OS - THE RETURN OF SUPERSTAR RIGHT KAMEENA

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is written by NEHAVDIAN my friend..she had some problems soo asked me to post it..here it is

OS - THE RETURN OF SUPERSTAR RIGHT KAMEENA

It is believe that when a man loves he gives away his heart but when he hates he takes away everyones heart . This is wat happened with RAJA KHUSHWAH now popularly known as THE RK , leading superstar of bollywood. life has been a biggest pain for him in which he cant live neithher die . It has been three years since he got to knew the truth of his evil family , the family for whom he cld even die but no they didnt deserve that respect they only deserved his hatred n curses . His dauji whom he believed to be his god snatched his parents frm him for his selfish motives joining hands with his jeeje bhanu. they both killed his parents n destroyed his whole living being n then for properties they even tried to kill him but god was kind enough that meenakshi teacher saved him but again destiny played a game with him , he became mentally challenged n the so called superstar abhay kapoor used him as a bait to revenge madhubala . That was the name which showed him the meaning of love n care , madhubala became his forceful wife but she became the love of his life for whom he cld have killed anyone n possibly he cld die too but it was just like a beautiful dream which ended the day he got his senses back n became RAJA frm Raju .
The transformation to his real self became the biggest pain of his life bcoz the girl for whom he wanted to live started hating him bcoz of his background n life style . She believed him to be a jungli jaanwar but still he tried to forcefully keep her with him bcoz the thought of her not being with him killed him so he cld have imagined how he wld have been without her but she was not able to see the hidden raju in him who was still the same child like . But all turned a nightmare for him when his jeeja spiked his drink n he lost his senses n tried to force his rani , he never thought he wld ever do that he died that morning wen she told him that he molestated her n she will make sure he gets punishment for it . He didnt knew wat was happening as he cldnt remember anything, he was guilty , he was heartbroken he didnt knew wat he shd do n wat not he just wanted to hear that he didnt do that but seemed destiny wanted him to lose everything n join the world of dreams .
Madhubala got him arrested but with the help of lawyers he got bail for two days but in two days his life changed upside down . He was passing by bhanus room wen he heard the conversation between him n agni on how they trapped him to force her . They were continuously confessing their crimes n he acted smart n recorded their voice . The next day in court his lawyer presented the audio tape n all were shocked to hear including madhu , she never thought his family cld conspire against him but raja didnt showed any hatred he was still unaffected but then something caught his attention n it was his lawyer presenting the medical test report which showed that he havent raped anyone . He immediately turned to his lawyer n to stop that but his lawyer had already started questioning madhu n there she spilled the beans that she falsely accused him to get rid off him .
Not even in his wildest dreams he cld have imagined his rani lieing , he was not hurt bcoz she blamed him falsely but bcoz he put her dignity at stake to get rid off him . He was lost in his own thoughts when police brought bhanu to court n he accepted everything that he did , raja was not affected by his words but when bhanu revealed how dauji n he made his plans to kill his parents he wanted to kill him there n then but he controlled his anger . JUDGE was going to announce his verdict when raja spoke up n said that no matter he havent done anything but still he did tried to force her so he deserves punishment for that , all were shocked at his words especially madhu , radhaji n bittuji . They believed him to be a monster but inside him resided a genuine n pure soul . Dauji n bhanu were arrested too n they were imprisoned for life time n raja got six months imprisonment .He didnt met to anyone he didnt talked as it was revealed that ak mansion was rk mansion n madhu was rishabh kundras daughter he transferred all the properties on her name again n divorced her too as that was wat she wanted. Madhu was beyond shocked to see the divorce papers . She realised that he was not at all bad it was the circumstances that made him like that n same condition was for bittuji . he remembered how he said he can never become like his chief but that was wrong he was exactly like his chief. The days passed on n it was the day raja was supposed to come out , madhu was happy that she will now finally start new life with him as she felt really bad how his family betrayed him , she wanted to meet him but she got to know he already left .
There was no trace of him anywhere , madhu was heartbroken radhaji tried to make her understand but she was very guilty that she lost the one person who loved her madly n she killed his heart . Madhu started managing kundra empires , she didnt join bollywood bcoz radhaji feared that she might lose him but she got all the legal recognition that legendary superstar rks daughter shd get .Life passed on but the pain of losing one person never left her n one year passed . one day she was switching the tv channels wen something caught her attention the news headline said RK IS BACK. She called everyone n bittuji along with his family n radhaji gathered there n when their eyes went on tv the world frozed for them .
There he was standing in all his glamourous n sexy avatar of THE RK .
Media was firing questions at him as he was launching his first debut movie .He started speaking n all were shocked to see his new mannerism n style which was exactly like rishabh kundra . He didnt said much but madhu saw there were no emotions n feelings in his eyes nor his face . Bittuji was stunned to see the spitting image of his chief n he felt guilty for saying hurtful words to raja previously . Radhaji watched the replica of her son with teary eyes but she was still in shock .leela sunny n sweety watched in wide eyes not able to believe that he was the same village guy . Madhu wanted to meet him badly she tried every bit possible but seemed raja was now not interested in her at all . He moved on frm his past to become a bettter man The Rk .

PRESNT
RAJA was sitting on his rocking chair lost in his thouhts abt his life . Wat all he faced n how he became wat he is wen a girl in her early thirties came to him to call for his next shot . She was none other than Gunjan Shergill the famous director of bollywood . She helped raj to transform into rk as she was rks fan during her childhood n it was her dream to become a director n wen she saw raja firstly she was stunned but after she got to know him n his life she felt really bad she bought out his talent infront of the world gave him shelter n new life n now he was the most demanding superstar.
As soon as he heard the words lights , camera n action he was completely into his character then he was just in his role n nothing existed for him .
Everyone applauded again for him after he gave the perfect shot .
His secretary came running to him n rk looked at her with irritated luk n said , '' ria tum chennai express mein kyun aayi ho ''
ria - rk sir wo aayi hai
rk- ria main tumhe koi computer dikhta hoon kya jo mujhe khud pata chal jaayega ki wo ka kya matlab hai
ria - sir wo matlab madhubala
the name caught his attention n a evil smirk played on his lips with a slight spark in his mesmerising eyes n he whisperd - madhu- bala ahannn!!!!
aakhirkar tum mujhtak pahunch hi gayi , mere itno dino ke intezaar ko mitaane tum khud mere paas aa gayi not bad .
he said to ria to get her in n wen she entered her eyes met his but she didnt saw any love for her .
rk got up n moved towards her n said -" finally we met again madhubalaaa ahaaannn !!
so aaj kya bolne aayi ho jungli janwar gawaar ya phir kuch aur .
Then he saw bittuji n radhaji coming in n said arey waah dida aur mama chacha ko bhi saath laayi ho interesting very very interesting .
bittuji - raja , before he cld complete rk interrupted him n said do baatein yaad rakhiye pehli main raja nahi rk hoon , raja usi din mar gaya jab sabne milkar usk khilaaf saazish ki jab poori duniya ne use rapist kaha ab main sirf rk hoon sirf aur sirf rk the right kameena .
aur doosri baat kya hum log ek doosre ko jaante hai , nahi ap log jis raja ki baat kar rahe wo yahan nahi hai yahan sir aur sirf superstar rk hai .n he smirked .
madhu - raja dekho before she cld say anything more he said tum dekho madhubala ab main koi raja raju nahi ab main rk hoon jiski ye poori duniya dewaani hai aur ye achanak tumhe mujhse baat karne ki kya soojhi jab main tumahare paas aata tha tab tum mujhse door bhaagti thi to jaao main tumhe tumhari aazadi de di use njoy karo aur mujhe meri zindgi njoy karne do aur haan yaad hai tumhari shart wo shart tum jeet gayi aaj main tumse pyaar nahi karta aur tumhe apne paas nahi chahta congratulations madhubalaaa ahaaannn !!! n he left frm there smirking leaving them all shocked .

p.s this is fully my story i have no plans to unite them so dnt expect it plus i m writing this to take out my frustation hope i did justice so do read n give ur views n comments .

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bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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serves madhu right
ab kyun ayi hai peeche
loved it
fantastic os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic os dear!!👏👏
i really loved it!!😛😛
even i dont want them to unite!! its d best ending!!😳😳
madhu deserves this heart break for playing with his feeling & falsely accusing him!!😉😉
i really wish to see this in serial too!!😳😳


Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I Luved This Alot Dear😳😳
I Wish This Happens In Show Too😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee os neha dear loved it... ending was excellent I wish cvs bhi aisi ending de nd we can get our rk back... miss him soo much...

thnxx fr posting christy dear..
Edited by My_VivJaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

awesomeee os christy dear loved it... ending was excellent I wish cvs bhi aisi ending de nd we can get our rk back... miss him soo much...

its written by neha ..say her the credit
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christobelle

its written by neha ..say her the credit



ooppss my mistake... thanks neha dear fr writing it..
will edit my cmmnt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb os!
I wish this would have happened in serial. Kaash tum MB ke creative team me hote.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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agr show mai ye hota to aj show ka ye hall na hota 😭

awesome os 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pretty good plot, I must say. The current story can definitely be saved by this track. Hope the CVs are reading this! 😕

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