New SS: So Far So Good--Updated DT:24Aug2016 - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ni33

I know, I know. I'm probably the last one to comment.😆-- as always...lolz
But it always seems like you update your story at a time when I'm the busiest.😆-🤣 I even have that college story of yours to read and comment on.😆 How many chapters have you written in that story?😆 --guess 5 or 6...not sure 😆😆😆Just so I get a clue on what I'm up against in the reading department.😆 I have a couple of "new" stories to read.😆--lolzzz 😆😆😆
Okay over to comment this chapter. Well I guess you already know my reaction.🤣
But do you know why?😆 I want to play the guessing game but it will take to long so I'm bursting the waterfilled balloon.🤣 Yes waterfilled balloon, so someone gets wet when it bursts. 🤣 And the bubble metaphor is used so many times, so I wanted to change. Okay off topic again.😆...🤣 ..i so love these off topic talks
I'm trying to decide ever since I read this update who is, sorry but, the bigger idiot here.😆 We have four of them. RK, Madhubala, Sultan and Trishna. And since it has been 5 days since you updated this SS. I'm still undecisive. It's a sudden death.😆 But the difference is, the rule there are no winners or losers doesn't apply here. There are only losers.😆
Do you remember a previous comment of mine with a Girl Power reference?😆 It's somewhere after Madhu caught Sultan kissing another girl.😆..ofcourse lolzzz Well at that time I thought Sultan was the bigger idiot--hey dnt say that..he is so chuyi muyi 🤣 and RK was right behind him, trying to justify his brothers wrong action. And then Madhu, in a tie with RK, for agreeing to keep all of that a secret from Trishna. Trishna was the smartest one among those four at this point--ahaaan this si somethign..I dnt think of lolzzz🤣-

and remained so till this update surfaced from the ocean.🤣 I mean really, all of that. All the lies, going behind her back was like puff. Gone in a blink of an eye. My question is now. What have you done to Trishna? Where has the real Trishna disappeared? 😆--come on gal..u think ihave the patience to deal with tehse two anymore
The only explanation I could come up with is that a magician like the one in MB came after RK and Ullu Sullu went and switched that Trishna with a different one. A look alike.🤣 Lookie Lookie alike forgave Ullu Sullu and tried to manipulate Madhubala to get back together with RK...Magician ka naam hai ASHA... 😆😆😆
Alas it's not the real Trishna. So where is the real Trishna? What have you done to her?🤣--she was under the influence of AS ...agar woh socha toh teek verna...nahiii🤣

Don't tell me Radhaji sent a magician to perform that spell in secrecy. In order to get Madhubala with RK.🤣 Cause lets face it. If she wanted Ullu Sullu with Trishna there wouldn't be a switcheroo.🤣 She was the one that insisted for their marriage in the hospital.😆aaisa toh kuch sochi nahi main...the magician --🤣🤣

As for Ullu. How dumb can one guy be? Recording intimate moments. For what show your future wife your previous experience, something like kiss and tell. 😆 Did he honestly Think that all of that would have turn out just fine? And him to allow her to blackmail him.🤣 I want to say we do have a lead in the stupidest person among those four, but can't. Two more persons remains to comment on.😆---he is so dumb..I so hate Sullu in MB so butchered his role here...😈
These two. I am a Rishbala fan, but this.🤣 There is a limit for certain things. Stupidity is one of them.😆 They faught again. Good for them.😆 She went away. Another good thing.😆 Truth came out and Radhaji played or payed a magician.😆 And things went awry.🤣 The elders in both the families have drinken something that infected their minds therefore insisted for Madhu to go to RK's room. And what to we get. Them kissing.🤣 I mean really. 🤣 I could not stop laughing reading this and had to go back to read it again just to make sure I didn't mistook anything. 😆 I didn't.🤣 Okay scratch that switcheroo with Trishna. Radhaji has contaminated the drinks or food. There isn't any explanation other than that.😆 How else can those two kiss and just forget the insults thrown at each other. Especially Madhu. She got more of those than RK...Ohh come on..i just wanted to add romance...however it is..they have to kisss🥳
But I have to give you this. You really have stayed true to your storytitle. So Far So Good.😆 Now since so far have been so good. I expect that Madhu snaps out of her little dreamworld and hormones and slaps RK across the face.🤣 ---again bechara RK baby🤣

Let him have it Madhubala. Ahaan.🤣 The title clearly indicated so far so good, so now it's time for some goody good times to come. AKA not good times.🤣 Since you said there will be about 6 chapters more. That also clearly indicates it will take some time for RK and Madhubala settle their differences. So...Let the slapping season begin early.🤣 Lets not wait for 15 February lets have it in the next update.😆...hahahahahah...sure sure...will try 🤣
Now a little poem or quote with of course my own little twist on it.😆
Mirror mirror on the wall
Who is the dumbest of them all?
Over the seven continents and six world seas there is a tie between two pair of siblings.
How can it be? Don't tell me. They are quibbling.
I do not know. It's beyond my knowledge.🤣
Asha. You finally got one long, long comment of me.😆 Enjoy reading it.🤣
Thanks for the update and for the PM.

Thank u for this...ur one hell of a critic..I so in lOVE with you and this longest comment 🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
ni stop giving slapping ideas to asha
i still hate bala for slapping rk instead of sullu who deserved kicks but instead the slapping queen slapped her own fiance
as if he was the one kissing around

asha u better not bring slapping session
otherwise i ll kill ur bala with my comments
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

ni stop giving slapping ideas to asha
i still hate bala for slapping rk instead of sullu who deserved kicks but instead the slapping queen slapped her own fiance
as if he was the one kissing around

asha u better not bring slapping session
otherwise i ll kill ur bala with my comments


Ohh my Neha...our jungle billi😆...I told to in abt this...but still the gal wanted claps...oke for my poor baby..in next chapter no slaps...but can't promise beyond 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

ni stop giving slapping ideas to asha
i still hate bala for slapping rk instead of sullu who deserved kicks but instead the slapping queen slapped her own fiance
as if he was the one kissing around

asha u better not bring slapping session
otherwise i ll kill ur bala with my comments

Oho Neha. Just imagine this. If Madhu slaps RK, he gets upset and angry and they will never unite. So you can have him all for yourself.😆
Actually I would have suggested something else as well, but knowing what response I would get... I take my chances. Let Madhu get in a caraccident.🤣 That would be interesting to read.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ni33


</div>Oho Neha. Just imagine this. If Madhu slaps RK, he gets upset and angry and theywill never unite. So you can have him all for yourself.😆
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Actually I would have suggested something else as well, but knowing what response I would get... I take my chances. Let Madhu get in a caraccident.🤣That would be interesting to read.😆

emotional blackmailing it is aint it
the deal.is gud but the major point is i dnt want slap affected rk whose dimples r gone forever wenever bala touch his cheeks
n the irony being i love his dimples more than i love him so u see how much i hate slaps in that case
well i like laters option
asha go on send bala to hospital
or u send rk to hospital n i ll kidnap him frm there n ur bala cld find another chick
for her slapping session
hows that ni
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

emotional blackmailing it is aint it
the deal.is gud but the major point is i dnt want slap affected rk whose dimples r gone forever wenever bala touch his cheeks
n the irony being i love his dimples more than i love him so u see how much i hate slaps in that case
well i like laters option
asha go on send bala to hospital
or u send rk to hospital n i ll kidnap him frm there n ur bala cld find another chick
for her slapping session
hows that ni

I would more say Think of the possible outcomes if she slaps him...ROFL
At least you are agreeing for the hospital visit...ROFL
Well she can slap Sullu after the hospital trip...ROFL
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update ashu di.
Tfs for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you all for liking and commenting on this story..
I so feel..this is just amazing...to be around this forum...bashing bhi aur pyaar bhi...😆😆😆

oke now comes the update...dedicating this to Neha as she don't want RK to be slapped ...lolzzz


Please do read, like and comment is required...it just motivates us to write more and more...Juts a matter of 2 mins to like and write a comment...don't forget to let me know...ur opinion about the way the story is progressing...I would love to know about that..plueezzz...


P.S: As usual, couldn't able to proof read, so please ignore the typos...

Chapter

After like some minutes..they both parted...there eyes were closed...Madhu recovered first and looked at RK in disgust...RK opened his eyes and saw Madhu looking at him furiously...he composed his passionate state and looked at her...she wiped her lips in disgust was about to leave..RK held her hands..

"Madhu..."

"Don't ...RK...whatever you wanna say you said it...whatever happened just now is..soemthing that is making me feel...how disgusting I am..how can I...just get lost in this...that too with the person who just treates me like Shit...I am sorry...please forget...jo bhi hua...Its my mistake..." by saying this she left/..leaving a baffled RK..

What the hell...this kiss...she called it is disgusting...hwo dare she...pehale toh she used to njy...and now...one thing Is clear..now its only hatred..she don't love me anymore... Thought RK ...

"Madhu .." she quickly wiped her tears and faked a smile,.

"come Didu...how come Jiju ko chodh ke mere paas.."

"wait...were you crying ..."

"me..aaah...no didu..Y wi..lll I.." Madhu moved her head to the other side...to hide her fresh tears..Trishna pulled her head towards her by holding her chin...

"Eh sab kya hai Madhu...please ...tell me..." Madhu hugged her and cried her heart out..Trishna too cried as she could not abel to see her sister like this...after sometime..Trishna cupped MAdhu's cheeks and said..

"please baby...meri achi bachi...tell me...what RK did this time..." Madhu looked at her sister and wiped her tears by nodding her head in NO..

Trishna smiled faintly and said" U can't hide things from me Madhu...tell me...what happened"

"I don't know Didu..I don't know...I love him or hate him...I still have feelings for him...I am not sure Didu...when I see him...I just wanted to be with him but the words that he sayd to me...I feel like...just run away from him..." she wiped her tears...Trishna held her palms in hers...

"seriously Didu...aaj...I went to his aur...I don't know..I became weak and we..ended up doing something...that shouldn't happen now..how can I loose my control...I mean...is this Lust..."

"Shut up madhu...just realx...stop thinking so much and come to such weird conclusions..."

"Nahi Didu...just listen to me...it started with a kiss...and then we got engaged,...I mean...we starting with ..."

"Madhu...Love is not something that always start with a talk or just a glance or by spending time together..sometimes it do happen with a touch...its just that..sometimes...we wanted to feel the person whom we consider as our...a hug, kiss or holding hands doent mean..it is lust..."

"but Didu...wo.." she was again cut off by trishna

"oke tell em this...you both had ever..." Madhu widened her eyes and shouted "NOOO..."

"pagli toh who lust kaise hoga...if it is physical..then you wont end up being vrigins till today...I am sure you might got enough opportunities..." Madhu blushed remembering their night during Sultan-Trishna's suhaag raat...and said

"but...you sure..if given an opportunity...we would have not committed the mistake...would have stayed like good kids..."

Trishna smiled and said..."I cant say this to you...as I started this with my hubby..." she smiled widely...Madhu pouted she pulled her cheeks and said

"That no body can..it purely depends on..what I can say..." Both the ssiters looked at each other and laughed...Madhu hugged her sister lovingly...

After Dinner..Madhu sat in her room and thought so I love RK...but that moron is a jerk...his kiss today...told me his love...he still love me...but wait...how can I forgive him...whatever he said to me...and his break up...I want humiliated so much in my life ever...but if I leave him like this...he will get married and be happy...I got hurt coz of him...how can he be so happy...naah naah...I DON'T WANT THAT MORON KUNDRATO BE HAPPY... she smiled evilly...

Next day..

"Namastey..." greeted Padmini to Radha and MK...

"Ohh come in Padminiji and Mallik ji.." ...all of them started discussing abt RK and Madhu's wedding...

Radha smiled happily but said..."but Pandit said..we don't have muraths for the same"

Padmini smiled and said.." we showed the Kundalis to one of our family priests..he said...we have few muraths in the coming months...but we need to do some Pujas and the start with Marriage preparations so...if you are oke with it..then we can start"

"Ohh that is...a great news...I guess we are oke" MK looked at Radhaji..took and her smile as Yes and smiled looking at Mallik and Padmini ..

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Sultan, Trishna, Rk, radhaji and MK were at dinning table

"I am so happy today..." Said Radha...all others looked at her and smiled...

"I always felt...someone is missing in this...now...within few weeks...I can see my family complete"

RK looked at Trishna and Sultan...who were smiling and looking at Radha..

"Congrats bro and Babhi..." all the others turned towards RK and looked at him, as if he is an alien..

RK couldn't help but frown checking the way they are looking at him and said

"What...I am so happy that..i am going ot be Chacha..." Trishna gasped loudly...Sultan started coughing...Radha hit RK;s hand and said.

"Badmaash...i am talking about Madhu..."...RK repeated.."Madhuuu..."

"Haan...today morning,...we have decided that...you both are getting married in the coming weeks...tomorrow...will fix the date..." RK was lost in thoughts. What...I gave so much to that Pandit..he need more money..he would have asked me...what is this crap...I should call him now,...

"But Ma...Panditji said..." before he could complete Radha completed "we need to perform few pujas , thenw e can start wedding preparations...so...don't worry..Rishu...u r happy na..."

RK kep quite...didn't know what to say..he gulped and looked as everyone is expecting him to be happy..he faked a smile and quickly finished his dinner and went to his room...

"Pagla...I guess..he wants to talk to Madhu ..." said MK...everyone laughed...


Precap :

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Posted: 10 years ago
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party time after a long time I came 1st to comment in ur story ashu
awsmmm update
m waiting for mrg😆😉
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update Ashu di.
Tfs for pm.
The story is going very well. ...
Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago

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