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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dhadkan an epic

Prologue

Radha and Pabbo decide to retire to bed, the launch party had been very hectic, Even as they move out Rk came running down the stairs,his eyes full of pain and guilt while his hand crushed a letter..-"Madhu ..MADHU..."

Radha-"What happened Rishab? Why are you yelling for her?"

Rk-"Ma where. Where is Madhu?"

Pabbo tauntingly-"Must have gone out to celebrate the success of her film."

Rk-"No..."he stammered and begun to try for Roma's number from his mobile...but Roma plainly refused to pick up.

Bittuji came in fuming after cutting a call .Rk pulled him and questioned-"Bittuji where is she? Please tell me..."

For the first time ever even as all watched, Bittuji pushed rather than shrugging Rk's hands away.

Rk-"Bittuji please just please tell me where she is..Is she ok? Is the baby.."

Bittuji cut him-" Why worry for someone who never cares about you chief.Why?"

Rk a bit shocked -"Bittuji"

B-"What wrong did I say?You always took her for granted Chief...She is not your plaything..."Even before Bittuji could blast more, a passive looking Madhu walked in.Rk tried to meet her eyes but failed...

3 weeks was all it took for him to break her but now lifelong to mend.Is it possible to mend a completely shattered glass without any marks? Can Madhu really forgive all of RK's mistakes and hurt he inflected...Will Rk never Give up?The industry she hated is the only thing which can give her peace..Soon Madhu finds herself falling for a certain Mr.X...will life change for better or become worser?

Should I continue? What is your opinin?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RK Madhu's realtionship is Strong & TRUST is Basis...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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yes plz continue...its very good..😃
but Mr.X and Madhu falling for him😲🤔...NO plz..😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My answer depends on who is this mr. X...HAHA hightime...she leaves rk but y shld now she fall for X ?.she's strong enough to be single
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...pls continue...nd pls nly rishbala...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mr.X !! Ohh... Interesting.

Please continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice update
So madhu leave rk n falling for mr.x
Intersting
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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After a lot of thoughts I am going to write this story which will have around 10 parts only...It will have a rainbow of emotions from guilt,love,anger,sorrow,helplessness to love and joy...Here you will have a new side to Sikky,Pittai of Deepali and shock treatment of Pabbo,A brother-sister bonding and the attempts of a frantic husband...

Ok I talk too much and only those who comment for the below part will get PM's for the next part...likes alone will not earn you a PM...

PART 1-THE LETTER

My dear Rk;

Wondering if I should call you Rishab anymore because I feel I don't know you at all.You might wonder why I am writing something like a letter but I don't remember when We spoke something civil with each other because the only thing that happen is you blaming me for everything in your life as if I had plotted everything from the start .Of course you would after all I am a bad omen in your life aren't I? I felt we married each other out of love..The very love of mine which you take for granted, Probably we should end this...I am sure that you deserve a girl better than me in beauty,class,attitude,tolerating ur so called Ex-Girlfriend and of all with a good Nakshatra.

The day I learnt I was pregnant was the happiest moment of my life, you call this selfishness just because my pregnancy will harm your film...Aren't you being selfish?I hate the film industry because I lost my best friend to it...a fact which not even my family knows...but now you do.Leave it ,I assure you that I will complete this film of yours no matter what...Let me know if you still want to be tied to me in case of marriage. I also promise that I won't tie you down with a child after we divoerce.The child will be mine and only mine I have decided to retire from the industry once the film is over and will probably just go away from you and your family for ever...I am tired of being you punchbag.I am a human to and it hurts.

Please forgive me if you can for not listening to you and getting the child aborted. It is not just a child Rk It is a symbol of our love.Every second seeing your hatred for our child is what that kills me more..I am used to your hatred but this baby doesn't .Not just yours but everyone; Radha ma and Pabbo think I am the reason for all your misfortune...What do I do if Deepali thinks I am the reason she lost you...

Right now I am in a place where I don't know how and what to decide...Please help me this last time

Your's

Madhubala

Rk felt his hands shiver and eyes pool up in his eyes. What had he done to his precious Love...She was the only relation who had stood by him through all kinds of trouble .He couldn't breath as tears threatened to choke him completely. He had been a complete jerk to her. He had been unable to see beyond him,while she saw only him and his happiness. How was he ever going to make it up to her? Fumbling he picked up his mobile and called her number and to add to things it was switched off...Oh god She was not well earlier in the morning.No one bothered about her and he did not as well ."Did she have something to eat?drink?Did she rest enough? "All of such questions arose in his mind...Only she could answer but WHERE WAS SHE?

Edited by smritiz - 11 years ago
revti21 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb update...does she had an abortion
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice update...
awww luved madhu's letter to rk...
wonder where she is..
continue soon

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