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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
thanks for making a new thread
as the previous one would become too messy
after everyone added their contributions
do one thing
as the story progresses keep on adding editing it here
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Posted: 11 years ago
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will add my bit soon
this is becoming a superb story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u for this effort rimjhim
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

thank u for this effort rimjhim

ur welcm dear...and thank you for participating..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story so far...I made a few changes like adding punctuation marks...continue after this...😃

:::The begining:::

Continuation from the scene of 23rd November 2012...

Madhu hugged RK tightly "You also love me, isn't it...Please don't say no..." and looked at him expectantly. RK parted from her and looked with a serious expression and then said, "No...Madhu...I don't love you...yet . Yes I care for u but I do not love u yet . I like u too . U r so different from me . "

Hearing this Madhu was totally shocked while Hearing Madhu's words, RK was left speechless.

He was baffled by the revelation and didn't know how to react, all he could see were her gorgeous doe eyes which had been pleading him, begging him to be loved, hoping that he felt the same about her.
Not knowing how or what to say, RK left the room in an instant.

Madhu sat on the floor suppressing her sobs. She got rejected by RK right on her face...could anything be worse than this??

She kept on thinking why he walked away without saying a single word, the more she thought about it, the more it hurt..
RK had left her hanging, and she didn't know what else to do but feel like a complete and utter idiot for spilling her heart and soul in front of him !

Suddenly she heard footsteps at the door. Thinking it to be RK she quickly got up and wiped away her tears roughly.

"Bhabhijee???"

Seeing BittuJi standing out the door instead of RK, she wiped away her tears.
"BittuJi, whats wrong?" "Bhabhijee, chief..."
*BittuJi starts Crying*

"Rk? What RK bittuji? Is he fine? where is RK bittuji?" Madhu was completely shocked seeing bittuji crying.

"Bhabhi...chief...chief met wid n accident"

Madhu's world stopped.. She felt numb.. She couldn't think anything straight.. She was blank!
Bittuji's words brought her back to her senses
Bittuji "BHABHIJI!!"
Madhu looks at him and looks at the door and just rushes out without a word while Bittuji kept calling her from behind..

Bittuji ran behind Madhu and finally managed to stop her near the entrance.

"Wait Bhabhiji ...where are you going?" he asked panting.

"Bittuji...I want to see my RK...where is he Bittuji? please take me to him please." Madhu was crying badly.

Bittuji noticed that Madhu was crying for his chief for the very first time and without any delay he said " he is in the hospital bhabhiji...came with me." And he led her towards the car

Madhu follows Bittuji and sits in the car..
Bittuji tells the driver to take them to the place..
Bittuji was looking at Madhu who was crying all the time hugging one picture of RK!
The car stops and Madhu gets down and is shocked by what she sees!!
The driver takes Bittuji back home..
Madhu was standing in front of an entrance which was totally decorated

She sees RK and Dipali laughing together.

Madhu runs to him - RK are you fine? Bittuji.. Bittuji..said you had an accident??
RK laughs - You think superstar RK will Love You.. You? It was all just a drama to break your heart

Madhu was shocked beyond belief ! She couldn't believe her ears ...was what she heard right ? RK ...what he did was just a drama ? no ...this ...this cant be true ...she broke down completely.
"RK why r you joking, Look I am serious and I DON'T like such jokes."


Suddenly her expression changes and she said, "If you can play a game I too can..."

"What did you think huh ? If you can play with my life even I can ...did you seriously think I started loving you ? Seriously ? I mean just think ...you destroyed my life ...and out of all people in the world I would fall in love with you ? Ha ! that would be a joke. If you are superstar then I also played the role of a superstar's wife.

Seeing Bittujee looking at her in shock, she smirked, "Bittuji, oh don't look shocked ...this was my game..."

Rk was shocked beyond believe...Madhu ? her thoughts were so pure ...how could this even cross her mind ? He tried to control his feelings ...because all this was for her own sake ...he couldn't tell her in any way that he had cancer ...she is leaving ...let her leave by her own wish.

Madhu turned back and started moving with a rage. There were tears in her eyes. If she is sad then why she replied like that to RK.

RK saw Madhu turning her back towards him ...he wanted to stop her ...he wanted to hold her hand and warn her never to leave him again ...but he couldn't do that ...he couldn't be selfish this time ...he loved her ...n the best thing was to let her free ...but by doing this he felt as if a boulder had smashed his heart

As soon as Madhu left from there RK broke down on his knees ...he was completely shattered ...he loved her so much ...dint she love him ...ever ? he was already missing her ...he felt as if the sand in his hands was slipping away ...n he could do nothing except regretting over his past deeds.

Bittuji went behind his Bhabhiji, he wanted an explanation.

"Bhabhiji!" he called out. Madhu stopped hearing that.

"How could you do that bhab...no...u r no more my bhabhiji ...Madhubala ,,,,how could you do that huh ? "

" Do what Bittuji?I believe in tit for tat ...and I just gave him what he deserved ...this is what he deserves,"she said trying to hide the turmoil inside her heart.

Bittuji stared at her. His hands turned into fists. His eyes were red with anger .
"You are not the same girl I knew ." He said that amd went back to console his chief.
Madhu fell down to her knees.
"Life changes just in a second." She thought and chuckled humourlessly. In a moment, RK rejected her love, gave her a heartbreak and she returned it, or should she say, acted to return it??
But saying that to him wasn't her plan...she loved him, but ...she couldn't let him win once again ...she wouldn't let him know that she was broken ...instead she wanted to stand up raising her head high in front of him...to show that she won this time ...but deep inside her heart ...she knew ...she had lost ...
Madhu was feeling shattered , she was not able to see the hatred for her in the eyes of Bittuji . Bittuji was like a elder brother to her.

She had no explanation to give to Bittuji, she couldn't let RK win so she said what came to her mind .

Deepali was the most happiest person when RK called her and when RK broke Madhu's heart, she was on the seventh sky .
But little had she expected RK, her hero as she called him, shatter down like this! Never really had she seen a defeated man and she had never expected 'Her Hero' to be broken to this extend that he would be crying and that too over that chawl-filth...Madhubala!

That was when RK thought about Deepali who was standing...No he don't want show his weakness to anyone especially to her...He stood up and started walking back to home or should he say a building where his Madhu will not be there anymore.
At R.K. mansion Radhaji was pacing here n there...she was worried Madhu left without answering her. As she sees RK she ran towards him...
R- Rishu, what happened to Madhu?? Where did she go?? Do you know anything???
RK looked at her and went away without speaking a word. In his bedroom, he sat on the couch and remembered all the moments he spent with Madhu, those lovely moments, which were now just memories...

Do continue after this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
okee so after that
on the other side bittuji's questioning eyes were looking at madhu she finally spoke out "whatever i did..and whatever you seen was true ..i dont have any explaination to give...not even a single word to say...i just only want you to go to your cheif as his ego is broken today he might need you"
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: JsparrowJ

okee so after that

on the other side bittuji's questioning eyes were looking at Madhu she finally spoke out "whatever I id..and whatever you seen was true ..I don't have any explanation to give...not even a single word to say...i just only want you to go to your chief as his ego is broken today he might need you"



Bittujee could sense that something is wrong...his Bhabhijee can't do this..and why the hell did chief say all that?? He was getting confused badly...somehthing is wrong and he needs to find it out. He left from there to check on his Chief..
Edited by rg0782 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey I m back from skool...I just wanted to say sorry 2 shreya di ...I m really sorry di ...I dont knw how ur name slipped from my mind ...I was actually in a hurry 2 pack my bagfor skool n so I typed it all really fast ...n I missed ur name ...I m really sorry for tht :'(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rg0782



Bittujee could sense that something is wrong...his Bhabhijee can't do this..and why the hell did chief say all that?? He was getting confused badly...somehthing is wrong and he needs to find it out. He left from there to check on his Chief..

he reached rk mansion n immediately rushed 2 rk's bedroom ...he saw him thrr sitting on the floor with a bottle of vodka in his hand ...his eyes were completely red with pain ...he looked broken ...bittuji couldn't stop himself from crying ...
"Chief" he said with great difficulty ...rk looked up at bittuji's direction and a tear dropped from his eye
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriyakadge

he reached rk mansion n immediately rushed 2 rk's bedroom ...he saw him thrr sitting on the floor with a bottle of vodka in his hand ...his eyes were completely red with pain ...he looked broken ...bittuji couldn't stop himself from crying ...

"Chief" he said with great difficulty ...rk looked up at bittuji's direction and a tear dropped from his eye

Bittujee gulped his tears and sat beside RK, "Chief, why did you do this...why??"
RK gave a painful smile, "Bittujee, I didn't do anything, its just that I don't love that Madhubala..she is not even of my standard...how could she think that I would fall for her??"

p.s.: Shriya dear please write the full words... 2- to/too thr- there...pls sweety...😊

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