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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hate story
Chapter 1
Rishab kundra better known as RK is back to India , he left India some 12 years back and is now back as a famous psychiatrist. He is famous worldwide for the bizarre cases he undertakes . This time too , he is back to treat a patient Deepali Malik daughter of late businessman shamsher Malik .
They have tried every doctor in world but when unsuccessful he was called .
At present Rishab kundra is standing at the Mumbai airport . He removes his sunglasses . So Mumbai here I come back after 12 whole years .
Padmini with her daughter madhubala and step son sultan went to receive RK.
Rk saw padmini and recognised her by the description sent to him , padmini too recognised him and he started heading towards them . Suddenly his eyes met with 2 pair of hazel eyes which were speaking a 1000 words at the same time . She lowered her eyes . Their were several feelings on her face - fear, depression and shyness . There is a lot more deep about her concluded RK . He studied her further on his way and found the whole family strange . Whenever she tried to say something , one signal from her mother was enough to stop her . It seemed to him like the mother had done some black magic on her . Even his brother was busy driving and didn't even once start a conversation . This family is quite interesting concluded RK . He wanted to know more and study the family more carefully .
They reached the mansion . Rk was given a room near dipali and madhubala's room . He was jet lagged and decided to sleep .
At night he woke up with sounds of crying . The sound was coming from both rooms . He felt strange . He knew something was terribly wrong with this family so he called a private detective to extract as much information about the family as possible .
He was unable to sleep with those crying sounds so he went to the room and knocked it , the same girl opened it , she had wiped her tears and asked rk if he needed anything .
Rk called her in his room and asked her to sit . She was shy and was unable to speak . Rk asked her why was she crying and she tightly hugged RK . Rk hugged her back to pacify her meanwhile some unknown feelings had already made a way in his heart . She was liking the closeness that she had never felt . She was feeling like never leaving him . Some time passed and Then he asked her what had happened to her and she refused to tell and left the room in hurry .
Rk knew that something was terribly wrong with her . He thought about it till late and then unknowingly again went to his deep slumber .
Meanwhile madhu went Back to her room , took out her diary and wrote
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his arms were the perfect solace , they had almost healed this breaking feeling inside me . It was so unlikely feeling . I don't know after how many barren and rotten autumns I have felt like a flower blooming in spring , like a butterfly coming out from cocoon . I feel reborn . After years of waiting I can have a small smile on this usual dull face . It feels like I was meant to live just to meet him once in my life , who could cure this never ending torturous pain brewing within my soul ."
Ignore the mistakes
Annanya
S promised chapter 1 has been updated. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Amazing start Dear!Thanks fr pm!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!


Yup I promise to finish this story within a month !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

I loved the concept...something different & very interesting...


I am happy that u liked it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvvivian286

nice starting plz update soon. luved the starting.😊


Yeah I will
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shasha1989

loved this character sketch...
plz continue soon


Yeah I will :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb n interesting n pls update ur ff soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Superb n interesting n pls update ur ff soon


Yup I will for sure ! :) my target is to complete it within 1-2 months
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ainanwer

interesting start please continue

thanks ! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice update.
Madhu is so scared of Padmini.
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its different n interesting. pl continue soon

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