Rishabala Three Shots: Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera: Part 3 on Page 26 (24/07)

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Supriyaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

nicely shown how love can change a person
👏 superb

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Momi

@momi78

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

What a fabulous ending! Can you please write an epilogue? I want to read about Malik giving away his daughter to RK ... and some SR funny moments (since they are doing "it" after so many years) ☺️ Loved the gun cleaning part ... and RK's masi is only 10 years older to him!! That father-son duo has some libido!!! 😃😉

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

This was the most unusual RK-trishna of ur stories... 🤣 trishna is in RK's arms... like literally baby sister...
Doesnt mohan-meera have too much age gap? Well that happens...
I wish Madhu had let RK tell them in the beginnibg only... it wont habr become so setious..
I could totally connect with the story...
And i liked Malik-RK in the end...
And RK holdibg back fr her from bursting out... was very touchy...
Loved it...
Awesome

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

omg
rk.got a baby sister n last line cracked me up
rk happened rofl
no one can be spared frm rks charm ahannn
superb end
it was awesome

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Haha nice end...lazy u are fabb writer...update was good.. More than RK I feel madhu was the psycho one in the story lol..😆

Edited by cool_sri - 11 years ago

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

🤣 End was superb what happened? Rishu happened...

he he he Malik pe bhi RK ka pagalpan chad gaya.

Ishu ai... and Haahi... was cute.

Lovely part and awesome ending loved it

Thanks a lot and keep it up. 🤗

Edited by beautiful_heart - 11 years ago