Rishabala Three Shots: Luck By Chance : Part Three on Page 16 (2/06)

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Laters.Baby

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Posted: 11 years ago

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It Was Treat To Read...Wonderful End Lazy!! 👏

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rdave1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Awesome end to the story. I love the bump in their story, which was more literal. But loved in the end neither could go through with it. They both took responsibility and neither gave up on their education. Awesome job!

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Uma

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow finally this story also ended, i feel so sad when any of ur story comes to an end.

Can't believe that RK, at this age would become such a wonderful father ad dutiful husband, who bears all tantrums of his wife.

Very nice update as always.

Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago

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Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

woww wat a flawless ending
loved it lazy u rock
plss update bewitched n just married too

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jalebi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

fab story!! its d perfect ending dear!!⭐️

after reading last part i thought now they will fight for their love with their parents but u turned d story completely in a diff. but beautiful way!!😛 so always expect d unexpected from lazy, rite!😉

i always love to see rishbala as parents!! after "arranged marriage" i got something to read like that!!😳

i dont know how u make all ur Rk's too adorable!!😛

he is one hands on father!! he is really responsible at this young age!!😳

"Because then I would be shit scared and worried that someone would get her pregnant like I got you pregnant." RK whispers to her.😆

"And for that my wife is teaching you for your exams otherwise you would be forever here giving your apartment to other couples to make more babies"😆

omg lazy! i was rofling after reading those lines!!🤣

its a complete package dear with full of love, care, trust, support, comedy, silly fights!!👍🏼

i loved sultan's silly reasoning for rm's marriage!😆

oh my! how i forgot d professor, she is sweet & supporting hun!😃 i loved d story inch by inch!! many place i read d lines twice to feel it!! i can go on describing how much i liked this ending!! its one outstanding ending😳

p.s if i live for extra 10yrs from my life span then for sure i ll give d credit to you!! u r making me so happy with ur stories!!😳

thank u so much dear!!🤗

Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago