His Little Wife- A 4 Part Short (Discontinued)

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey
thank you.
I feel your feels girl. I will solve it all soon (atleast I hope so).
This time, unlike all the other times, my heart is torn between the main and the second lead. you'll find out why soon. oh this is going to be a difficult ride

Why am I not surprised that you are conflicted with main and the second lead? Normally you lean more towards the second lead but am I to guess you may be leaning towards the lead in this one? :)

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Well it's pretty obvious I loathe RK. He is nothing but a emotional less robot who cares for no one and nothing including his wife her self respect and her body. I want to slap him when I read how he treats her so I'm afraid to find out what his reaction will be when she tells him the artist is her ex-boyfriend; the one she was with when he "proposed" to her?

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vimala jersha

@christobelle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

ohhh god!

rk is sooo cold.he just wants his self respect n his wife to be his

madhu said that it was her body...god! whats gonna happen to madhu

i m really scared

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

RK is sooo selfish.

What will he do when Madhu will tell him that it's her body??

Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 11 years ago

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harman12

@harman12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Its getting really intrresting thanks for the pm

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

awesome update...So time for the face off of Rishabh & madhu's ex...I loved how madhu's ex painted the pictures keeping madhu in mind...may be he still loves her ...waiting for RK's reaction after madhu tells him about her ex...😃

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Momi

@momi78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Time for all hell to break loose and RK to be jealous!

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Dat again an intresting story Jasu...
jus read both d parts...
aawesome yaar...
i love ur writing...

Dis Rk gosh he is so of himself..say selfish nd a cold brat...
dont know how he ll react to Madhu..

cont soon...

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: rdave1
Why am I not surprised that you are conflicted with main and the second lead? Normally you lean more towards the second lead but am I to guess you may be leaning towards the lead in this one? :)

I was, I really was for a minute or ten but then I took a step back and looked at the story again. The man in my head and the man in my story are two different people. It is as if I am in love with an abusive man along with my heroine. Makes me wonder what I would do if I were Madhu. Guess there is a downside to being too attached to your characters, you may lose yourself in them and learn things about yourself you never knew you were capable of. This incident (and in part your comment) made me reflect on my own limitations. Some profound food for thought that came from the most unexpected of places.

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: rdave1
Well it's pretty obvious I loathe RK. He is nothing but a emotional less robot who cares for no one and nothing including his wife her self respect and her body. I want to slap him when I read how he treats her so I'm afraid to find out what his reaction will be when she tells him the artist is her ex-boyfriend; the one she was with when he "proposed" to her?

@bold, like I said earlier I took a step back and said to myself, "what the f**k was I thinking leaning toward Rishabh?" Although there is no clear indication of rape, the passive coercion and her discomfort toward the whole situation makes me think she may have been a victim of marital rape (I have not made up my mind whether or not I want to elaborate on the same) but I definitely will not dismiss the visible signs of abuse. Emotional abuse that is and psychological manipulation that is just painful to witness.

I created a monster! Yes, I am Victor Frankenstein. But unlike Victor, I will accept my responsibility. I owe it to you the reader.

Too deep?

I thought so.

I might be slightly high on life (higher than usual)😉