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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kg15

Promising Prologue!!


Thanks Kavya ! 😃
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Originally posted by: momi78

Interesting! why were they crying? And the hug ... aww


It's a big mystery darling ! Suspense ka apna hi maaza hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2
After ages she woke up with a beautiful smile in her face . She went to the dressing table and looked at her image in the mirror . She was seeing a girl who knew how to smile unlike the girl she knew who always kept quiet and her face as gloomy as the jungles on a new moon .
She went to her cupboard and picked out a yellow summer dress . This was the first time she was wearing a bright colour . After all yellow is the colour of happiness and life . Then a memory from past came to her mind
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She was about 10 then and it was June just a month before his father's death . She remembered how her father used to call her little ms. Sunshine . A small smile crept on her face and then tears . She wiped the tears and clutched the dress tightly .
" dad , now I won't loose , I have a reason to live . I have to get deepali cured. I promised you on death bed to take care of her and now I will fulfil my promise . Better late then never ."
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She bathed and came back to her dressing table . She took the comb and started combing her golden- brown hair .

Bg song ( sanwar loon from lootera)
Hawa ke jhonke aaj mausamon se rooth gaye
Gulon ki shokhiyaan jo bhanwre aake loot gaye
Badal rahi hai aaj zindagi ki chaal zara
Issi bahaane kyun naa main bhi dil ka haal zara
Sanwaar loon haaye sawaar loon
Sawaar loon haaye sawaar loon (x2)

She started singing

Baramade puraane hain, nayi si dhoop hai
Jo palke khatkhata raha hai kiska roop hai
Shararatein kare jo aise bhoolke hijab
Kaise usko naam se, main pukar loon
Sawaar loon, sawaar loon

Sawaar loon haaye sawaar loon
From her bed she took up the bed sheet and started dancing with the tunes .

Yeh saari koyalein bani hain aaj daakiyan

Kuhu-kuhu me chitthiyan padhe mazakiyaan .
And she closed her eyes , feeling the music .
Rk woke up and suddenly he had a feeling to go and check madhu as soon as possible . He slipped out of his bed , assuming that she might be asleep . , he slipped in her room quietly but was shocked to the see the sight in front of his eyes .

Madhu was lost in singing and dancing .
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nhe kaho ki naa chhupaaye
Kisne hai likha bataaye,
Uski aaj main nazar utaar loon
Sawaar loon haaye sawaar loon
Sawaar loon, sawaar loon!

Rk was lost in her beauty . She was so happy . She continued singing .
Hawa ke jhonke aaj mausamon se rooth gaye

Rk started approaching her . Slowly .

Gulon ki shokhiyaan jo bhanwre aake loot gaye


She didn't realise presence of rk near him and continued to sing and dance.

Badal rahi hai aaj zindagi ki chaal zara

Issi bahaane kyun naa main bhi dil ka haal zara

She suddenly felt strong masculine hands around her waist . It was rk . She greeted him with the most lively smile .

The bed sheet fell on them and they slipped , madhu in fear closed her eyes . But she landed on the bed behind with she on top of him and the bed sheet fell on them .
They shared a passionate eye lock .
( bg - hum hai deewane)
As realisation dawned on madhu , her cheeks flushed and she got up. Rk was also feeling awkward so he left her room .
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"This girl will drive me crazy. " he thought and he went to took shower but one thing that kept his Mind occupied was madhu. "I am falling in love , now I realise why it is called falling in love . " And he laughed at his own thoughts.
"Get ready man, you are dr. Rk to treat a patient here . "
" madhubala ahaan ! you are gonna be mine but before that I have to take away all your pain . You look so beautiful and radiant while smiling . And that yellow colour makes you look even more beautiful . "
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Ignore errors !
Annanya

Edited by An3ya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Updated 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Nice update n nice selection of song. But I'm confused with the title 'hate story'.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Simply superb! And it is one of my most fav song .. loved the movie too ... very romantic!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Freaking Amazing update Dear 😊 Thanks fr pm 😉 Loved Rishbala bedroom scene 😃 Pls continue soon & pm Me 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the family is very weird! And very mysterious. Looking forward to more pls!

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