Rishbala FF- A Twist Of Fate -Chp.15/Pg127-[05/10] - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

I again lost my place...!!! 😭 No worries...u will get it back soon

Better luck next time... Certainly
Coming to the update, it was a hilarious one... Deepali is such a...Hahahahah...glad u liked it I can imagine her expressions when all of them were laughing... I like the way Madhu too was going along with stretching the gag... 😆 Hahaha...just wanted to give a light fun update for u people to enjoy
I didn't miss RK in this update... Ur the only one!!! But now, as you have said, you already wrote two more... So, update it Lubu!! It's an order!!! Sure will


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

OMG!! that was quite embarrasing...loved dipali's reaction...😆


It sure was and glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

even it was a no rk update,i loved it...ha ha enjoyed dips's condition😆😆


Am happy to hear (well read) that u loved it😃😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_sri

Nice update..😊but short one & no rk...😕
Plz update soon that too a long one... o
k😛


will try😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Shree.

Nice Update

Poor Deepali 😆


Yep poor her...


I did..u were just too quick


Originally posted by: noiseygirl

nyc update poor madhu plz pm me







Thank u everyone!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
First let me apologize for such a long wait...but i have my exams going on and they are my first priority and i believe it would be the same for any of u lot as well.. they r still going on but i thought i have kept u people waiting so long so u guys do at least deserve an update...but this one will be short as i also have wedding going on so am hardly finding time...but the good news is people that my last exam is on the 13th June and after that i am totally free!! and to top it of i am not even getting a summer's job this year so am gonna be giving regular updates!!! Happy?
Well i want to dedicate this update to Kavya sis who has always asked me to shine some light on the relation of Trishna and Madhu! Well this one is for the two sisters!!!


Chapter 10

She heard them laugh as they walked away towards their own rooms. How much she hated that Madhubala! Not only her but her sister too, Trishna! They were nothing compared to her but got the most attention from everyone. She had known about Madhu since childhood as her Father always only would talk about her and her mother. Even though he would never express his views towards the family or anyone else he always wanted Deepali to love Madhu the way he did but only the opposite had happened. And as if Madhu was not enough for her, Trishna got all the attention from everyone as nobody wanted to ever give her even the slightest feeling that she was a mistake her father had committed. But what about her? It was only her mother who ever cared about her and loved her seeing as no one else did but she had even lost her after a few years when the twins were born. She felt a kind of relief seeing the hatred Madhu had towards her own sister well only half, but still. The two people she hated the most had a very unstable relationship between them, with one trying her best to talk to the other but no words ever came out of her mouth while the other loathed even the sight of her. Well for both sisters, today's party would be something they would always remember, she smiled wickedly.

"Beautiful..." said Adi in a small whisper as he walked in with Anjali into her room. She truly was looking stunning, ready to kill anyone with her beauty. Madhu smiled at his compliment which she managed to hear. Adi was wearing dark blue jeans, with a white shirt neatly tucked in and a Grey-blueish blazer on top. He looked dashing in formal clothes as before she had only seen him in either casual T-shirts/shirts or Hoddies. Anjali too looked real nice in a white dress, a few bracelets on her wrist that matched her dress and a clutch.

All three of them headed downstairs where all already where gathered ready to leave. Every one praised Madhu on how elegant she looked in that saree, which they had least expected her to wear. She couldn't help but notice Deepali's Dress which had now changed, and she knew why and so did the other two who giggled quietly. But another thing that didn't escape her eye was that Trishna was not present there which Anjali also noticed. "Mom...where is Trishna Di?"
"She still needs a bit more time to get ready, she said that she will come behind us." Deepali smiled evilly which didn't go unnoticed by Madhu but she least cared what she was thinking or planning. All started to head out when she remembered that she had left her phone upstairs.
"Anjali, Adi, you guys head to the venue. I will catch up with you lot, i forgot my phone."
"Okay Di, but make it quick!"

She headed back upstairs when she heard faint crying. One thing she could not see or hear. She peeped into Trishna's room to see her sitting on her bed, her face buried in her palms. Not knowing why she slowly started walking over towards her and sat herself next to her. Feeling the bed sink she looked up in a reflex only to be shocked further to see Madhu there. Quickly wiping away her tears she turned away not knowing what to do.
"What happened?" Madhu asked.
"You here?"
"You tell me what happened. I might be able to help." Trishna looked uncertain.
"Someone has ripped my dress." Madhu looked at her in shock. That's why she was crying?
"Then wear another one.." she said using her common sense.
"No you don't get it...Arjun had given it me...for tonight and i don't want to disappoint him in any way."
"You really love him don't you?"
"Hmm..." she said blushing and looking downwards.
"Okay show me the dress...i might e able to do something." she said with a genuine smile, to which Trishna also responded. Showing her the dress Madhu smiled as it was repairable because whoever had torn it...ripped it on the stitch line.
"Do you people have a sawing machine here?"
"Yes, there is one in Maa's room" she said with a smile just to realise what she had done.
"Ermm...i mean your Mom's old room." Madhu looked at her painfully.
"Can you bring it here?" she said in the lightest whisper.
"I'll go and get it."

She didn't know why, but she didn't hate that girl. She could see the pain in her eyes. It was never really her fault was it? She was just the result of it but it was never her fault...It wasn't her who hurted her mother, it was her so-called-father who was at fault, and she would never forgive him for that. She returned with the machine and Madhu got cracking on fixing her dress as soon as possible because they were already running late. She felt an emotional bond the moment she touched the machine thinking how her mother used to use this and it was still in perfect condition. It was her who encouraged her into this path and she would always be her inspiration. Finally done she quickly handed it to her and told her to change quickly into it as they were already late. Finished with all the Make-up in which Madhu helped Trishna looked herself into the full length mirror. Turning towards Madhu she hugged her tight taking her by surprise.
"Thank You...Thank you sooo much for this!!!" she said like an excited child. Not really knowing what to do she hugged her back feeling the sisterly love which she never experienced. Getting her phone from her room they both headed downstairs together as Madhu called Adi telling him that they both are on their as she had received numerous Missed Calls.

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So hw was it? Liked the two sister's bonding?
Next update promise will be a longer one with lots of Rishabala!!!
Till then wait, Like and Comment!!

P.S. do check out ur replies!!
Edited by Mentally-Insane - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Lol Uma aren't u very fast and impatient 😉

Anyway the Update is up do tell me hw u liked it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey lubna...
nice update...
chalo now u'll give us regular updates..yeyy...
coming on update...i loved the growing sisterly bond...
and trishna referred padmini as maa...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flowing_river

hey lubna...

nice update...
chalo now u'll give us regular updates..yeyy...
coming on update...i loved the growing sisterly bond...
and trishna referred padmini as maa...

Hahah yes soon u lot will start getting regular updates😊

And am so glad i managed to portray that growing bond between the sisters well

P.S. My name isn't Lubna...it's Lubeeda😊 ROLF!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly, thank you so much for the dedication, Lubu!! 🤗
I know you have promised to update once I am back!! That was really emotional for me that I have loved ones like you miles away from me!!! 🤗

Coming to the update, you justified this part to the mark, Lubu!! It was fabulous!! All the emotions were intelligently portrayed here!! And I must say, I loved the little of attachment they both felt for each other the moment... How beautifully you tied their string with the sewing machine!!! Fab it was!!!

Trishna had no fault since her birth but Madhu's hatred was justified!! And I should admit, Deepali's evil plans always turn out to be the cupids to build up positive things!! 😆

My eyes moistened when they both hugged!! Though there was some hesitation from Madhu's side but finally she put her turmoil aside and hugged back... So beautiful!!

Lubu, I loved each and every word of it and to be very frank, I DIDN'T MISS RISHABH KUNDRA TODAY AT ALL!!! Credit goes to the way you wrote it!! 👏👏
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