Rishabala FF: Every Breath I Take : Thread II Link Posted (31/03) - Page 65

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From concept to chapter 4-

Madhu - Oh boy! 😆😆😆 Lovely I can actually hear a blank female voice saying Oh boy and RK's teasing to him Oh girl.😆😆😆😆 This is a great part.

RK - The best part in him🤣 is his inner talk. You will have to believe me that in all this 4 chapter I looked forward to his inner talks. Until he not started talking to himself I was like he is normal ok type guy but then the spice came.😛 He is so like our Right Kameena inside. 😈 Aww seriously his serious side remind me somewhere of Abhay of PKYEK and spicy side reminds me of RK. A haan two in one 😈🤣 and now I realise that I am missing VD ok back to your story. You know I have a habit to talk to myself.😆😆😆

I loved - She is my girl

Shut up she is not your

Shut up we are same

Ok oue girl...

Kiss her

No...

I thought you slept🤣

OMG I loved his all inner talks.

Seriously RK loves Neev a lot but Madhu is being dragged in all this. There is not her fault anywhere and poor girl seems to be falling for RK. Agree RK has dark past but that doesn't give him rights to not place his desire to a girl whom he wants to live with. After all Dips left for good. RK's gift and falling in love was great. But he is flirting with Madhu openly for his enjoyment.😈 But don't want to accept his love and marry her and do he really think for even once that after six month when they will say no what Madhu will go through. Already she is being fooled by this brother poor her she don't know she is being flirt by elder brother and not small brother.😡 What Ayesha is doing in this story is too just pass the parcel till now.😛

Nice story thanks for pm. Will comment more after reading rest of chapters.

Again the best part was RK's inner talk.

Now I am thinking what he will do in suhag raat,

He is my girl I will kiss her

No he is my girl

Oh shut up whoever do but kiss her

After all we are same.

🤣 Ok before I forgot Rishbala moments were best. Madhu drools on RK a lot and this is second type she is praising him. Poor her must be thinking why his proposal not came to me least she knows that evil person flirting with her openly. Ek baar bhi nahin soch raha hai she is his brother's fianc but then he is this egoistic and now tho she is his girl. Ok before complicating things I must end my comment.