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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

kavya...that was so beautiful.

loved it very much. though she couldnt get back her memories she felt the pang in her heart when she was about to leave him.

you did a splendid job👏

Edited by tanuja.siri - 11 years ago

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

lovely os kavya dear... u written it amazingly just loved it... 😳

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

i LOVED UR OS THROUGHOUT...normally in cases like this the person suffering gets his/her memory back...nut u gave a new dimension to the story by not going the predictable way and weaving the story in your own way...I loved RK's dialogue of creating new memories...it was just amazing...keep writing dear and thnks for pm...

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kia karoge jaan kar

@JsparrowJ

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel
Very beautiful..recreating their life with new memories sigh !! It reminded me of John and vidya in salaam-e-ishq..the only couple I loved in the movie apart from hilarious sohail n isha !! It's very nice Kavya 😃

tu kabi toh jhon ko chor de kanchu

didu next os mein jhon abrahim ko guser dena kanchu khus ho jaegi

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kia karoge jaan kar

@JsparrowJ

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

now coming to story

firstly thankxx for dedicating this to me love you

and i love this we will make new memories madhu

wah that make me remember EK NAYA KAL BANAEGE HAM

and this song i read it first tiem but its lyrics are beautifull

loved OS di...

thank you so much

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: JsparrowJ

tu kabi toh jhon ko chor de kanchu
didu next os mein jhon abrahim ko guser dena kanchu khus ho jaegi

Arre yaar !! John ko toh main sapne mein bhi nahi chod sakthi lol !! Kya karoon yaar "gehra pyaar" !! Yup ..jab koi John ko kahin bhee ghused dega..wahan par mujhe pahunchnaahee hoga... !! For my bad boy "John Abraham" 😆😆 !! Just like captain jack sparrow for you Akku ..bilkul waise 😆☺️ !!

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kia karoge jaan kar

@JsparrowJ

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Arre yaar !! John ko toh main sapne mein bhi nahi chod sakthi lol !! Kya karoon yaar "gehra pyaar" !! Yup ..jab koi John ko kahin bhee ghused dega..wahan par mujhe pahunchnaahee hoga... !! For my bad boy "John Abraham" 😆😆 !! Just like captain jack sparrow for you Akku ..bilkul waise 😆☺️ !!

hehe 😆

blush mat kar samjhi...😡😆

jack for me is pagal as i m

jocker as i m

i m nt like haaye mera jack

and BTW jhonny dep mere pappa ke age se b bara hai😆

uske bachhe mere se bare hai😆

so kachu tera john love is different from my jack love

ab kar blush😳😆