Rishbala SS- Kurbaan Hua(Last Part Page 45)|(26/05/15)

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Hi friends...had this idea for a long time so thought to write a new ss on it..can't give guaranty about the quality...this story will take time to be updated as I have only written 1 part...it will take a bit time to shape up... and yes I may even discontinue it as the show inspires me to write and right now, there's nothing inspiring in the show..so...here goes the prologue...
(Love the song so this title..don't know whether it goes with the story or not)



Kurbaan Hua- Prologue

Superstar RK looked around the room which was beautifully decorated for his suhaagraat. He should have felt happy for marrying his lady love Madhubala Malik but what he felt right now was immense hatred for her. He threw all the decorations on the floor andsat down. Here, oblivious to everything, his wife was in the washroom humming her favourite song. He felt like a knife stabbed him. He hated himself... he hated himself for hating her inspite of his love for her and he hated himself for loving her inspite of what she did to him.
And here Madhubala, the superstar of this night, was singing happily...she felt like the happiest person of this world. She had achieved, what she wanted to.

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Index
Prologue - Page 1
Part 1 - Page 5
Part 2 - Page 10
Part 3 - Page 14
Part 4 - Page 19
Part 5 - Page 24
Part 6 - Page 29
Part 7 - Page 33
Part 8 - Page 38
Part 9 - Page 45
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh nice and interesting start dear 😛 ⭐️
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interesting start dear!!👍🏼
continue soon!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start dear 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start Rimjhim! please continue...pm me!
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congrats on your new story
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Nice cont soon n pls dont discontinue it
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Interesting, cont soon...
Yr i am not reading reborn as of now as i have missed quite a few chapters in b/w...
But i'll be following this ss from start... 😊

Thanks for the PM's...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very promising start Rimu dear!! I loved it!! So, Madhu is gonna be the dominating one here for starting!! Good one!! Do continue!!!

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