FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 29

Originally posted by: madhurish

Hi dear. Read ur story "Aankhee" surprisingly in two days lol...well two sleepless nights, in travel, Lunck break everywhere i was with my mobile reading ur story. I couldnt stop anywhere..it was so amazing. Thanks to aan-rish for sending me d story link.

sorry i dont know why i could post my comment there so i m posting here...i some how want to give my credits & Appraisal to u for writing such a stupendous story.

its was conpletely an emotional story. I basically like emotional stories but at d end i do expect happy ending & This story gave me exactly what i wished for so loved it.

part 17 - 20 Was so so heartwrenching where u made me cry. During that break up part i was hell made at rk...madhu was literally begging him to give a chance but he behave so cold & Callous. For a minute i thought madhu deserves some gem like vikram. But deep down my heart said no its rishbala story, so look from rk's pov..he just confused but soon he will come around & He did. Then he stole my heart completely when madhu lost her parents & He became her strength & Took a big leap by marrying her & Keeping safe by his side.

d entire story was real & Practical, well that d speciality of ur stories.

u know what throughtout d story i didnt hate maya for coming in btw rishbala. Bcos she was also a nice character. She too cared for rk. Though she love him she didnt play any dirty tricks to separate rishbala. That was so wonderful. Thats y i felt she deserves forgiveness at d end.

vikram...mann...i seriously loved this guy. He was so understanding, he is such a sweetheart. Even ria & Rohan. All these people r a beautiful bunch of friends. I adore how they support each other & Went against their own friend when he committed mistake.

haha...in d entire story only at two places i laughed lol...one rk blackmailing dipali to convince her parent...

second, madhu hiding on terrace & These fools searched all over but missed to see terrace. That was one brilliant move my madhu lol..i dont why but these two places made me laugh & Remaining u know. Yep, i cried in many places...thats becos d way u have written u have expressed their feelings crystal clear.

i loved d face off btn vikram & Rk & So glad vikram helped rk in finding madhu realising her happiness is with madhu.

i was surprised when rk readily accepted d kid. But he has no other go. He had hardly convinced her & At that time no one will take d risk lol...

awe...seher, daddy'darling. Naughty & Demandig like dad hun? Cool!!

all is well that ends well...glad they all forgave maya & Again became friends forever & Also happy that vikram moved on & Found aarohi & Maya got her true love avinash. Perfect perfect!!

i felt the hero & The villain of the story is destiny!!

as u said yes, we curse destiny if it pushes us in bad situation but fail to thank destiny when it gives what we have desired...

i so loved d prologue from destiny's pov. I was so unique & Wonderful.

thoroughly enjoyed reading a fabulous story aankhee.

u r an excellent writer dear.

bravo!!

p.s i wish i had followed the story right from d beginning & Commented on every single update. Now i felt like i cheated u by taking u effort & Enjoying it so much & Leaving one single comment...sorry...but i have hit d like button in all d 42 updates + Epilogue...

thank u so much for giving this awesome story to read dear.

love,

sudha

Originally posted by: madhurish

Hi dear. Read ur story "Aankhee" surprisingly in two days lol...well two sleepless nights, in travel, Lunck break everywhere i was with my mobile reading ur story. I couldnt stop anywhere..it was so amazing. Thanks to aan-rish for sending me d story link.

sorry i dont know why i couldnt post my comment there in d story thread so i m posting here...i some how want to give my credits & Appraisal to u for writing such a stupendous story.

its was completely an emotional story. I basically like emotional stories but at d end i do expect happy ending & This story gave me exactly what i wished for so loved it.

part 17 - 20 Was so so heartwrenching where u made me cry. During that break up part i was hell mad at rk...madhu was literally begging him to give a chance but he behaved so cold & Callous. For a minute i thought madhu deserves some gem like vikram. But deep down my heart said no its rishbala story, so i looked from rk's pov..he just was confused & Not sure abt his feelings but thought soon he will come around & He did. Then he stole my heart completely when madhu lost her parents & He became her strength & Took a big leap by marrying her & Keeping safe by his side. That was so lovely.

d entire story was real & Practical, well that d speciality of ur stories.

u know what throughtout d story i didnt hate maya for coming in btw rishbala. Bcos she was also a nice character. She too cared for rk. Though she loved him she didnt play any dirty tricks to separate rishbala. That was so wonderful. Thats y i felt she deserves forgiveness at d end.

vikram...mann...i seriously loved this guy. He was so understanding, he is such a sweetheart. Even ria & Rohan. All these people r a beautiful bunch of friends. I adore how they support each other & Went against their own friend when he committed mistake.

haha...in d entire story only at two places i laughed lol...one rk blackmailing dipali to convince her parent...

second, madhu hiding on terrace & These fools searched all over but missed to see terrace. That was one brilliant move my madhu lol..i dont why but these two places made me laugh & Remaining u know. Yep, i cried in many places...thats becos d way u have written u have expressed their feelings crystal clear.

i loved d face off btn vikram & Rk & So glad vikram helped rk in finding madhu realising her happiness is with madhu.

i was surprised when rk readily accepted d kid. But he has no other go. He had hardly convinced her & At that time no one will take d risk lol...

awe...seher, daddy'darling. Naughty & Demandig like dad hun? Cool!!

all is well that ends well...glad they all forgave maya & Again became friends forever & Also happy that vikram moved on & Found aarohi & Maya got her true love avinash. Perfect perfect!!

i felt the hero & The villain of the story is destiny!!

as u said yes, we curse destiny if it pushes us in bad situation but fail to thank destiny when it gives what we have desired...

i so loved d prologue from destiny's pov. I was so unique & Wonderful.

thoroughly enjoyed reading a fabulous story aankhee.

u r an excellent writer dear.

bravo!!

p.s i wish i had followed the story right from d beginning & Commented on every single update. Now i felt like i cheated u by taking ur effort & Enjoying it so much & Leaving one single comment...sorry...but i have hit d like button in all d 42 updates + Epilogue...

thank u so much for giving this awesome story to read dear.

love,

sudha

Originally posted by: aan-rish

@sudha -congrats dear you completed the story in two days. Did u read comments also. Anyways you missed the joy of bashing Rishab with us first time itself. I enjoyed bashing Rishab of Ankahee for his every single mistakes😆 Ankahee Is my all time favorite ⭐️