RishBala SS : Superstar RK, the Teenage Heartthrob.CH4 Updated (28/06) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: momi78

How come I missed the last update?? 😵 Too good ... loved RK's boyish charm ... he seems to be enjoying college life to the fullest!

Teaser: Awesome! He probably has something planned for Madhubala. Let's wait and see. Please continue soon and pm me ..

Thank You..😃😃 Yeah, he is enjoying. Never been to one! And he never went to school alo, being a star he had private tutions!
You are the only one who wrote something about the teaser, Thank you. And Sorry I don't PM anyone, because it is hectic, with my buddy list. As soon as I figure something out, I will let you know.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Happy Birthday to the Superstar, the Television heartthrob!! Vivian Dsena, my love. And I have decided he perfect day to Update the next chapter, you can thank Vivina for that. So here's the Birthday Celebratory Update, though it is no where near Vivian's birthday, but is Updated in celebration of his Birthday. This Update is total lollypop of the Teaser, though.

Chapter 4 Superstar and Criminals?
" Rishab, where are you going? This is not the right way" I panicked.
" Don't you realise it by now... I have kidnapped you Madhubala!" He replied menencingly, gritting his teeth.
"W..wh..what?" I replied trembling. This can't happen.
" What do you thought, Madhubala?" He chuckled evilly.
"No..this can't be... you gotta kidding me"
"This is very much true as the truthness of the sun"

RK, the Superstar is a Kidnapper!!?? and right now he kidnapped me? I have to escape somehow.

As if reading my thoughts, he said " Don't even think of escaping or even jumping off this bike, for that matter. At this speed , jumping down would get you landed safely"

He was right, I thought mentally looking at the road. If i tried to jump, I will surely get my bones breaked. It was wise to sit here and look for a chance to escape. Never in future I will trust someone so easily, I tried to remain strong, but fear was killing me from inside. Where was RK going to take me? and why me? I closed my eyes tightly praying to God that I get out of this situation.

After some time the bike stopped with a jerk, causing me to open my eyes. It was unknown place, with some big trees. A place looking apt for Kidnapping, sceduled!Before I could think anything, darkness surrounded me. I was BLINDFOLDED!! A silk cloth prevented me to see anything.

" Come" he grabbed my hands.
"No, I am not coming with you" I pushed him
" No is not an option here, Madhu..bala!" he again grabbed me this time also by shoulders and dragged me. I had no other option but to follow him.

After a good 5 minute walk he stopped. Did we reached his Farmhouse? or a secret godown? where I will be tied on a chair with a cloth stuffed in my mouth? I hope I could have contacted Trish somehow, her favourite so called Superstar kidnapped me. Would Trish beleive? Naah!! she would think I am playing a prank, if only she knew...

RK untied the cloth and the silk material fell down, I opened my eyes slowly and blinked rapidly, it took a few seconds for my vision to adjust in the bright surroundings.

And when I finally saw what I saw, I was gaping. It was a clearing in a forest. With a crystal clear lake flowing down, its fresh water invited you to splash! the soft green colour was soothing to the eyes, air had a exotic fragrance in it , something like "geeli mitti ki khushboo!" And the pleasant wheater was the cherry on top. For a moment, I was lost in the beauty of the place. It was a surreal experiance to drown in the Nature' s beauty.



Admiring the surroundings, i turned to left and saw RK looking at me intently, a small smile playing on his lips and then it all came back to me. I was kidnapped.

" I never knew you were a criminal RK, in the disguise of a Superstar" I spat out
He was still smiling.

" Yes, I am a Criminal, as you call it Madhubala..the one who has kidnapped you from your monotonous routined life and stealed a few moments of joy, happiness and freedom from life for you Madhu" He said all the while looking at me intently and smiling.

"Wh..whaat?" this was my reaction. My head had started spinning from all this information. So all the while he was playing a prank on me.

"Yes, you are right!" Did I spoke that aloud?

" Your face is so expressive Madhu, I can easily guess your thoughts" expressive? Me ? Woah! that was something new!

" Now atleast praise my acting skills, that I got you to believe that you were kidnapped" And he laughed at his own joke,watching him laughing like that made me feel happy from inside. But No I am not going to let him off that easily.

" You find that funny, Mr. Kundra?" I asked in a stern voice. He did't replied, just looked at me.
" You think of it as a Joke, right? Do you even know I was Kidnapped when I was just 5. And from that day I havr nightmares, and they haunt me till now"

All the playfulness gone, silence prevailed. RK's grin gone long ago, was replaced by a serious, sullen face with a hint of guilt.

" M..Madhu.. I.."
"Not a word more from you Kundra, enough has been done and said. You can't joke about each and everything"

I gave him a spiteful look, turned away and started walking. He lioked so pitiful.

" Madhu.. wait" he caught me by elbow and jerked towards him.

I raised my palm to prevent him from speaking anything. " Before you speak anything, Rishab.." suddenly a smile took over me.

"Now it is your turn to praise MY acting skills, which made you to believe this Crap!" and distangling my hand from his, I finally let my suppresed giggle explode. His Dumbstruck expression made me to guffawk openly.

" What was that?" he said, still in shock looking adorably cute.
After calming myself from the Laughs I said raising my brow, like he does.
" So you think only you can play games, huh?" and I broke into another fresh bout of giggles.

Recovering from the shock, he gave me a smirk.
" Playing games are we, huh?"
" You know Madhu, you have dared to mess with the Rishab Kundra!"
" Oh My, I am scared, please help me!" I taunted. This was fun!

Suddenly I felt something crawling up my waist, and before I could realise anything, Ridhab had started tickling me."Stop! no!" I tried pushing him and running away, but I was caged between his hands. All my attempts to run away went in vain, he was more stronger than me.

Finally, after some time, he decided to have mercy on me and stopped. And that was when I realised our akward position, he had his arms around my waist abd my habds were on his chest, which were previously trying to push him away. Even with the cool breeze blowing i could feel a hot sensation inside me , being this close to him. One thing I noted that he looked more handsome, this close.

" Planning to stay like this forever?" he said, his hot breath fanning my face. That's when I realized I was still in the same position, and I pushed him much to his amusement.

Now it was high time, the surroundings get some attention too. " Which place is this by the way?"

" This is a secret place of mine, where I enjoy to come, a place where I can be myself, without the papparazi hounding me, this is my little secret hideout, which no one knows about"

" So why you have dragged me here when..."
" Do you regret it?" he cut my rant with a question of his, taking a step forward making ne stumble back
"No! this place is beautiful! but isn't it meant to be known by you only?"
" Why does the sun shine daily? Why is the nature so beautiful? Hai koyi jawaab? No! Right? Because some questions don' t have answers, they meant to be left with a question mark!" he whishpered dangerously close. Finally he leaned back and said adjusting his Tag Heuer " Now come fast, without wasting time"


"Umm...let me think..this is "Zanzeer" right?"
" Yeah right! your turn" I guessed correct.

We were playing some sort of guess-the-movie game. It felt nice sitting on lush green soft grass under a huge tree. Rishab being an actor, could act perfectly. It was me who was to do the hardwork. After playing 12 rounds we were tired.

"Hey Rishab, what about taking a stroll around?" I raised my brows suggestively.
He looked at me for a moment. I couldn't understand that particulat expression. The next moment I feared being laughed off.

After a scary pause, the superstar chose to reply. " I wanted to ask you one thing"
" What is the million-dollar question?"
"It is just that- wait! Haha ! Million Dollar Question??" he broke into a laugh.
" It is just that. the world calls me RK, Formally I am adressed as Mr. Rishab Kundra, it is you only who calls me Rishab, any hidden secret behind it madam?"

" Hmmm... I don't know for myself but I think RK makes me think of a arrogant, egoistic , snobbish..."

" Woah! Woah! Too many praises don't you think?"

"Whatever!" I rolled my eyes.
" where was I?... snobbish superstar! and Rishab is more normal. It feels like to call a nornal person not the Superstar, but the person inside you" I caught Rishab gazing at ne the whole while.

" And anyways I like Rishab"
" Who? Me or the Name?" My eyes went round. Which give him another chance to chuckle.
" Obviously th..the na..name!" I don't know why I stammered. And then I looked away. He stood up" Come on, lets go for a walk"
"Yeah"
And I saw his extended palm infront of me, just as I was about to get up. Not sure about what to do, I looked up and RK nodded at me. I placed my palm atop his and he pulled me to my feet.
How was it? Don't kill me, atleast praise that for a moment the Teaser made you think the opposite.😆 Please Comment and Like people.!! Atleast today, Today's my Superstar Dsena's Birthday, *Going to get the dark chcoclate cake for celebrating* who else?😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Awesome update.
It was very well written.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

wakai mai apurva tumne to sahi mai ghuma daala

awasome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
this part was unexpected and I loved it!

They were so cute together. Madhu was not the 'awkward' teenage and Rishab was not the Superstar. They were two normal ppl getting to know each other and having fun.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Awesome update.

It was very well written.

Thanls, Oh Really, I never thought I could write well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: meenji22

wakai mai apurva tumne to sahi mai ghuma daala

awasome update

😆Hehehe Thanks, I really like twists, you know?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

this part was unexpected and I loved it!

They were so cute together. Madhu was not the 'awkward' teenage and Rishab was not the Superstar. They were two normal ppl getting to know each other and having fun.

Thank You. Theya re so cute, that I want to pull their cheeks. They are themselves in each other presence, that's their comfort level..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Lovely update Apurva Di!Loving RishBala moments!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice teaser and all the best for ur new story, post it soon

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