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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Sweet,Cute & Adorable OS Aaru!Thanks for pm!Throughly enjoyed reading it!Pls do write more OS's!

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Clara20

@Clara20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Lovely os aaru...

aww they r cute wen they fight...

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

oh god oh god oh god...what a lovely lovely os👏...aaru muahh!!!!!!!...its a wonderful os dear👏...super super and super👏...i just loved it...it was a long one...a very very long...and i liked it very very much👏

their fights...its so cute😊😊...he calling her 'pagli'was super.😆😆..wow wow...i liked the fact that trish and madhu became again frnds...and u depicted ria as a +ve character??good dear...otherwise i would hav died by hating her😆

and the biggest shock was when madhu gav sleeping pills to her groom.😆..i thought she was gonna suicide.but she is mad,right???🤣

and the kiss.☺️..wow dear...i liked when madhu pushed him bcoz she felt pain bcoz rishabh was bitting her lips...wow...rishabh was in hungry mood..😆.really really liked it😳

after u said the movie name,i googled it...its old anandhi of balika vadhu,right???

plz plz write more os dear😊

Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Aaru dat was one hilarious Os..I thoyght she a gonna eat dat sleepn pills...bt no...usne ladke ke dood main.

Hahaha 🤣
lovly..os...do write more...I lk ur writing. ..
nd missin ky Rishbala vrry much...

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ankitashaw1996

@ankitashaw1996

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

vrrry nice dear but plzzz update MBM plzzz

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

[QOUTE] waise madhu.. galathi tumhari thi.. warn ark kabhi late nahi hota.." sikky spilled out his thoughts..
Madhu kept crying face..
"sikky. Who are you to say that?? As I said u.. its between us.. none shud interfere... and today we are late coz of me.. and lets leave the topic here itself...[/QOUTE]

LOVED THIS SCENE...

And she gave sleeping pills to the groom.. that was unexpected, different and hilarious...

Loved the story... it was greatt...

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Chinnu

@JINS_ROSE

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awesome story...loved it...😊

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anu023

@anu023

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

hey aaru.. im done wid exams.. thanx for pm... nice os... liked it.. i first thouht she took sleeping pills . when i read entire os.. i was ike oh my...! 😊 😛