Rishbala TS : Arranged Marriage (Part 1 & 2 on Page 1) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why do you always keep writing Madhu just similar to me???? Even i have a tedency to throw while travelling in a car...Awsum os...I am out of words and I perfectly dont know what should I say...beautiful, sensual, romantic os it was...I always think why dont I get someone similar to RK...I mean the RKs in ur stories...keep writing dear...Thnks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome and mind blowing story... loved it so so much
Thanks for pm and take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
I must say u r a gifted writer..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome creation...
I am addicted to your writing. .. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's kinda very refreshing and sweet story Lazy 😃 !
Tobe honest initially Madhu n Padmini n their convo reg Madhu's behavior n her unruly hair reminded me of the animated film "Brave" the story about a headstrong n capable princess 😃 !!

Wow !! I simply loved the fact that RK loved her at their first meeting..cos due to her self talk, she made me feel that she is not that beautiful and only RK's eyes finds her pretty 😃.

I loved their gradual progression from strangers to friends and then to good friends to hubby n wife n to lovers to finally parents 😆 !!

I liked the way she was asking him stop smoking indirectly 😉, their long drive with multiple stops, RK's way of comforting Madhu for her motion sickness and his motto of keeping her comfort as his priority 😳. Even liked pabbo in this..Deepali deserves to be ignored so am ignoring her royally lol !!
His way of stopping abruptly in between their making out sessions shocked me to no end but when I learnt the reason I actually liked him for giving her the space n time hehe !!

Ooh !! I liked the second part more than the first lol for all obvious reasons😆 !! Oh god ..her pubbing n her friends n their comments of her being asexual made me go all rofl 😆 !! I loved this RK for the fact that he made her FEEL. So beautiful in mere few months 😳 coz of his pure love and affection and his unadulterated open confession hehe about his love , her beauty n she being very special in his eyes !!

Their "pregnancy"time was blissful 😳 !! Her labor scene somehow reminded me of Rachel n Ross in friends where he will tell her that "its hurting" only to get glare from Rachel n her gynecologist lol 😆 !!

Loved this sweet girl with unruly hair but sweet nature loved by her husband so immensely and finally a daughter with similar hair style like hers lol but only to realise that "Beaty lies in the eyes of the beholder" 😃 !!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
omg amazing story justtt loveddd it.thank u so much for lo lovely story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb...fantastic OS...one of the best rishbala OS m reading...loved the way u portrated both adolescent's nervousnmess, ecstasy, sexual tension and the new found blooming love...good that u incorporated dips n pabo in it...loved part 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
awesome...what a concluding...totally loved it...such a log update..kudos to ur writing n creativity...nice how u unfolded the 10 months of arranged marriage in a sweet writing...very pretty
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Awesome concept and such a cute story. You are truly a genius with words.👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh my God!!
I want him as my husband!!☺️
He's just PERFECT! So much like Edward of Twilight!!
You're a STUPENDOUS writer!!

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