Rishbala FF:Soul to soul connection Chapter 16 updated on page 24 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Awesome update.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
loved the update...the whole nick and madhu convo had me confused at first just like rishab i thought they were in relationship but by the end i could figure out that they are friends/relatives.
and the sparks seam to fly and are visible to people too lets see how they are going to take up their fondness for each other.

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
i read all 5 updates at a go! its brilliant ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
pls add an index on first page and whenever u update mention it in ur title pls ๐Ÿ˜ณ


coming to updates
ch1 - loved it! u have a great knack of portraying interesting scenes with crisp words ๐Ÿ˜ณ i loved their first meeting ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

ch2 - liked the subtle hints of madhu being liked by the kundra family...and then the holding by the waist stamping it that madhu is affected by his touch and also that subconsciously Rk put his hand around her as if to protect her...there's already an unknown connection..i love it ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

ch3 - just brilliantly penned RK with his camera...also the way u wrote about madhu's yoga postures is commendable ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

ch4 - i love love love this chapter...read it twice...i love their bitter conversation and then the sudden kiss...i never comment on love making scenes actually but, this has to be the best kiss i have ever read...u penned it stunning๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

ch5 - makes me eager to know madhu's past...maybe i'm as desperate as RK ๐Ÿ˜†...looks like nick is madhu's neighbour (old neighbour i guess) ...RK has been spying and staring at madhu's house all the while ๐Ÿ˜†...i love him ๐Ÿ˜† lovely update...m waiting waiting waiting to read more!๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

ps : have sent u a buddy request..pls pm me wen u update..thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by war_is_peace - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Superb update. Loved reading it. I really like the fact that RK has decided to pursue Madhu. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Looking forward to reading about them. Please update soon and thanks a lot for the PM.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
lovely update dear , what is the realation between nick and madhu ,and love rishab ,thanks for the pm dear ,waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's lovely one !! Madhu and her clouded mind all thanks to Rishabh Kundra ! Nick seems to know Madhu too very well and he does seem like a real good friend ! Ah-ha someone spying inspite of the resolve hehe !! I love it when Rishabh Kundra owes to not follow his own resolve of leaving madhu on her own๐Ÿ˜† !! Ah it's gonna get all the more interesting with all the "leave me" and "I will so not " lol !!
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super update dear๐Ÿ˜Šjust luved...frist i thought nick is her lover...and the "kocham ciebie"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
but then undestand he may be her frnd or bro...
y madhu is going away frm rishabh????
anyway rishabh is gonna get her...so lets watch hw he woo her๐Ÿ˜†right???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update .. Liked d understanding b/w Nick & Madhu .. What is it with Madhu's past .. Getting some negative vibes here & it's kinda freaking me out .. At d same tym i m loving d flow of d story .. So vl w8 fr dat part 2 expose at d right tym .. Till den let me enjoy Madhu's " Let me go " & Rishab's " I WILL bt ONLY in my way " .. ๐Ÿ˜‰


Cont soon.
Edited by colorsluv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update, while reading i thought nick and madhu were lovers, but he is married was glad to read, he has come ti know that madhu loves rishab and rishab will go after her, like how the story is going and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 6

Madhu bade Nick bye; was about to turn back to go inside when she saw Mayra and stopped to have a chat with her. Mayra was just complementing her on her dress when Rishab walked to Mayra, purposely looking at him, Madhu told its a birthday gift from Nick.

Isn't it beautiful?

It's lovely.

The colour really suits you.

Yeah, the colour really suits you Madhu. But the bodice is too skimpy for my liking.

He gave a peck to Mayra and started to leave.

"Did he just check me out?"

Mayra started giggling.

"Stop ogling at me Mr.Kundra."

Chuckling Rishab turned back, gave her a flying kiss and told "Have a good day Madhu."

God, is he always this flirtatious.?

Mayra starts gigling again and says"well that depends on the person. Looks like he has taken a shine to you."

Ah...God save me then.

So what are your plans for today Madhu?

Well nothing much till evening.

Hmm then shall we hit some spa and have some girltime.

"I'm not sure if you should go to a spa in this condition of your."

Dont be silly, I'll just get a pedicure and manicure done. I can't paint my toe nails in this condition. That is reason enough for me to accompany you.

Mayra booked a massage session for Madhu and manicure & pedicure for both of them.

Madhu had her massage first. After she realised that the masseur couldn't speak english, she gave up speaking and started to enjoy her massage. They used hot stones to massage. Madhu thought they would just place the stones on her back, but instead they were actually used to massage.

After the massage, the masseur asked Madhu to step into the hot tub, guided her to the ring the buzzer if she needed anything else and left the room.

Having heard Madhu tell his sister that it was her birthday, Rishab wanted to do something really special for her. He had refrained from wishing her in the morning, but now he wasn't sure if he did the right thing. Knowing his sister might have made some plans with Madhu, he called her up on some pretext. He reached the spa and told the receptionist, that he was here to meet with Miss. Madhubala for a photoshoot. The masseur who had just come out of Madhu's room heard Rishab and thought probably that was what she was trying to explain to her earlier. He took him to madhu's room and gave him the security key. Guided him as to where the power switches would be and left. Rishab thanked his stars that his fib had worked out without any hitch. He felt like randy teenager who was trying to make out in back seat for the first time. And before he thought he could change his mind, he entered her room, locked it and shut the power supply.

The room was beautifully decorated with bare minimum furniture. It was a cylindrical room in the soft shades of cream and red. There was a large mirror from floor to ceiling on one wall. And one big hot tub right in the center of the room. The room was completely covered with rose petals and with a few scattered scented candles. Just the look of it made u feel, u are in heaven. And right in that tub was Madhu completely soaked, neck deep in it. As if sensing that somebody was watching her, she opened her eyes to find Rishab right in front of her.
"You?"
"Yeah me"
" what the heck? "
Rishab took a 180 degree turn and told "stay right there."
"Don't come out, else I cant be modest not looking at you."
She tries to reach for the buzzer, but he tells her that the power is switched off.

"And dont even think of screaming, this is a sound proof room"
Sighing she sinks into the tub further down.
"How the hell did you get in?"
"I have my ways."
Rishab walks back to her and tells her to cut the cake.
Ah hmmm
He goes down on his kness, brings the small miniature cake almost near to her. Lights a sparkler and ask her to make a wish.

"C'mon make a wish"

She closes her eyes to make a wish.

As she opens her eyes, he wishes her, looking straight into her eyes.

"Happy birthday Madhu."

"Now cut the cake."

He takes the cake and feeds her.

His fingers touch her lips while feeding. And her lips start trembling and feel parched. She wets her lips by running her tongue over her lips.

"Wanna have orgasm."

Madhu blurts out "what?"

The drink on the side table, probably your thirsty., you are wetting your lips. He replies with a smirk.

"Hmm yeah , yeah. "

"I was just wondering how can I have an orgasm in a tub."

"Oh, my god, did I just say that loud?"

I think I'm feeling giddy with all hot water combined with his heated looks...

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Edited by lovebookworks - 11 years ago

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