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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

It's height of Secrecy Akku!! 10 updates are done and I can't see a single sign of a human being named RISHABH KUNDRA!!! Or you have changed it to RAJA... If that is so then tell no...

Anyways, I liked it... They got locked in library... This story is unpredictable!!!

di rishabh kudra is already reveled that blue eyed guy in chap 8 or 9 perhaps
see

raja and rishabh different personality😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rg0782

Part 7: So now Madhu made up a story about her family...and what a good reaction she gave to Raja..

yup she did
and madhu is bold not rondu type😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rg0782

Part 8: SO yay Riashba Kundra...atleast the name came...bt Madhu got kidnapped??? hmm interesting...


ya its intresting you will find next intresting too😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rg0782

Part 9: How rude is RK...I am having same feelings as of Madhu's...itna short update nahi chalega aur thoda looong dena...okies???


yaya next is long see na..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bria

waiting 4 nxt...nice update

thanxx
and ya will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

finally I read all last 7 parts in one go...
every part was awesomesee dear...
loved madhus new frnds nd rk is in army that's diff one...bt y he always masking his face do uncover it soon miss.sparrow...
lastly madhu nd raja locked in library nw wats nxt cming eager to read frthr... 😊
update soon dear...


sure will update soon suru
glad you are back😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 11


Ham locked!!!!

I rushed to door and started beating it with my all strength hope it get broken or anyone hear my strong fist

"nahi tootega wo" shouted raja

"this all coz of you...you are reason for all this the trouble maker" I shouted on him

"ab phir se char jaogi kya" he shouted

I noticed I m almost above him and he is bending completely "phir se" as if often do this ghrrr

"u always want to fight me coz of you only we got punishment and coz of you only we get locked ... god what was my sin that I get strucked by person like him" I cried

"oh maidam jee as if aap toh shant baithi thi waha pe lar toh bas ham rahe the" he replied in my tone

And the fighting starts again

And it ends with we both shour aa..aaa...aaa...aaa.aa.a.a.a.a.a

And sits on opposite position in study table

What to do now this all coz of this disgusting guy gawar kaheka... kaha phas gayi mai... god save me.. why god Rishabh save me... ya he is arrogant and all but still he saves me always make a heroic entry here too m hero...and this phone .. bloddy 16th century library no network!!

"jai ho basaman mama ke ham apna tifin le aaye the hamara pet toh 4 roti mein bhar gaya teen aur hai koi khana chahe toh khasakta hai" he exclaimed so that I can here too

I made a face by looking at him and he smiled

How annoying this person is one I don't like him then I m struck with him here and he ghrrr

He just passed tifin to me and joined two chairs and closes his eyes peacefully

Hawww how dam bloddy... I don't have word to explain we are in situation and he is relaxed as this all was his plan...I m hungry but if I ate this food then my ego will broke perhaps so I tried to look otherside but my stomachs mouse were indicating my eyes to look that side

Finally by a stiff fight I taken the tifin and ate the food haaa pet toh bhara

Ahh why I didn't think that before

"raja !! raja!!' I shouted

"kon hai " he waked all of sudden with bafflement 'kaha ka pahar toot para kya hua"

"there would be phone at library na.. we can call guard from that " my mentos mind kicked

"arrey wah maidam jee" and we rushed to reception

Dairy... where is it

"may be in drawer" I pointed

Haa "lock hai lagta hai" he said

"now what" I reacted

"hair pin hai" he asked

"haan" I said and given to him

And he opened drawer from that ... he is theif or what anyway it helped us today

He taken out dairy we taken watch man's num and called from the phone

He came and freed us and we told him a story certainly a fake story

Its 1 perhaps and we two pacing on a empty road neither I m sayng anything nor he

All of sudden a American came to us with a paper in her hand .. that was perhaps the address of her hotel... before I say something raja starts taking with her wow the fluency in his voice amazing he spoke English that was enough to amaze me and in such a fluent way that is really next to 9th wonder for me and he is behaving as a gentle man really a perfect gentle man with that girl...sabko mujhse hee problem hai

"wow" I said as that girl left

"kya hua" he said

"you are amazing in English then why you speak hindi always" I said

He smiled and answer "English aati hai iska matlab ye toh nahi kee ham apne base ko chor de apni sanskriti ko chor de" he said

Thst is amazing he is really a good guy

"mai utna bua b nahi jitna aap samajhti hai maidam jee" he smiled at me "haan aap jaise angrejan ye nai samjhegi' he tauted me

He is not a good guy I will sue him and we started again

"chali jaugi mai yaha se" I said to him

"pakka" he asked

"ya this route will end in m hostel you can leave" I said to him

And he left

As I turned to my route a girl came to me partially half dressed

"didi pls save me ...pls save me" said she is shivering voice

"what happen just cool down what.."I tried to calm her

Raja left I turned to seek help for him but he left perhaps aww now I have to help her...


...😕...

whats next if she get in trouble what will she do

who willcome to help her

raja..rishabh...or someone else

leave your reply pls

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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting part Akku!!!
Both Raja and Madhu have 36 ka Aankda... ROFL
Oho.. So he knows English too... Can't he stay like that only..
Maybe this time her wish fulfills... Rishabh may come... Hehe
Post soon..
Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update & tfs for pm aku !! 😃 do see my pm !! 😊

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