Rishbala FF- A Twist Of Fate -Chp.15/Pg127-[05/10] - Page 3

Originally posted by: Mahi78

Wow, dhamekedar uptade Madhu very much unlike her character in the show. Madhu elder to Thishna? Interesting. Loved it.😊

Originally posted by: kg15

AWESOME UPDATE... SIMPLY AWESOME !!

WHAT A CHARACTER SKETCH YOU'VE WROTE DEAR..! EACH AND EVERY CHARACTER WAS QUITE IMAGINABLE...

I LIKED YOUR WRITING SENSE... IT WAS QUITE LIVELY !!

LOVED THE PART TO THE CORE...

GOOD JOB DEAR... THUMBS UP..!!

Originally posted by: .Shree.

Nice Update 😛

So Madhu came back to India after 22 years

but why did she leave India?

Waiting for RK's entry 😎

Continue soon

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

Nice update
Plss enter rk in next part widout him everything is incomplete
Continue soon

Originally posted by: benaz

Hey! Just read the two chapters :) I really like your concept. I have sent you a request and please accept it :)

Looking forward to your next update!

Guys thank you sooo much for all those wonderful comments😊 Am really glad that u lot r liking my work..

Guys please do check out my new VM on Rishbala on their new Background tune 'Ishq tu hi Hai Mera'.

Here's the link... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_sR1AF6R4t8

Ok so back to the update...Hope you guys will enjoy as the update includes RK's entry😉...so here goes Chapter 3...

Chapter 3

"It's Madhu-BALA for you Mr.Malik!" she said harshly.

"Please Madhu beta..."

"No need to call me beta'...go call your other daughter that!" she said sternly. Trishna now had tears in her eyes seeing the hatred Madhu had for her. She knew everything which had happened 22 years back...her grandparents had told her. At first she too was angry at her Dad but then forgave him seeing how much he was suffering without his daughter and wife. Adi and Anjali were both taken aback with the way Madhu was speaking to her father. Since she had been here she had not talked rudely to anyone and always politely replied to everyone but this was clearly not the case here.

"Madhu I am your father..."

"No Mr.Malik... I lost my father years back...and once again its Madhu-BALA for you!" saying that she turned around and started walking towards her room. She noticed the tears in Trishna's eyes but was least bothered about it.

"Madhu...I am very sorry for everything..." Mr.Malik said as she was walking up the stairs.

"Mr.Malik I don't like to repeat myself... so for the last time its Madhubala not Madhu!" Madhu replied rudely without even turning to face him and steadily walked towards her room.

"That was expected...she will never forgive you Shamsher...not after what all you have done." Said Daadu disappointedly who was sitting on the couch.

"Beta...give her some time...her wounds are too deep..." continued Daadi trying to console her broken son who dropped himself on the armchair.

"Bhai...you should be at least happy she came...yesterday when she called me, I could easily tell that she is only coming because of Padmini..." Roma said. Rohan kept quiet...after what his brother had done he never really talked to him. Padmini was like his younger sister and he broke her heart...he could never forgive him for that. He quietly walked away up to Madhu's room, while all the other members were downstairs with his so-called-brother.

The door of Madhu's room was open so he decided to walk in, and there he saw Madhu sobbing away with a picture of her and Padmini in her hand.

"Madhu?..."

She quickly wiped away her tears and sat up straight.

"No dear...please don't cry because for such a fallen man...he does not deserve your tears." He said as he wiped away the remaining tears from her cheeks. Madhu hugged him for support. He continuously rubbed his hand on her back to console her while she cried.

"See I told you there was something wrong!" said Anjali to Adi who were standing outside Madhu's room witnessing the scene.

"Really I never thought Madhu Di would have this much hatred in her...she seemed to be happy."

"Same her Adi...the way they were talking downstairs means that Trishna Di is not actually Madhu Di's sister."

"You mean...-" before Adi could continue a voice interrupted him. It was Roma, his mother.

"You two come with me Now!"

They quietly followed their mother with their heads down as if a child was caught stealing cookies. She lead them to her room...

"You both must have by now figured everything out..."

"Mom, you always told us that Padmini aunty and Shamsher uncle had a fight because of which Aunty left to London with Di!..." "...Leaving Trishna Di with uncle.." Anjali finished her brother off.

"Yes...we all had decided not to tell you children. We didn't want you guys to hate your Uncle." Replied Roma.

"Mom, so Trishna Di is an illegitimate child of Shamsher Uncle?"

"Yes..." Roma said with her head down. "But she still is your Di...she has no fault in any way. Okay?" they both nodded and walked out of her room quietly.

"Gosh, imagine how much Padmini Aunty and Madhu Di must have gone through."

"Yh but we really need to make Madhu Di understand that Trishna Di has no fault at all."

"Ok leave this...it's nearly 6pm which means..."Adi said which made him smile.

"...SUPERSTAR is coming!!!" Anjali nearly screamed.

"Yh I really hope he keeps his promise this time...since three days he has postponing this night!"

"Don't worry bro...I know he will come today..."

"Hope so, he is the only one who can change this atmosphere here...I can bet that he will make Di cheer up...and she too I bet will be super excited to meet him.." she winked at her bro with a naughty smile.

"Not sure if she will be this excited to meet him like all you girls but I am sure someone else will start her cheap ways to get closer to him.." he said with a small smirk. Anjali very well knew he was talking about Deepali and just cracked up laughing to which Adi also joined.

"Oye don't tell her about him...it should be surprise ok??" Adi just nodded in agreement.

(Downstairs, living room)

All of them were sitting in the living room chatting away. Madhu also felt better and with Adi and Anjali she forgot about everything. They were like friends to her rather cousins. Both arguing was the best part, even after being adults now they kept on teasing each other and pulling each other's leg on every chance they got. When Madhu tried to talk to Deepali she always gave attitude, she could tell that she didn't like her and nor was Madhu liking her.

Trishna was also sitting with them but hardly talked and Madhu also didn't bother giving her glances.

She must say she agreed with her mother, Rohan Uncle really was the BEST, he was so caring and fun too and Roma was also super fun.

"You know Madhu, when these two were about 4 years old, they had a little fight..."said Roma smiling.

"And..?" Madhu said eagerly. Rohan Uncle and Roma were both telling her incidents about Adi and Anjali's childhood.

"Well it was really cute...Anjali who was angry at him came up to my ear to tell me a secret..."

"Mom! No..." Adi pleaded who was sitting next to Madhu. Roma ignoring him continued..

"so she was telling me a secret which Adi wanted to know...and he put his ear next to my other ear so he could hear!" Roma laughed.

"Awww...that's sooo adorable!!!" Madhu said as she pulled Adi's cheeks and then side hugged him.

"Di tell us something about you...about your friends...about your best friend?" asked Anjali.

"Best Friend! Sh*t!!! Mukund!!" Madhu said as she quickly stood up and hit her forehead. How could she forget that she still had to tell him that she is India. She had planned to tell him after her arrival but forgot completely about him.

"Mukund? Ohhh...Boyfriend..." said Anjali as she winked at her.

"NO! Nothing like that...it's just that I forgot to tell him about me being in India. Excuse me... I'll be back after calling him." She said as she started to walk away scrolling through her phone when suddenly she bumped into something hard which made her loose her balance.

RK's POV

"Yes Bittuji I am sure...I don't care if I have a bloody shooting tomorrow or not, I am not coming to the sets tomorrow...No buts, do as I tell you to...I am having a day off and that's it...enjoy you evening!" RK had finally reached the Malik's residence where he could relax from his overload of work and just be himself. He closed his eyes and let out a deep breath when suddenly someone bumped against him. Being off guard he fell on the ground with a girl on top of him!

Without paying attention what was going around them they looked into each other's eyes...their body-contact set fire. RK never had seen such pure beauty in his life. He held her tight from her waist as he stared at that angelic face, her dark brown hair with side strands, her hazel doe eyes and world's most luscious lips made him loose into her passionate eyes. Wait was that...

Madhu who also had lost herself in those deep passionate eyes of his. He had Greek God figure and looks. She placed one of her hand on his solid chest and the other held his muscular arm. That smirk he gave as he looked at her, was...wait is that...

In less than a second they both quickly stood up pointing a finger at each other shouting...

"Chashmish!"

"Rishu!"

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