Rishabala FF: Can't Take My Eyes Off Of You: Part 17 on Page 136 19/11

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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interesting part 11...lol...loving rk's witty dialogues to persuade madhu to wear helmet...this bubbly madhu reminds me of Drashti Dhami in real...she is perfect for this character of madhu...haha...madhu's excitement over making alo paratha was funny...kudos to rk for making sincere attempts to bring malik n madhu closer n clearing their differences...

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Rafangirl

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hmm emotional part 12 A..love to see how rk is trying hard to get the stubborn father-daughter duo together...n sultan damn funny eating all time..reminds me of Drashti Dhami's interview where she had mentioned that the real sultan-Avinesh Rekhi hardly eats anything, rather she has seen him eating hardly anything...lol...a completely contrasting chracter...love to see innocent n gullible sikky, this is one character i really love after rishbala...rishbala dances r always filled with romance n passion...the description n intricate details of their dancing movements helped to imagine clearly how sexy n hot they were...hmm...so madhu's nanu enters the show...somehow balraj's face appears in my mind as her nanu...

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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part 12 B interesting...finally all misunderstanding get cleared between rishbala n dips, sultan...glad rk leaving malik house for his self-respect...

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sweet part 13...loved madhu's gesture of addressing rk's house as her home...lol...they were about to make love forgetting madhu's periods...hmm...dinner sequence at rahimchacha's was cute...wow, madhu is big foodie...loving all small incidences of this story

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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beautiful part 14...rk ironing, organizing n packing madhu's clothes was sweet gesture n the flashback bday sequence brought big smile on my face...i think that was the first time rishbala starts to know each other well... n madhu kept her promise n the bday card with her...

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snowgud

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Mind blowing update 😛 Madhu made sikky and trishna eat salty kheer 😃Baba is very happy to have Madhu as his bahu.I like this story very much. beautifully written 👏 Waiting for the next update.Please continue soon 😊

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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part 15 is sweet...rishbala getting ready to head to their 'home' n madhu overcoming all her emotions of leaving her parents behind her...liked the way this part is ended when rishbala expressing apathy towards sulpali, their past, n moving on...it puts closure on their history n signals new beginning with their 1st time 'love making'...

my pov, rishbala r large at heart to forgive sulpali n move on but somehow i can't digest how easily they forgave those traitors...though sulpali fell in love unknowingly, they betrayed, broke trust of rishbala...forgiving is still ok but then those 4 gelling up like buddies is something i didn't find convincing...of course, as a writer, u r trying to suggest that since rishbala hv found each other, they r letting their past go...as a reader, i was expecting rishbala not to befriend sulpali again...though they have no feelings left for sulpali...that break of trust, back stabbing needs some time to heal...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hey update your stories dear u r brilliant and awesome story writer i loved all !! this ff and haunted house one plz update these soon we are waiting 👍🏼

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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also that malik was completely in dark about the complication of rishbala n sulpali relation, i want him to rebuke both sulpali very harshly n cut off ties with them, at least for a brief period, while accepting rishbala whole-heartedly in future...
i just don't want sulpali go free like this easily while making rishbala suffer before they got married...

just bcoz rishbala hv found each other, sulpali's deeds can't be ignored...what if rishbala were not married or had not fallen in loved...still trying to get over their heart-break...while sulpali were happily married by then...

on the contrary, i would love to see sulpali break-off...i know i sound evil but just can't see them enjoying while rishbala facing hard time from family n their respective heart-break...

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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nice part 16...loved madhu's cheerful presence helped to mend the the tensed atmosphere in kundra house...i wish n request to include sulpali as less as possible in the story henceforth...just can't stand them...

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