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Hey guys thinking something this story cam to my mind m not dividing it in fragments tell me hows this

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YAADEIN

Date 28 june 2013

Padmini and shansher waves inside hospital having their daughter Madhu on stretcher. With them rushing two nurses.

"doctor dekhiye na kya ho gaya hai madhu ko ye kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hai" said crying padmii with bafflement

"aap log yahi rukiye ham inka check up karte hai"

"Doctor sahib please meri bacchi ko baccha lijiye mai aapke hath jorti hu" exclaimed padmini in crying tone

"dehiye aap inhe sambhaliye" said doctor to shocked shamsher who even was not knowing what to react and doc tooks madhu inside

(AFTER FEW MIN)

"Aap mujhe exactly bataiye hua kya tha?/" asked doctor from madhu's parents

" jee madhu roz ke tarah kaam se aayi but aaj usne kuch kaha nahi seedhe apne kamre mein chali gayi kuch der baad maine chai dene gayi toh usne darwaaja ni khola maine darke inhe bulaya inohne darwaaja tora toh madhu andar chair par baithi thi ham ne bahut kosis kee ke wo bole lekin usne kuch ni bola ham darke use yaha laaye" explained padmini in crying tone

" but doctor hua kya hai" asked shamsher

"Dekhiye aapki beti kinhi mental pressure kee wajah se coma mein chali gayi hai" said doctor

"Mental pressure par wo toh kal tak theek thi" said padmini

"Dekhiye ye baat toh sirf madhu hee jaan sakti hai" said doctor

HOSPITAL's COMPARTMENT

MADHU ON BEAD(ECG, pulse meter working)

A drop of tear fell from her eye certainly her body was not working but her heart and soul were busy in recollecting YADDIEN of what happened in past 6 month

Her soul takes her 5 month 22 days ago... she is walking with her best friend Rishabh ... Rishabh Kundra

He takes her in a quite place where no one is there and tooks out red rose from his pocket and bent to his knees... madhu felt her heart beating more... he proposes her... r.k. saying.. madhu tum meri jindagi ho tum ho toh mai hun I love you... I love you more than I loved anyone ever... madhu was smiling but suddenly her smile faint and she replied how dare you to ask anything like this to me.. I thought you are my bestest friend and you.. I never expected anything like this from you ever u dioppointed me and don't try to talk me ever

Madhu left from ther leaving a broken heart but the case of suspection was she turned and she was crying... crying a lot

Soul came back but then her mind takes her 7 months ago where shamsher malik slapped a girl and throws her out of house and then puts kerosene on his body and was to burn himself but padmini stops him

Padmini saying... ye kya kar rahe hai aap mere bare mein sochiye bacchon k bare mein sochiye..

"Kya sochu inke bare mein jinhe maine paala posa itna bara kiya wahi mujhe samaj se nikalwa rahe hai padmini tumhari bari beti ne dusre jaat ke larke se shaadi kar lee hai... na usne hame samaj mein baithne layak chora na jeene layak arrey aaj wo dusri jaat key aha gayi hai kal ye madhu b chali jaaegi inhe hamari kya fikr hai kahin ka nahi chora trishna ne hame iss badnami se toh mar jana hee behtar hai" said shamsher helplessly

Madhu rushes to her dad.. papa aaisa kuch ni hoga mai ussi se shadi kaugi jo hamari jaat ka hoga I promise aap please marne kee baat mat kijiye mai kabhi aapka sar iss samaj mein jhukne ni dungi

Shamsher sees madhu and hugged her

MIND came back to hospital and heart takes her to the night of that day when she broken r.k.'s heart

Kaisi hai ye udaasi chayi

Mere dil..

Kaisi gahri hai ye tanhai..

Mere dil

Madhu hugging her pillow tightly and crying dam badly. She is crying and sying In heart I m sorry r.k... I m sorry tum nahi jaan sakte tumhara dil torke mai tumse jaaydaa tanha hui huun.. bahut pyaar karti hun tumse par mai apne papa ko phir se usi condition mein ni daal sakti I m sorry r.k. ham do lag alag society se belong karte hai mere papa isse kabi ni accept karenge aaj shayad tum sambhal ke aaage b barh jaoge par kal shayad tum ni sambhal paaoge I m soory pls. mujhe bhool jaaana... and she cried whole night

Rahoon mein yaadon kee khamosi barse

Ankho mein jo gum hai aansu ko tarse

tu he bata kyu yr hua

bujh gaya kyu har diya..

kaisi hai ye udaasi chayi mere dil...

back to hospital

doctor comes out and tells madhu's parents that they have to operate madhu as her condition is critical

a drop of tear again slips from madhu's eye and her beating heart takes her to todays morning

she was picking her files and was in hurry

"breakfast to kar le beta" shouted padmini

"Nahi maa aaj jaldi jana hai " said madhu and steps out of home

She rushes fastly and goes to madir ask for a puja that and goes inside temple

"Kiske naam ke puja karani hai beti" asked pujari

"Rishabh Kundra aaj uska birthday hai baba uske naam ke puja kar dijiye" replied madhu

And was praying " aaj us insaan ka janmdin hai bappa jisko mai apne aap se jyada chahti hu aur jiska dil maine bahut pahle he tor diya tha mujhe pata hai wo mujhe bhool gaya hoga aap use jindagi kee aaisi uchaiyaa dena ke wo hamesa khus rahe"

She turned and shocked its radha (r.k.'s mother)

"Kiske liye ouja karne aae ho madhu" asked radha

"Wo aunty" said confused madhu

"Aap ne kya naam bataya tha" asked pujari

"Rishabh Kundra" both said in chaos

"uske liye puja karne aae ho jiska dil tumne tor diya tha" asked radha

Madhu was shocked kya r.k. ne apni maa ko b bta diya tha she was thinking

"Use milna nahi chahogi" said radha in tears

Madhu chahti thi but she denies and radha kept on insisting and takes madhu with her

R.k.'S HOME

"Chalo cake kate " said radha

"Aunty par" madhu was to say something but radha pulled her in r.k.'s room jaha madhu ke pairon tale jammen khisak gayi IT WAS R.K.'S PIC WITH HAAR ON THAT

Madhu was shaken she was not knowing what to react she was in state on schock

"USSE cancer tha" radha started saying " usne suna tha PYAR ZINDAGI HAI usne socha shayad tumhara pyaar use zindagi de isliye wo tumhare paas gaya par use kuch nahi mila mai tumhe blame nahi kar rahi madhu par sach yahi hai USNE PYAAR KO ZINDAGI SAMJHA AUR TUMNE PYAAR KO ZINDAGI KA EK HISSA" and radha cried

Madhu doesn't replied she moved out of house she was moving streets, grounds she reached her home doent talked with anyone reached room



Oh, love of mine
With a song and a wine
You're harsh and divine
Like truths and a lie

But the tale ends not here
I have nothing to fear
For my love is yell of giving and hold on

And the bright emptiness
In a room full of it
Is a cruel mistress
Whoa oh!

I feel this unrest
That nest all hollowness
For I have nowhere to go and I'm cold.

And I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

And I'm so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!

She opens her almirah and takes that flower which r.k. had given her hugged her tight and sits on rocking chair moving to and fro

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera, haaye!

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera

Aashiq tera
Bhid me khoya rehta hai,
Jaane jahaan
Poocho to itna kehta hai

That I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

And I'm so lonely yeah
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!

Back to hospital

Doctor comes out of OT and said

SORRY HAM USSE NAHI BACHA SAKE

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Un Res 😉
Yippe me first 🥳 !! Dancing all the way !!
Wow captain Jack sparrow ...it's one awesome story !! I loved its much !! It had so much pain n emotions... The way it was unfolded left me in awe !! Felt sad for both RK n Madhu ..yet loved the ending as at least they are together now somewhere in some other dimension I am sure they will be together...amen !!

So how was your Diwali celebration Sparrow 😃..hope u had lots of fun 😉
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wow!heart touching story👏

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good one aaku 😊
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It was so heart touching. Loved it.
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omg so heart touching jack ,loved it ,nice writing
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TU TO MUJHSE EK KADAM AAGE NIKLI AKKU... MAINE TO EK KO MARA THA.. TUNE TO DONO KO MAAR DIYA.. LOL

BUT ON SERIOUS NOTE, IT WAS HEART WRENCHING...

LOVED THE CONCEPT AND THE SONGS... TRULY APT !!

WHEN I READ THE TITLE, I WAS GETTING SOME EMOTIONAL VIBES..!

GOOD JOB BARBIE DOLL !!

THUMBS UP !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os akku.. I liked the songs and found it very apt.. But the end made me to feel sad.. Next time come back with a happy ending pls
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awesome & emotional os akku di!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uff sab ke sab rk ko kyun maar rahe
But beautiful n heartwrenching os

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