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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Congratulations for the thread... 👏
Nice Concept...
I'll try but I am lacking in ideas currently... Can't write fiction at all...
But I'll try!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriyakadge

Hey guys

As u knw ...the previous thread failed due to some problems
so i m posting the story which was written there here again with some small corrections in the story ...
the next person who comment after me is requested 2 continue the scene from the point where i stop ...also plz all quote the scene which is above ur comment ...this will make it easier

The story so far::

:::The begining:::

Continuation from the scene of 23rd November 2012...

Madhu hugged RK tightly "You also love me, isn't it...Please don't say no..." and looked at him expectantly. RK parted from her and looked with a serious expression and then said, "No...Madhu...I don't love you...yet . Yes I care for u but I do not love u yet . I like u too . U r so different from me . "

Hearing this Madhu was totally shocked while Hearing Madhu's words, RK was left speechless.

He was baffled by the revelation and didnt know how to react, all he could see were her gorgoues doe eyes which had been pleading him, begging him to be loved, hoping that he felt the same about her.
Not knowing how or what to say, RK left the room in an instant.

Madhu sat on the floor suppressing her sobs. She got rejected by RK right on her face...could anything be worse than this??

She kept on thinking why he walked away without saying a single word, the more she thought about it, the more it hurt..
RK had left her hanging, and she didnt know what else to do but feel like a complete and utter idiot for spilling her heart and soul infront of him !

Suddenly she heard footsteps at the door. Thinking it to be RK she quickly got up and wiped away her tears roughly.

"Bhabhijee???"

Seeing BittuJi standing out the door instead of RK, she wiped away her tears.
"BittuJi, whats wrong?" "Bhabhijee, chief..."
*BittuJi starts Crying*

"Rk? What Rk bittuji? Is he fine? where is Rk bittuji?" MAdhu was completely shocked seeing bittuji crying.

"Bhabhi...chief...chief met wid n accident"

Madhu's world stopped.. She felt numb.. She couldn't think anything straight.. She was blank!
Bittuji's words brought her back to her senses
Bittuji "BHABHIJI!!"
Madhu looks at himand looks at the door and just rushes out without a word while Bittuji kept calling her from behind..

bittuji ran behind madhu and finally managed to stop her near the entrance.

"Wait bhabhiji ...were r u going?" he asked panting.

"Bittuji...i want to see my Rk...where is he bittuji? please take me to him please." MAdhu was crying badly.

Bittuji noticed that madhu was crying for his chief for the very first time and without any delay he said " he is in the hospital bhabhiji...came with me." And he led her towards the car

Madhu follows Bittuji and sits in the car..
Bittuji tells the driver to take them to the place..
Bittuji was looking at Madhu who was crying all the time hugging one picture of RK!
The car stops and Madhu gets down and is shocked by what she sees!!
The driver takes Bittuji back home..
Madhu was standing in front of an entrance which was totally decorated

She sees RK and Dipali laughing together.

Madhu runs to him - RK are you fine? Bittuji.. Bittuji..said you had an accident??
RK laughs - You think superstar RK will Love You.. You? It was all just a drama to break your heart

madhu was shocked beyond belief ! she couldnt believe her ears ...was what she heard right ? Rk ...wat he did was just a drama ? no ...this ...this cant be true ...she broke down completely
RK why r you joking, Look m serious and I DON'T like such jokes."

suddenly her expression changes and she said

if you can play a game mee too can

wat did u think huh ? if u can play wid my life evn i can ...did u seriously think i started loving u ? seriously ? i mean just think ...u destroyed my life ...n out of all people in d world i would fall in love wid u ? ha ! tht would b a joke

if you are superstar then i also played a role of superstart's wife

bittuji oh dont look shocked this was my game

Rk was shocked beyond beleif...madhu ? her thoughts were so pure ...how could this even cross her mind ? he tried to control his feelings ...coz all this was for her own sake ...he couldnt tell her in any way that he had cancer ...she is leaving ...let her leave by her own wish

madhu turned back and started moving with a rage their were tears in her eyes

if she is sad then why she replied like that to r.k.

rk saw madhu turning her back towards him ...he wanted to stop her ...he wanted to hold her hand and warn her never to leave him again ...but he couldnt do that ...he couldnt be selfish this time ...he loved her ...n the best thing was to let her free ...but by doing this he felt as if a boulder had smashed his heart

As soon as madhu left from there Rk broke down on his knees ...he was completely shattered ...he loved her so much ...didnt she love him ...ever ? he was already missing her ...he felt as if the sand in his hands was slipping away ...n he could do nothing except regretting ovr his past deeds

Bittuji went behind his bhabhiji he wanted an explanation..

"Bhabhiji ! " he called out

madhu stopped hearing that

"How could u do that bhab...no ...u r no more my bhabhiji ...madhubaala ,,,,how could u do that huh ? "

" Do wat bittuji ? i beleive in tit for tat ...n i just gave him wat he deserved ...this is wat he desreves "

she said trying to hide the turmoil inside her heart



The people who contributed to the above story were me, rimmi di ( rg0782 ) sparrow di ( JsparrowJ) Piyu di (drashtifan1) Stephine di (-StephinesS-) sorry if i missed any ones name

I think I had also written some lines on the previous thread.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome' idea let me also try
Edited by AzraZaidi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriyakadge

but saying tht to him wasnt her plan...she loved him, but ...she couldnt let him win once again ...she wouldnt let him knw tht she was broken ...instead she wanted to stand up raising her head high in front of him...to show tht she won this time ...but deep inside her heart ...she knew ...she had lost ...



Madhu was feeling shattered , she was not able to see the hatred for her in the eyes of bittuji . Bittuji was like a elder brother to her.

She had no explaination to give to bittuji, she couldn't let Rk win so she said what came to her mind .

Deepali was the most happiest person when Rk called her and when Rk broke madhus heart, she was on the seventh sky .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Post 👍🏼
Will surely take part😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AzraZaidi


Madhu was feeling shattered , she was not able to see the hatred for her in the eyes of bittuji . Bittuji was like a elder brother to her.

She had no explaination to give to bittuji, she couldn't let Rk win so she said what came to her mind .

Deepali was the most happiest person when Rk called her and when Rk broke madhus heart, she was on the seventh sky .


But little had she expected RK, her hero as she called him, shatter down like this! Never really had she seen a defeated man and she had never expected 'Her Hero' to be broken to this extend that he would be crying and that too over that chaal-filth...Madhubala!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane


But little had she expected RK, her hero as she called him, shatter down like this! Never really had she seen a defeated man and she had never expected 'Her Hero' to be broken to this extend that he would be crying and that too over that chaal-filth...Madhubala!

That was when Rk thought about dipali who was standing...No he dnt want show his weakness to anyone especially to her...He stood up and started walking back to home or must he say a building where his madhu will not be dere anymore
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: revti21

That was when Rk thought about dipali who was standing...No he dnt want show his weakness to anyone especially to her...He stood up and started walking back to home or must he say a building where his madhu will not be dere anymore

at R.K. mansion radhaji was pacing here n there...she was worried coz madhu left without answering her
as she sees r.k. she ran towards him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

I think I had also written some lines on the previous thread.

Sorry shreyadi...will ask Shriya to add your name also!! dont mind hun...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JsparrowJ

at R.K. mansion radhaji was pacing here n there...she was worried coz madhu left without answering her
as she sees r.k. she ran towards him...

R- Rishu, what happened to Madhu?? Where did she go?? Do you know anything???
RK looked at her and went away without speaking a word. In his bedroom, he sat on the couch and remembered all the moments he spent with Madhu, those lovely moments, which were now just memories...

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