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Posted: 11 years ago
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i generally don't like to read spoiler and promo... but unfortunately saw one post about madhu being shot ... so this small story came in my mind ... wanted to share with you all ... after all you are my EXTENDED FAMILY 😆😉

... i had written many in my language. but not good in other languages... but still want to share this

...

after madhu got shot and was admitted ... raja finds out the truth about bhanu's plan and he was the one who tried to kill raja as well... whole family came to know about this...

in raja's house... all are in shock.

raja... takes his gun and points it at bhanu...


tauji ... maintains silence. all ladies crying. ...


raja... he is staring at him... and after a while he drops the gun and says...'' kabhi zindagi me dobara muje galthi se bhi nahi milo'' ... he is about to walk out

tara... looks at him with teary eyes and with shock

raja...''ye tumareliye nahi kartha hoon. aaj me ine maarungaa. kuch saal ke bath koi aur mujse badla lenge iskeliye... kab tak aisa chalthe rahe haa??!! kab tak??!! bina waja se mene apna ma paap ko kodiya... ab meri rani ko...

meri rani saki thi... mowth ka badhala mowth nahi hai.
nahi, iske bath me is pistole ko nahi choonungaa.''... telling this he walks out.

at hospital... madhu getting better and was lying on the bed...

raja comes... looks at her. a drop of tear pops out from his eyes

madhu ... looks at him without any expression

raja...''rani tum jaavo. mene sUnny ko inform kardhiya. woh bas aathe honge''

madhu... 😲😕

raja...''tum mujse kehrahi thi na ki tume yahase jaana hai. mene tume jabardasthi yaha ruka hai...tum saki ho. me jungli hoon. mera piyaar tume is halath kardhi... me tumareliye saki nahi hoon.

ab me sab samaj gayaa hoon. tume daklif me nahi dek saktha.

tum waapas javoo apna gar. aur kushi zindhagi jiyo. me tume kabhi tang nahi karoonga. tum jaha bhi ho, kushi se aur achchese rehna hai...raja mar gaya hai... chalo, jiyo apni zindhagi''... he told all these by controlling all his emotions


madhu...''tum hamesha logoko kiyu maar Dhethe ho??!!''

raja... looks at her confused

madhu... ''pehle raju ko ...ab raja ko...''

still raja looks at her confused...

madhu...''muje raju bhi chagiye... mujse pagaloki tara piyaar karne waala raja bhi chagiye'' ... saying this she smiled at him

raja ... ''kiya ??!!'' almost tears started rolling down from his eyes. he could not believe his ears

madhu... '' aisa kiyu dekrahe ho?!''

raja... ''par ... tum toh muje pasand nahi karthi ho na?? me jungli hoon. jaanwar hoon. mere saath tum kush nahi ho. phir kiyu??!!''

madhu... ''ha... mera raja jugli hai...lekin woh mujse piyaar bhi kartha hai. apne jaan se zyaadha... jiskeliye woh apni haath bhi katva saktha hai... muje goli lagne ke bath uska saas aur dhadukan ek minute rukgayi. jisse me kaise chod sakthi hoon. aisa dhusra jugli muje kahi nahi milegaa... aur ek aur bath, pati patni ke beech kithne bhi gussa ho, nok choke ho... jeeth hamesha piyaar ki hotha hai'' 😳😳

raja... smiles at her

then what... raja rani passionate hugging with 'hum hai deewane'' song at BG

ps... bare with my hindi ... he he

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uma88 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So nice kajal, hope to see something like this in our show soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome. .u should join the creative team of mb😆
Congratulations on becoming rockerz. .😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: uma88

So nice kajal, hope to see something like this in our show soon.



thanks ... me too hope so 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: romitag

It's awesome. .u should join the creative team of mb😆

Congratulations on becoming rockerz. .😊😊



thanks... i don't mind joining with them 😆😉

thanks

waise my HD... mera hindi kaisa hai??!! sach bolna
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Nice script Kajal👍🏼



thank you 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well written dear...lets see wht will happn...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabla

well written dear...lets see wht will happn...



thanks. something nice will happen...i'm sure
Edited by kajal99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb 👍🏼
It will be such a beautiful scene

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