB KI AAHAIN BHI GAYIN
SUBAH K NAALEY BHI GAYEY
DIL TUJHEY DEY BHI GAYE
APNA SILA LEY BHI GAYE
AA KAR BETHY BHI NA THY
AUR NIKALY BHI GAYE...

Originally posted by: aan-rish

I think I understand Madhu very well. In fact i can clearly understand why Madhu blamed herself in the last chapter. We got her past also so I dont think her back ground and character needs to explore more. I am just concerned about her future. I am just waiting to read how is she going to escape from Tony and his dirty world.

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Answer : No dear . I guess we understand madhu's character completely .

But there is one request . plz let destiny save her frm d clutches of tony [ only if u hv planned to save her or story demands like dat ] . 😊 otherwise its completely upto u hw u make it.

PPPLLZZZ UPDATE SOON .

Hw i wish u cud give us part 2 of my fav os " The girl i always wanted to be " 😛😆

by writing my fav character rishabh's pov under d title " The guy /man i always wanted to be " 😛😆 so dat i cud stop cursing dat rishabh . Trust me im still into dat story n still angry wid dat rishabh sooo mmuucchhh.😆