FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 90

Originally posted by: Anntempleton

Awesome writing. Even my heart wrenched for madhu. Felt sad while reading but she is right she just hoped a lot from Rishab n it was Her fault to do so. Her house of cards is blown away!!
I felt very amazed while reading this part about how u expressed her emotions, from sadness, anger to realization of truth. I very much loved this update. Keep writing.
Will be waiting for next part. N finally thanks for the pm :)

Originally posted by: Kawan

this update chocked mt throat...
the way Madhu felt heartbroken was painful...

loved it

Originally posted by: aan-rish

A painful update Teekay

Madhu heard RK talking to Tony about her contract. Well , that moment was inevitable. I am glad that this moment came so soon, otherwise it would have difficult for Madhu to handle. Madhu thinks it was her fault to care for him and expecting him to save her from miseries. I agree with her. But it was Rishab's fault too. He did soften towards her and which gave her hope. Finally Madhu's anger for RK subsided. She is thinking clearly now, a strong women she is. Now I want Madhu to accept the truth and go back to Tony. If Madhu really wants to escape then she have to help herself. Why seeking RK's help? She can go to police her own and complaint against Tony or ask protection for Manav. RK is a broken man and confused also. I dont think he can help her. If he did, then I am sure unknowingly he will remind her always that she is a whl**. Sorry for this negative comment, its just that i am not in a gud mood

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Excellent part... as expected it is painful but i feel it is necessary and likely to happen... here both are in pain because they trusted ppl blindly... i thought madhu will be broken completely and her positivity towards life will be gone... no one can really understand her pain though we can just know what she is going through... but you have written it so well that we can actually relate especially those about phd,being teacher, wife,mother,lover... just cant explain how i felt reading that... just brilliant...

Hope is something which gives happiness when it is turned good and shatters ones soul when turns out be bad... but here madhu is not blaming RK she thinks it is because she had hoped for some happiness... i wonder what is she made of... like RK sais she is really very strong...

For RK he is a nice man but this decision of his i feel is wrong... she brought him out of his misery still he did that... may be there is something because he did madhu once he can handle that news...

He could have arranged something for her instead sending back...

All your updates are amazing but this one its exceptionally good... just too good...

Thnx for the pm... keep writing😊

Originally posted by: sanju1205

cant say any words from this update...
just i wanted to say that...
i m crying..

Originally posted by: madhurish

Oh my!! I m speechless!!

i couldnt control my tears.. As i had expected this part was way too heartwrencing... Oh god!! Madhu's fate is one hell of a crap!!

when u wrote this line "misery is a choice, So is happiness" I said in my comment that sometimes we dont get a choice & Its true in madhu's case. Misery is not even a choice but its scripted in her ill fate!!

the part where madhu asked why rk made her feel like d old madhu was still alive - i really cried hard while reading that para.

now i feel like rk could have been like a monster who madhu had met first... if he behaved so & Showed no kindness or been nice to her she wouldnt have digged out the hopes, trusts, & the old madhu which she had buried long back!!

even at this situation she is justifying his part & Not blaming him for anything but herself...she is outrageously unbelievable yaar...how could someone be like her?? i really wish she should have thrown d cup & Locked rk in his room & Ran out of his awful mansion screaming "i m a human, i have life to live on my own & I m not a slave to any son of a bitch & Not gonna lead a life of a wh**e anymore...if anyone cross my line be it tony or rk i would f**king kill them" & Seeked her freedom. May be its easy to say but i wish her to be even more stronger & dare to face d cruel world & win her life, her respect, her dignity, her hopes, her dreams...everything back!!

thank u so much for giving this outstandingly awesome update...

Originally posted by: madhurish

sorry, i dont know whether i shld comment here or not but i really want to express my pov, i agree with teekay, recently i read anhkahee & It was so emotional, heartwrencing, painful, u name it...but its not more than ILSAAM...I feel ilsaam is d first ever story i have read so painful...the pain what ilsaam madhu is going thru is way too strong than ankhahee's madhu. In that story i felt like two individuals rk & Madhu messed their lives with their own hands & Thats why they could mend it but here nothing is in their control, madhu is living a life of hell & So is rk's... Just see, a girl who wished to be a Professor is pushed to be a Prostitute...that itself say how painful her fate & This story is.

okay!! Be it ankhahee or you promised..or adrift or ilsaam..all r outrageously painful story written by our EMOTIONAL QUEEN WRITTEN Tk!!

i love all ur writings dear!! Keep it up!!,

Originally posted by: Umair001

Again sad when madhu problems end when????

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

okay now that my anger towards RK has vented out...

so.. I really need a good smacking.. why u ask?
well i read this story till 5th part and then something came up, maybe exams or something.. dont remember now.. and then I FORGOT!!! I forgot that i was reading this..

2 nights back i read The Girl I want to be.. and then i decided to check ur stories as I faintly remembered that i had read ur story earlier.. and then I found it again... Had read till part 20.. in a go.. woke up till 5 am.. 😆
but i didnt have the courage enough to write a comment after reading RK's last line.. i hated him so much... I was waiting and dreading ur next chap at the same time.. 🤣 🤣

GREAT WRITING SKILLS YOU HAVE!! 👏