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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart
👏 Great dear. The scenes were nice. Waiting to read more.

thank u
it is an honor coming from a talented writer like u

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thank u
it is an honor coming from a talented writer like u

Don't make me embarrassed I came as a reader here and a friend. 😳 😃 😆

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart
Don't make me embarrassed I came as a reader here and a friend. 😳 😃 😆

sorry dear i did not mean to embarrass u
but i know that u r very talented 😛
i take inspiration from u 😳

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mansiahmed

@mansiahmed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Very nice but idont think in real serial raja will recognise this so soon even he is obssessed with her but he loves his family too😊,nicely written you just brought madhus pointbof view n feelings .

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Iki(my nickname)

@ilovebandini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Beautiful!What you definitely have to do it-writing!You are very good and I really like this.Please write some more!😛

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Saloni

@lily_rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

awesome update ⭐️

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rishbalaa

@rishbalaa

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

lovely os buddy😊...happy ending ,finally u made raja to change his mindset and understand madhu na? that paragraph was simply superb👏👏...raja's action that punch was cute😳😳. madhu's feeling's has been portrayed beautifully 😊😊...thanks for pm cutiee😊😊

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: lily_rocks
awesome update ⭐️

thanks 😊

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: ilovebandini
Beautiful!What you definitely have to do it-writing!You are very good and I really like this.Please write some more!😛

i am glad that u liked my writing 😛

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: mansiahmed
Very nice but idont think in real serial raja will recognise this so soon even he is obssessed with her but he loves his family too😊,nicely written you just brought madhus pointbof view n feelings .

i know in the show they will drag 😛

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