Rishbala TS : Arranged Marriage (Part 1 & 2 on Page 1) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing lazy amazing ,wonderful os👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😃good emotions are well build and how sweet of RK to everynight kiss and go to sleep waiting for her approval... I was knowing it he is giving her space and time to understand and move on with him.
Madhu became so possessive for him and RK as well became obsessed and possessed... Loved it the possession story and love all blend perfectly together.
Don't know why but you end up reminding me of Zara.92(IF id) she is great writer misses her sometimes.🤗 All together nice work dear.
Edited by beautiful_heart - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
I LOVED IT!!!!!!
From the characterizations to the story, wonderful.

I love the way you portray your characters. You have written a few stories on Madhu and RK but each time the characters differ in the stories. I don't know how you think of ways to make each character stand out.

I loved so many parts to this story!

I love drunk Madhu.
I love flirtatious RK.
Madhu's motion sickness (I can relate. well written!)
Madhu's mad driving.
The baby kicks when RK is too close to Madhu! (Awesome!)
RK yelling at Malik!

Brilliant and I really enjoyed it!!! Thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
awesum dear!👏
wonderful👏
i liked when the baby kicked whenever rishu hugged her😊
the story was cute...he waiting for her to get adjusted to the marriage was the best part
thanks 4 the pm😊keep writing😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Lazy .. Lazy .. Lazy .. I love u grl .. .. I just do .. Sachi - muchi .. 😛 .. Have no words 2 write what d hell should i do now .. 😡😆


The story was amazing ... I m falling fr Rishbala more & more with each of ur story .. .. They r so adorable & loveable ... All credit goes 2 u .. 😳



Lazy i really wish 2 meet u & kiss ur magical hand that's responsible fr such an magical story .. ⭐️.. Pls don't ever stop d magic ... Yeah thanks 2 d member who had requested u 2 write dis story 😳... hope ye silsila ese ho chalti rahe 😉


Love u sweetheart .. ❤️ 🤗.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Awesome OS
I loved it
U r an amazing writer
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Wow Lazy,
another amazing work from you, loved this Rishab more and more, he was so matured and so lovely


I need to ask you one question : How do you manage to type this much big updates, its really little tough na?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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UNRES...😉
Sorry 4 late reply...😊
Awesome OS...Loved it...😳
Loved each n every part of it...from der drive 2 der confession everything...😳
D Drunk state of Madhu was hilarious...🤣...and den der cute Baby...😳
U R Superb Lazy...Love U Lazy...😳

Edited by manju21.k - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it its awsome.i am married n it was arranged marriage turn into love.i can relate to each every incident.that details every moment is awsome.smoking,drinking ,driving,friends,pregnancy everything i loved it .
Drinking especially,when i want to try drinking especially mine ,his parents didnt allowed it we tried together to break the rule after marriage n we tried once secret hai 😉 n i told my hubby my love that our bed sheet color is blue while it was yellow n i convinced him its blue n he agreed to me😉.n aaj thak he teases me with that.n smoking he smokes once in a blue moon that too once that cheeky smile of rishabh i can imagine that coz i always sees that cheekysmile when i caught him smoking😆.n caring during pregnancy i can still feel it. my baby is a girl baby ofcource his choice n has hair,nose,eyes,smile all of him😒 mm better luck next time for me.over all i read ur story felt as my life story thank u dear for giving us such wonderful story.loved it👏
Edited by mansiahmed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
actually lazy i ran out of words describing ur works😛 whatever i say would not do justice to ur work so i am saying all words i know
aesome, beautiful, romantic, sensual, wonderful, perfect, etc or any other word u would get in a thesaurus😉 gud work dear👏

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