Rishbala OS:~In Love With My Destroyer~

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Rishbala OS:~In Love With My Destroyer~
@readers plzz this is a sensitive issue i know..dont take it negatively...


He shouted"commando, take this Persons who were trying to cross our border.keep them home arrested n ask them what r they planning to do?" a girl dared to come infront of him n said"why don't u understand we just came to see our dadi who lives in india.all r not terrorist from other countries".a man came forward to beat her saying"how dare u woman!".rishabh held his arms n said"u leave her.i wud explain her.".he turned to her n said"its our duty to check everyone.whether he or she is a terrorist or not.its for our country's safety".she nodded.

Madhu n her sister were in captive under the protection of the indian army..she had told him that she was coming in india to meet her appi..he never believed any people from outside foreign as he hated them..he detested them..but there was sumthing in the girl named madhubala..her innocence was shone in her eyes..it reminded him of someone else who reminded him of his past..the dark pain..which he never wanted to remember he just wanted to stay away from this madhubala

Here madhubala looked from her tent towards rishabh..she said to her sister nafisa"the man is a good person..inspite of suspecting us..he behaved with us properly".nafisa fumingly said"appi , he is good then he wud have left us..not kept us captive..he wud have left us to meet our appi".madhusaid"nafisa, understand it's the matter of their mulk..we shud understand it.."nafisa got angry n fumed away..madhubala kept on looking at rishabh..she thought there was some unknown pain in this man's eyes..she wondered why intrigued her?..the moment she saw him sumthing stirred in her..she cannt stop looking at him or thinking abt him..

After sometime, she heard the bomb blasts sound..she got frightened..she went out to see what was happening..she saw rishabh fighting ..there were bombs n attacks from all the side..she went out to ask rishabh abt what was happening there?she remembered nafisa to went outside..she wanted to ask abt her also to him..she moved towards rishabh..saw her coming towards him..he screamed to her"why r u cuming here?"..she screamed n said"nafisa, my sister too went out.."..he grabbed her n bent down..they saw a bullet just passed near to them..she thanked her stars n looked at rishabh..she saw that they were very close to each other..while she was aware of their proximity, but rishabh was unaware of it..he was looking everywhere to ensure her protection..

The attack was over..she saw rishabh came with wounds..itpained her to see him in pain..she rushed to him n held his hands to do apply some medicines..but he shrugged her n said"I don't need ur help"..she grabbed his arm furiously n said"u need medicines to apply..soo I m applying it..just shut up n sit.."he didn't say anything to her..he just turned his face n kept his face stern..she looked at him n smiled at him..after applying the medicines, she left the to her room..after some time, a soldier informed her that nafisa is safe..she is in other place..as they cudnt take her here as still the attack was going on..she looked at the clear sky n remembered the day events of her with rishabh..she thought he was a good man..she closed her eyes n saw a glimpse of rishabh smiling at her..she opened her eyes with a shock..she remembered her ammi say whenever u fall in love with a person..u wud see that person even with ur closed eyes..does she love rishabh?..with the happy thoughts of rishabh n her..she drifted to sleep..

She woke up with a startle..she saw druken rishabh enter her room..she saw him n tushed to her..she asked"what r u doing here rishu"..as soon as he heard rishu from her lips..he remembered someone who was dear to him but who betrayed him brutally..he remembered his sister shouting for help to save her dignity but he lied there down unconscious coz of the drug given by his love..while the bas***d was raping her sister brutally..his love was seeing the scene n laughing at him..after destroying his sister, he came n took his love in his arms..they both had sex infront of him..while he n his sister were lying down..after commiting their act ..the bas***d saw his sister..he brutally beat her n killed her n mumbled"Hindustani logo ka yehi anjaam hoga.."

His love decked in blanket came infront n asked"what did u think ?i loved u...noo..we r here to take revenge with Indians..i acted to u..soo that I cud destroy u.."then they both laughed..rishabh cud imagine his love in madhu..he wanted revenge from her for his sister..he hated her..he wanted to destroy her..he wanted to see her in pain..he forgot that the girl infront of her was madhubala..he dragged her..while madhu shouted"rishabh..what r u doing? Leave me"..rishabh was soo drunk that he grabbed her n kissed her furiously n hungrily..she whimpered..he slammed her on the bed n released a dragged breath n tore of madhubala's dress..she shouted n screamed..but not knowing it was madhubala not his past love..he got satisfied with her pain n shouts..he felt as if he took revenge for his sister's dead soul..while madhu cried n whimpered but later gave in to him..rishabh fell asleep in drunken stupor..

He got up in the morning with his head heavy..he sighed loudly..he held his forehead in pain..he closed his eyes..then he remembered everything in Technicolor..he felt disgusted by himself..he had did the same thing which destroyed his sister's life to someone else's sister...he wanted to say sorry to madhu..but he cannt face her after his deed..he saw her coming with a glass of lemon juice in her hand..she handed it over to rishabh silently..she was abt to go..he held her..she flinched in his touch..he said"I m sorry..i didn't do it purposely but I know rape is rape..i thought u as someone else.."she immediately turned"to whom?"he said"I cannt say"..she said"u ruined my life..n u don't wanna say whom u thought me as.."he looked at her n saw her pain..he said"I thought u as dipali whom I loved..she was too a Pakistani..in the war, I saved her from the attack..i gradually fell in love with her..i had a terrorist khalid in my captive..i didn't knew her love was fake..she was not loving me..she was a terrorist who came to rescue Khalid..they both rescued themselves n made me unconscious..to take revenge to me..he .."madhu saw his pain n consoled him.he sid"he raped my sister infront of my eyes...dipali n Khalid made love infront of him.."he shouted"they killed my sister infront of me..while I laid there unconscious by the drug injected by them.."he sobbed n hugged her n said"I lost my everything coz of a stupid thing called love"..madhu forgot her pain..she hugged him close to console him out of his pain

Madhu went to her room..while her sister nafisa arrived n hugged her ..she said"appi I missed u soo much"..she just smiled at her sister..nafis asked"how did u sleep alone appi, u get scared naa?"..immediately remembered all the night events..a lone tear escaped from her eyes..while nafisa kept talking..she thought that he was a monster the previous night..but she cudnt hate him..she loved him..it was not sympathy which drove her to him..they way he hugged her today..she felt a sensational feeling..but she cudnt forget the nightmare..from that day, madhu remained aloof but she was there for him..rishabh too felt someone in his life after years..he was genuinely happy..but he was still guilty abt the thing he did with her..the investigation on them was over..madhubala n nafisa were proved innocent n they were free to move anywhere..madhun nafisa packed their stuff..madhu was expecting rishabh to her sent off..but she wanted to see him atleast once before she leaves..

She entered his room..she saw him holding a pic of a girl..he turned n saw madhu.he whispered"my sister trishna..u know"...she said"I know.." he kept looking at the pic without looking at her..she said"I m going.."..he whispered "everyone leave me in the middle of my life.."she heard it n saw him..a lone tear escaped from his eyes..but she cudnt give him a chance after what he has done to her..but she cudnt see her pain too..she loved him as she hated him too..but she cannt leave him now..he has faced a lot in his life..n moreover whatever he did to her was not purposely..he too was living in a nightmare n she too was living in a nightmare..he kept looking at her for her answer..she knew what she wanted..she rushed in his arms n said"I need u"..she kept her palms on his chest n said"we will come out of our dark past naa"..he kept her close to him n nodded his head ..she said"we will live happily naa..we wud make sure we wud be always happy naa.."..he kissed her forehead n said"always"

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey m first... good writing😊
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Diidi fantastic work 👏 I felt like reading more of them
I love military stories and this was a different one didi 😳
Edited by ferii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb one yaa... Fab Shot!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww poor rk i really felt bad for him. Different concept i liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful story...felt bad for RK...whatever happened with him was horrible & so painful...He was living a nightmare & madhu came in his life to free him from his dark past & to move on although it happened in a very painful & unexpected way...I loved that at the end both of the wounded souls sought warmth & protection of each others arms ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i must say i loved it 😃

awesome os ...i would be happy if it would be little long

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic , Fabulous and amazing os with different story🤗
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hey superb os dear...
loved ur concept too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was an amazing OS
loved it😳👏

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