Rishabala SS: Haunted House Part 5 on Page 1 (25/07)

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome start...very interesting..do update soon..

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

yuhoo...super interesting...ghost story...n rk is the ghost😆...wow its gonna be a love story between human n ghost😲...plz tell me it does not have sad ending😕

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Kuku u know how phatttu i am wen it comes to ghost story or movie...
movie ko toh mute karke dekh sakte hai...bt story...hahahah🤔

wit total silent and in dark i love to read stories in my room...bt wen i started reading nd dat initial parts...
saala maine lights nd music on kar diya...🤣
seriously...who loves to go nd leave in haunted house...Mallik seriously...
was so excited...
nd wat ...Rk ko ghost bana diya...😲
ab yeh bhoot aur insaan ka love story kaisa hoga..my Rishbala😳😆

so curious for next part...
nd yeh heart transplant nd bhoot ...
cant wait...
already liked all next parts...😆
jaldi please...
ll be waitin

PS...Even i dont believe in Ghost...hehehehhehe😆😆😉

Edited by Desire6 - 11 years ago

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

awesome update 😉

finally you posted your this story i have seen that name on the list of your work you send😳

and in pm when i saw the name i was like

i love it ghost stories ...must say i believed in ghost 😳 seems interesting 😃

through out the update i was wishing that that ghost must not be Rk ...but in end you bust my bubble ,,,,now how they live happily ever after

never mind its fun to imagine him as ghost ...hot ghost 😆😉

.who loves to live in haunted house...Malik is mad...he was so excited...

plzzz update soon i m waiting 😃😳

Edited by mahimesha - 11 years ago

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swpna

@swpna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

interesting story..
liked it..
first time reading a ghost story..

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DVDfann

@DVDfann

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

First of all thanks alot for writing a ghost story. I love to read paranormal stories :) Very happy to read the story, that too written by my fav writer.

Very interesting update. Since malik explained ghost can be contacted by their children, I though the ghost child would be RK. So both will meet, Madhu will help the ghost to reach mukti and RK & madhu will fall for each other, since madhu helped RK parent ( ghost ) He will think madhu powers as a gift ( as told by malik ). While reading the update this is wat I expected. but in last 2 lines it just blow off 😆

RK is the ghost Eagerly waiting for the next parts.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by DVDfann - 11 years ago

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Brilliant start Lazu!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

RK IS A GHOST😕

GREAT START BUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN MADHU FALLS FOR A GHOST

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Mindblowinggg Start...Outstanding concept Lazy dear...i just loved it specaily Malik nd madhu talk about ghost sooo muchhh...Sooo Excited 4 next part...plzzz Continue sooon...

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alina.b

@alina.b

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Horror story! Nice! Something new! I actually got scared because I was reading this and my window was open then suddenly a huge draft came and my blinds were making loud noise lol

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