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SpotlighT

@Spot_lighT

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

awesome update..u r such an amazing writer. 😊

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

really awesomeee update dear but wanted a perfct ending for waiting so long but still I love thus story a lotsss!!!!

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mishty1996

@mishty1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Very good ending lazy...

Bt the trishna part was hilarous...

I was imagining trishna in rk's arms!! 😆 😆 😆

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Wat an ending Kuku...
Rk happened...[lol]

Jus love dis Roller coaster...
mallik at times was hilarious..specially dat gun part🤣
bt in all der pure love won agaist all odds...
Trishna...🤣
wen i read..tribshna n Rks arm...for a sec i was shockd...
hehe...🤣
lovly kuku ..do write more..

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

1st thing to mention - " adam & eve" dear u completely cracked me! i stopped reading & started rolfing like a mad for 2 mins but i dont know y?🤣

2nd - pls pls dont say this ending is disastrous, i feel its outstandingly awesome & i'm sure all ur readers will feel d same!😳

3rd - i seriouly wonder how he kept his promise for so many years when padmini said to bring their parent tomrw but rk was desperate to bring today itself! he was so desperate to take his biwi with him then & there!!! but i liked how he respected her parents & kept his words!😆

4th - rk talking back to his dad & accepting meera as his maasi!! that was quite nice!😛

5th - oh gosh! malik & his revolver threat lol!! he is also a bada wala psych in this story lol!!😆

6th - i cant believe mohan did it at this age😲 i thought they will adopt a baby but okay meera is still young, she just 33 so quite acceptable!😳 so soon trishna will be playing with adam & eve! lol!😆

7th - my fav bro - sis combo here two! but very li'l li'l sis to rk!! for a sec i cant think rk carrying a baby trish in his arms, i thought something else lol!!😆

8th- finally winning malik's trust & whole heartedly accepting this psycho as his SIL & ready to give his psycho daughter to him was cool!!😳

over all its a complete package of love, lust, trust, fun, care, emotional drama & madness!!👏 i loved it!!😛 thank u so much for give yet a different & wonderful story to us!!🤗

Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Superb ending di n it was not disastrous 👏

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Grishu30

@Grishu30

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

ohhh...i loved d little Trishna...n specially those cute words..'Haahi n Ishu aai'..superb update lazy..thanx fr giving such a lenthy one..i kno it must b very diff fr u..

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Awesome!!!!

RK was in his old form but has become understanding thanks to madhu...n cute addition to d family...superb!!!!

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

loved the end as well as the story

both were crazy and absolutely suited each other

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Ni33

@Ni33

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Intresting ending. 😊 The way you described Shamsher Malik in this last part made me think that Madhu perhaps fell in love with RK because of the possessiveness her father has of her resembles the possessiveness that RK has for her. 😆

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