Rishbala TS: True love!! part 3 pg9 (15/6) (complete)

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

It was a great update and story😊

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ferii

@ferii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

awesome end sangeeta I just loved it😛

and Im so happy that u even mentioned my place name😳

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jalebi

@madhurish

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

amazing story!!👏👏

to be frank till last update i was much impressed with muskaan's character but in this update i totally agree that i misjudged her char.. !! she is really a sweet heart!!😳😳 she is a very practical & bold girl!!😛😛 she dint create any scene & complications in her sis love life!!😎😎

ok my rk!! he is really a true lover who found his true love just by looking into her eyes & feeling her!!😳😳 u have beautifully differentiated both d characters!!👏👏

he he he... after knowing everything that rk could find his love in a sec just by looking at them then how come they tried to fool him lol!!😆😆

now rk could dance with his lover/biwi & play basket ball with his friend / saali !!😉😉

wow!! i loved rk's traditional way of love proposal & that ring too!!😛😛

oh dear!! i love ur stories inch by inch!! i could keep on describing how much i liked & enjoyed reading ur works!!😳😳

ur writing style is awesome & ur stories r beautiful!!👍🏼👍🏼

whenever ur story is coming to an end i feel lil sad that i m gonna miss a wonderful story but no worries i know u will come back with another different story!!😳😳

thanks for d pm!!😃😃

love u!!🤗

Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

wow...beautifull story dear...nice concept😊😊😊 and well written😊😊😊

i had a fear whether u will leave muskan without falling in love with anyone,but glad that rahul is there?btw who was in ur mind when u write about rahul?just a curiosity to know 😊😊😊

do u know which was my fav.part???

you love your sister so much that you sleep every night hugging her Basket ball..." RK came close to her "you seem shy but you are a true romantic at heart who not only reads Jane Austen but also 50 shades of grey.."He smiled looking into her eyes making "you don't realize but whenever you are shy you look down n your cheeks turn red.." Madhu was in daze "you are a very bad liar, every time you lie you start blinking your lashes unconsciously ..you are so scared of dark that you sleep with the night light on..you never say it but you want your mom n dad to be together so much that you talk about them in your sleep...I didn't want to say it in front of your sister but since you asked..there is one person who you love more than you love your sister...n yes you say my name in your sleep n smile quite often..." He smiled lovingly at her cupping her face madhu kept looking at him dazed "and your eyes..I can write a book about them..you try to hide so many things inside you but your traitor eyes they reveal them to me.."

wonderful 3s dear 👏👏👏

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Luvly update goona miss it

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

loved the story

it was so sweet

rk could recognize his soulmate even with his eyes closed

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

WOW!!! lovely story...read all parts in one go...😃

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

nice part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..

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Momi

@momi78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Muskaan is such a sweet sister! Loved the story!

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Wow perfect ending sangeet.. RK is smart enough to differentiate between Madhu and Muskaan. I loved how he told Madhu about her eyes and what he could read in those eyes which he failed to find in Muskaan. And a special thanx for not leaving Muskaan alone and heart broken.

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