Rishabala Three Shots: Luck By Chance : Part Three on Page 16 (2/06)

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

SO THEIR AFFAIR IS GOING FULL FLEDGED

BUT THEY HAVE GOT CAUGHT NOW

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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bria

@bria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

i loved this story...ppl really do craziest things in clg life

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Nice update Lazy... god desperate much didnt even leave the train 😆 they are super quick n very eager but still love each other a lot underneath all that I can see.. lets see now wat wll mummy papa do seeing them... 😆

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Julie

@4ever4love

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

On a train???? Can you do that on a train??? My mind wanders to the train in Jab We Met and I cannot see 'that' happening there.

I need new friends. 🤓

Hats off to you. Why am i impressed? Because you are an incredible story teller. And you have managed to surpass all boundaries.

Confused? I reread the 'first' part of Luck by Chance. Originally it was an OS and I remember thinking the first time I read it that the story was different. It was mostly about RK and less about Madhu. You took a chance by focusing on only one main character.

So the first part was written in one mode. Then your active imagination brought out another idea. The way you have written the second part is very different then the first.

Both parts are fantastic and they both showcase your talent. You are able to write in so many varieties, different forms.

I wonder if you found it challenging in changing the format between the chapters? Or did you notice the change?

Story was unexpected. And I liked this surprise. I like how RK & Madhu are so comfortable with each other and they have stayed together.

Not a fan of Sultan here but he is right in his thoughts. It is realistic. And how RK & Madhu have managed to beat the odds is wonderful.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

u know what??? ...u teach us general knowledge ...or atleast some general awareness 😉😉😉

i havn't heard of such make-out sections in a moving overn8t train 😲😲😲...so it was a shock for me 😲😲😲

but the biggest shock is that...the rishbala jodi whom i thought shy turned into wild cats 😆😆😆

their love journey was so cute 😳😳😳...so passionate 😳😳😳...u said its 14+,but i think it should be atleast 16+ 😳😳😳...

.so hot dear😳😳😳

i'm happy atlast padmini and malick found them...i didn't like it when they r doing it behind their parents...i atleast want parents to know their kid is in love with someone

ab shaadi kab hoga??????...waiting dear 😊😊😊

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moumita.madhu

@moumita.madhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

IN TRAIN HAA!!!!!!!!!!!! I love all your stories!just crazy abt your stories! Bt i think i have some problem with my profile n i m not able to put a like!!!pls dont stop sending me pms!

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shasha

@shasha1989

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

nice update dear
thanks for pm

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Awsum update kuku..loved how Rishbala's relationship grew and the song was mindblowing...i had not heard it before so just downloaded it and it was amazing...but the last part of the update...I hope everything sort outs soon...

Thnks for pm :)