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RSP04

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome Maria..👏👏 Cant wait for your next FF...Thnaksss

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Tell me about it!!

Hiyu.. most of us are sadists here.😆 I so wanted them to die and that is where this idea came from. 😆 I gave it a thought and within five minutes I had the whole plot played out in my mind. 😆
i was only thinking of om shanti om plot 😆

I discussed it with Anki and she motivated me to write an FF on it, so here it is.

I won't give out any spoilers. Sorry about that. 😛😆 i got the hint 😎

And thank you so much Hiyu! The prologue is Anki's though. 😳

P.S. When I was writing this FF I knew that koi parhe na parhe.. Hiyu will definitely read it.. 😆
tu mujhe badnaam kyu kar rahi hai ? 🤔 🤣

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Humble.Heart

@Humble.Heart

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

A sublime piece of creative writing, the whole death concept supported by the mythology of lovers bound to one another, your use of emotive diction, the intricate ways you composed their last moments; creating intense imagery of the setting and their actions, yet slow motion surreal feel of their last encounter. So many questions in my head and I'm so looking forward to the answers you provide through this novel. Splendid beginning 👏