My Cinderella - Rishbala ss part 7 pg31 and final part on pg32 on 13/2 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishablover

nice story...

pls update soon😊

Thank you dear, updating in few mins
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: karamjeet

1st Thanksss 4 dedicating to me too dear...
Awesome start dear...loved it...concept of ur story is also intresting...looking forward 4 it's next part...plzzz continue soon...

Thank you so much karam, updating in a short while
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Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

wow!!! u started new story soon... too good uma dar...

nd love ths concept...do update soon...
not to miss it...
A BIG CONGRATS for ur new sstory...🤗

Thank you suru, will update soon
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Thank you dear
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Thank you sanghita
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Originally posted by: punam2712

congrats for the new story uma

just ensure a happy end for rishbala

Thank you dear, i can't promise for a happy or sad end, i have to work on the climax
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Awesome start Uma Di!thanks for pm!so Madhubala is working As RK's secretary with some purpose which only she & Prem knows!loved RK's equation with his granny!pls continue soon!& Thanks Alot For the Dedication Di!MUAAHHH!!!LOVE U!

Thank you so much lipi dear, those secrets wills be revealed with the story progress
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehreen_taarey

Concept is amazing...

Part 1 was very nyc...

Update next part soon... :-)

Thank you dear, updating next part now
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks to all likes and comments,


As you all guessed, its based on a Tamil movie, but doesn't want to reveal the name as you all may loose interest.

Here goes the next part

Part 2

Days passed by, and one day rishab was deep in sleep, when his phone rang, and he picked up the receiver and he dropped it the next moment on hearing the news,and he immediately rushed down and saw people gathered around his house here and there, and he immediately rushed to her granny room and saw her lying on the bed still, he bend before her and started to cry holding her hand.All formalities are over and now Rishab sat on his living room holding his face on one side and his granny's pic on other side and he was talking to the photo asking it " Why you left me, granny, you are the only one i have" Slowly rishab got out from the loss of his granny and started to concentrate on his business.

One day, when Rishab was playing his golf game, he missed all his strikes on the day and he was frustrated, when madhu came there with another staff to get some papers signed by him,madhu was wearing a pink knee length dress with a netted layer at the bottom and suddenly wind blew very fast and all the papers in madhu's hand flew and fell down, madhu and other people standing over there helped to get the papers back, when rishab remained as a silent viewer, he saw madhu jumping high to catch the papers flying above her, and she gathered all the papers one by one, finally she collected all the papers and came near him and waited for him to sign, as the wind blew heavily, there was dust all over, and everyone rubbing their eyes to get out of the dust, and he stood there still watching her, and slowly he moved towards her and raised his hand to her head, and first madhu got scared
and she stepped backwards, he smirked and came again near her, and took his hands near her head and removed the feather with his left hand, and he held it from flying away, and she turned her gaze to papers telling him to sign, and he signed and she left immediately and he watched her retreating figure from back.

And he continued with his game and tried his next shot, and this time he got it, and his co-player teased him saying "So finally you have got what you want" and RK nodded his head affirmatively and kissed the feather and let it fly away.And he felt him lighter and flying along with that feather all over the place to search for some place rather some one.

Days passed by, now it was about 3 months after his granny passed, and at times, he use to speak with her,and tel her how he miss her and her love and mainly her stories which was always there for him to forget this world and its trouble, with her stories he use to be in his dreamland, where each and everything will happen according to his wish, and he loved it. He avoided calling madhu by her name, and whenever he thinks about his granny stories to him, mainly the cinderella story, which they had modified, he just close his eyes remembering how he took the feather from her hair and let it fly away and soon he crush his bed and goes to deep sleep with his Cinderella dream,and slowly madhu came into his heart, in the place of cinderella, the face of his dream Cinderella was now
been replaced by madhu's face, and he use to laugh at his work time thinking about how he spent his time with his Cinderella, and their happiness of being together, and the love they have for each other,But nobody seems to know about the change happening in RK, the Rishab Kundra, he never let any one enter into his personnel life, not even madhu was aware of any of these changes.


So how was it friends??? I accept, this story may bore you at times, but this is completely different from our normal rishbala story, trust me. And now time for your likes and comments

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