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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

LAZY LOVED RKS POV

IT WAS A CONTINUATION OF THE OTHER ONE

BUT THE END WAS TOO QUICK - WANTED TO KNOW RK'S THOUGHTS ON MEETING SHAMSHER AGAIN

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Superbbb OS dear...loved d Rk POV of dis OS but dear u didn't give dat kundali part ...but all over is Superbbb ;Out standing...

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Mahi78

@Mahi78

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Too good. Rk's POV is much romantic than that of Madhu's. Though we all guessed that Malik and RK met in the bar but never thought that he started noticing her frm day one.😉

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Aww lazy i can never be tired of saying i loved ur writing
Loved rk's pov
N rk n shamsher's bonding
Beautifully written
Loved it

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

y do u make me fall in love with RK all over again ? 🤔 😭

lovely os 👏

love u 😳

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furore

@furore

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

it was a lovely story but i wanted to knw how he felt after meeting Shamsher Malik as Madhu's father.

anyways, keep up the good work and let us read these wonderful stories 😃

Edited by furore - 11 years ago

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riyakhanna728

@riyakhanna728

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

superb lazy... Liked RK's POV more as I love him more 😳

You r a fantastic writer 👍🏼

Thanks for the wonderful story and PM 😊

Edited by riyakhanna728 - 11 years ago

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

thank u for this part...I loved it...& finally I know RK's p.o.v...loved malik & RK convo parts...

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Z-a-p-p-e-d

@Z-a-p-p-e-d

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Beautiful os ❤️more on Rishabh's point of view

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

looking into someone's eyes for the second time in my life I fell in love.

after reading this line i fell in love with you.gosh you are one hell of a writer.you are a wonder.the dude & the ordinary girl is my most favourite os & this one is another most favourite os of mine.it's so beautiful.

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