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.Shree.

@.Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Lovely Update 😳

RK is changing and is even continuing his studies

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sharmila04

@sharmila04

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

i was hating rk for the first two update...

duno what made me to hate him... either his character or that photo in part 1...

but after reading this part...i love him a lot...

but u said its only four part story...

are you going to end in next part...😒...

but just now i started to like it...

this part was mind-blowing... i loved it so much...

loved every scene

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

AHA!!! some of my questions got answered in this chapter. You are so kind!

So RK was studying law when life took some unexpected turns. I knew it had to be something!

I so loved this chapter. I think this is my fav chapter so far.

Where to start?

Madhu's outburst to RK. Besides telling him how she really feels about his life style, Madhu also told him how she feels so safe with him and trusts him. OK, I read that paragraph twice and then I read it one more time just because I loved it so much.

After a confession like that, of course RK will want to change his life for her.

And those parts were so nice. Madhu's faith in RK grows more, and RK realizes that Madhu cares for him now.

Sigh. RK. I can completely see him sitting under the tree watching Madhu. Loved how he went to Madhu to get the bandage done and damn - I melted when I read the line where he says the cut hurts Madhu more than him. ❤️

Hiding RK behind the curtain? Too cute!!!

I also like how though you are changing RK - well Madhu is changing RK - still RK's language still is tapori style. It's ... well sexy darn it! 😳

Madhu cooks for him, Madhu feeds him. How the heck is RK going to concentrate on studying??? But that part was fantastic. RK asks Madhu to marry him and they have that sweet ceremony.

Now ... what is coming up?? Will saasu-ma show up???

Edited by 4ever4love - 11 years ago

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

RK does have a back story!! I knew he wasnt a gunda just becos:). I'm also glad that he loves Madhu enough to quit bad things for her. Aw, Madhu is finally realizing that RK is not bad at heart and sincerely loves her. I really loved this chapter and how dheere dheere they've grown closer under Sasuma's nose. It was sweet and naive, something both have them have missed. I didnt think this story could be so sweet and gently romantic after its explosive and obsessive start. I'm really loving this story. I absolutely cannot wait to read what happens next.

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Amazing update Lazy :)

I love how RishBala's relationship has improved over the time. Finally everything will be alright between them.

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

woww...I loved the way she accepted him...and now they are together..but I am worried the twists 😕😕😕

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

This story is getting me impressed by each update, love this RK more and more, really can't get enough of this man, and your story makes him more sweeter and cutest, though you have portrayed him as a gunda, but i completely love him.

RK changing himself for his madhu, and madhu slowly started to accept him, it was so sweet, and i guessed these lovebirds can't stay from each other til their exams get over, and it happened, so how will their exams be, but i hope, at the end you will have some twist, so will be waiting for tat, as next part would be the end,and it will be followed by epilogue na???

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rinkrk

@rinkrk

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

masttt update... finally madhu accept rk... luved it...😳

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Firstly thank you so much kuku dear for dedicating this part to me...love you...

Next the update was again was blaster...

The way RK handled the badmash company was lovely...just like hero...

When Madhu told RK about her kidnapping and all I was feeling happy thinking that chalo accha hai they are coming close but the next moment they had a fight...

Oho he left all those filthy things for her...what a pure love yaar...

He got the job..yippee!!! Now he will bring home his khoon pasine ka money and not someone elses...

Now Madhu started falling in love with him...they are so cute yaar...

RK's way of putting the ointment was lovely...his love is truly so good...

RK was not at all bad person...the circumstances made him so...

He will now again start studying...all credits to madhu...

I too expected RK to go back to that line but look he is completely changed...now I guess Padmini too won't have any probs to accept her damaad...

How sweet Madhu is cooking for him...the moment she entered I have understood now something real good will happen...the feeding scene reminded me how Madhu fed RK with her hand in the show...their remarriage was just perfect...

YaYY!!! Its suhaagraat time...u left the update on such a cliff hanger...now I hope that the next update should be real hot and happening...

Waiting crazily for the next update so cnt. soon...and thnks for pm...😊😊😊

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

lazy i have book marked it read it again n again dis is da case with all ur stories.

really amazing n v well written.

loved da way rk saved his biwi like a real hero then dere convo

i thought madhu reemoved da mangal sutra coz of hatred but it was v amazing dat she was annoyed with him coz of his ways n da way he said wat if i leave it all it really touched my heart.

he was a law student wow n he resumed his studiez

rk back story was a heart touching one

dey came close slowly

loved dere re marriage da candles n da blood wala sindoor

so dey r going to consummate their marriage?

wat will b padminis reaction?

thanx fr pm waiting fr next one

loved da song