Rishabala OS: The Beauty & The Admirer

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

It was beautifully written lazy. I read the 1st version too and I wish you could have written RK's version longer when they were secretly meeting and their marriage etc 😆 I really like it. and this version was defo my fav. im not a guy either but guys do become serious about girls at a point of life and its beautiful to read how he saw her inner and outter beauty and respected her so much. the way he loved her everything. amazing.. i read it 4 times already <3

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manju21.k

@manju21.k

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

UNRES.😎
Awesome OS Lazy...Loved it...😳
RK is so sweet, Caring and wonderful person...Love him...😳

Edited by manju21.k - 11 years ago

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mmradhu

@mmradhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Fabulous os... loved the way you describe rk's pov... the way rk and malik's bounding... thanks for pm and take care

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

You are awesome😊, did you know that? I had read The Dude and the Ordinary Girl a few days and loved it. I was going to post after I read the AN and ask you to please write the story in RK's POV cos it would be so interesting. Today I discovered you did, and I LOVE Beauty and the Admirer. I love happy endings, epilogues and RK's crazy thoughts and the story had everything. Its now one of my favourites⭐️.

BUT, you forgot one of the most important parts!!! I desperately wanted to know what RK was thinking when he walked into Madhu's house and saw Sher Khan uncle😲!!!! How funny his thoughts must have been and how gobsmacked Madhu's dad might have been🤣 lol

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sangeet

@sangeet6690

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

thank you so much Lazy for writing RK's perspective...it was like reading Midnight Sun after Twilight...thoroughly enjoyed i wish there was more of it..i wanted to keep reading!!!
n i love u Lazy for writing such beautiful stories!!!