Rishabala OS : The Proposal

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Laila

@lailapnj

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Just loved it. It was amazing. Thanks.

Happy New year.

Edited by lailapnj - 11 years ago

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Wonderful OS! I love the ones that put a smile on my face. How sweet that RK had been chasing her for years.😊

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Oh my my !! where do u find such RK's lazy ..they are so dreamy !!!
Oh god RK is so mischievous and damn cute heheh !! isn't that cute, that he has come to the event just so that he can meet her. he made the proposal look like, its come from his parents rather than him lol !!
Oh god..where are all such guys 😆😆.. how come i never met any of them ☺️😆😆 !!

Though i loved Madhu's possessive annoyance towards RK for using the endearments on her and checking out Dips and bumping on to her time and time..yet the last scene where he had come to meet Madhu in pretense of asking ice-cream that he hates and the way he spilled the beans took away the cake lol !! uff.. he was in love with since long back, for him it was love at first sight hehee.. i loved every bit of his revelation ..their dance,their talk..Madhu in RK's radar through out the current event..the bra mishap 😆😆..all so cute !!!

OMG !! i had goosebumps ☺️☺️☺️☺️ at the very last line, when Madhu tasted that ice cream left over by Rishabh Kundra and him turning back, seeing it and then blowing a kiss.. haaye !! its so romanic that i read this single line many times !! when i visualized it .. it felt ... picturesque and utterly romantic and alluring ☺️☺️ !!!

Oh Lazy.. i really wanted them to share at least one hot kiss after all such goosebumpy talk heheh !! The kiss.. the only thing that i thoroughly missed in the OS !! sigh !! guess the act of madhu at the end will be the highlighting part of this OS for me 😛😛

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

lovely! i love it! ☺️

oh! what nonsense! this is an OS!?? I WANT THE NEXT PART!!! 😡 😡😡 😆

long comment when u update this and make it two shot 😛 😛 😛 😛

luv u 🤣

update soon 🤣

btw i loved it that he was checking her out since 6 yrs and she had absolutely no idea 🤣

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

lovely new year gift lazy...loved the naughty hottie rk

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awsum os kuku...I want a husband like this RK only...he is not only smart, but understanding, cute, handsome and hot ofcourse...he is just perfect...

I loved his dialogues a lot...nd Sultan as Madhu's brother was mmuuaahh...

He was much like a secret admirer of Madhu...really she is a lucky girl...so many stories on Madhu with the world's best person as partner, RK...

keep writing dear...thnks for pm...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

awww...such a cute love story...

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Lazy...u will never fail to make me blush 😳

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Zeenath Sheikh

@zeenathsheikh8

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Sorry for not replying soon

awesome update

thanks for the pm:)

HAPPY NEW YEAR

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Lazy, you are sooo going to get me into trouble!

I stayed up way late last night reading your latest GEM, and it kinda sorta got me in trouble with dad. He's like, "what is this girl doing so late at night??" Try explaining to dear dad that I am not doing anything wrong at 2 in the morning on the computer but only innocently reading an amazing story!

he believed me of course cause I am the favorite child BUT he was not happy! 😛

So technically it's your fault.

I could not stop reading! I wanted more and more.

This was (again) a fantastic story. Loved RK and I adored Madhu. RK's small perfectly timed revelations were making me crazy. He was her first dance! He fell in love at first sight. He remembered everything she told him. He was watching her through the sun glasses, he told his father yes for the marriage. So many amazing moments. So who the heck could go to sleep????

Lazy, pls any chance you can add one more part???? I know it is an OS but just one tiny (your version of tiny is 8 pages so I am fine with that 😉) one part about their evening. I just don't want this fairy tale to end yet!!!

⭐️

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