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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

THIS STORY CHEERED ME UP

BOTH KISS AND BEWITCHED LEFT ME SAD AND UPSET

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benaz

@benaz

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Thank you for this OS. It was so cute totally liked the mischievous Madhu haha she kept me laughing till the end😊 And when RK turned the tables on her at the end haha that was hilarious😃

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sangeet

@sangeet6690

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

amazing OS...sometimes best moments of ur life r in worst of situation...i liked this bindas Madhu n their whole baby talks were too cute...i wont mind having my plane hijacked if i get a guy like Rishabh!!!😉

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: book.worm

u bet i did!!!😭😆

😆 😆

unres on PG 1😛

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mehanandita

@mehanandita

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

cute and amazing OS

like madhu a lot

thank u, keep on going👏

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

lovely os lazy i like this madhu

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Clara20

@Clara20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Lovely os lazy...

Loved madhu here..she is so naughty and innoscent too..

and trish she belived madhu over her bro..loved her too...

and my RK wht to say about him...i always loved him whtever he is...

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Kaha se laate ho aisi stories...

i just love ur writing(sigh)...

i get never tired of writing this again and again..😆

loved it. specially the pranks...

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

A complete new avatar of madhu, I thoroughly enjoyed it lazy, sure I will add this o my fav list

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Hmm, "it is illogical and a big blunder" ? I must have totally missed that part.

Lazy, the best part of a good storyteller, like yourself, is that you write so well, that the reader gets completely lost in your story. I tend to forget logic sometimes as long as I am enjoying the read. Who needs logic when the story has completely gripped your imagination?

And that is what you did here. There was one twist after another. Madhu's revenge was a twist, her sitting by RK, her ongoing teasing, and then the unexpected Hijack.

Even though I knew the name of the OS, I actually was not expecting a hijack. I know, I know. Title, airport etc BUT I still completely forgot - good story telling!!!!

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