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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey friends, back with an OS, can't get enough of writing about this couple, just striked with this idea, so penned it. So here goes it.



Rk entered the pub and his eyes were searching for her and finally he detected her, wearing a black sleeveless frock with hair kept bounded on one side with dark lipstick on her lips and light kajal on her eyes, her lips crept a smile on seeing RK. She went near him and said " Hey, handsome , waiting for you" and then their group joined them, and all started to dance, but one girl remained outside the dance floor watching her RK dancing with another girl. RK twirled her in several rounds and she finally fall in his arms, he held her by waist and their hands were inter-locked. Madhu had tears seeing this pose of them and she slightly moved away.

All the friends returned back to the place where madhu was standing and hi-fied with her,and suddenly dipali asked madhu " Why are you always waiting over this place, but not joining us on the dance floor, you could have stayed back at home instead of this" and every one laughed at this, Madhu gave a weak smile and looked at RK who didn't paid any attention to her and was busily caressing the girl's hair and she was busy in drinks. And finally everyone said bye and started to move back to their place. Madhu along with other girls started to move when she find she was held back by some one.

Without turning back, she know who is that person.She just raised her head and asked "What?" Rk replied, " Why are you facing such humiliations, if you are not interested to dance , then why you have to come over this place and wait for everyone to come back" .Madhu turned towards him and said " Ask this question yourself and you will get the answer" She left the place immediately. 😭Rishab turned towards the girl who was his pick for the day and went to his car.He felt a slight prick being with the girl before Madhu, but he was not able to figure it out.

It was around 3'o clock and sleep was miles away from him, "What does madhu meant by that, how could i know the answer of that question", he turned towards the girl, who was sleeping over his chest, hugging him". He doesn't want to disturb her, he slightly freed himself from her grip and went outside. He checked his mobile and found 2 missed calls and 3 messages from Mukund, so he replied " Any thing important". There was no reply, so he left the mobile and went to kitchen to prepare a coffee for himself.He was having his coffee and watching tv

Around 7' o clock the girl came down properly dressed, she came near RK and asked him " When did you leave the bed " RK felt irritated for being disturbed and said " You can leave now, your amount will be settled within this evening" and she left. RK shouted "Bittuji" and that poor soul came running before him and said "Chief" , and RK replied " Ask that girl her name and those details and settle her with the amount, she asks for" and left to his room. Poor Bittuji was worried more for his chief and prayed to bappaji to bring an angel into his life to shower him with love and support him through all obstacles.

As usual after their hectic day's work, the friends gathered in the pub and was waiting for RK, and he also joined them little later, and he found madhu missing, but he didn't paid more attention to it and went to the dance floor and picked a chick to dance with him, but madhu's words were flashing in his mind and he was not able to dance, so he excused himself from the dance floor and came to bar.Karan , who was a friend of RK was having his drink in bar, when RK came near him,he started " Most of our team members seem to be missed out today, right?" . Karan replied, " No, everyone is there, and only 2 person missing, one is Mukund - Our Joker and the other person is Madhu, that will not be a problem, since her presence or absence will be sensed by only one person and that is Trishna, so no issues and he walked towards the dance floor."

Two days passed like this and RK started to miss Madhu, but he didn't ask anyone about her. Deepali came near RK and said " Are you free tonight My Hero, since its long before, we spent the night together" and she moved near RK seductively. He pushed her down and went near the bar counter and started to drink, hen he saw Trishna talking to some on over the phone and he moved near her and heard " Its OK Madhu, Mukund is really a nice guy, we need to think about this, will talk to you regarding this later" and she kept the phone and turned. And she got shocked when RK stood behind her and she asked " Yes RK, why are you standing behind me?" RK asked " Where is you friend, nowadays she's not joining you here" Trishna replied" Why do you bother?" RK just shrugged and trishna left that place, but RK went behind her and asked " I want you to answer me" Trishna replied " Why do you care for her, all of a sudden"and she continued " She is a poor soul, who still believe in love and she loved a stone -hearted person , who never reciprocates it" Rk asked " She's in love, whom does she love, do i know that person" Trishna replied " Yes, only you know about him well, and everyday he stands before you in the morning in your room" and she left the place. RK was under utter confusion.And the effect of alcohol makes him feel dizzy.

He managed to call bittuji, who reached there and took his chief back to his mansion. Next day morning RK woke up with a headache, and he called bittuji, bittuji came in with lime juice and handed him with a letter. which read as follows


Hope you are well,Trish would have exposed all details about me, I don't want you to bother, hence am leaving and will not cross in your life again,Wherever i may be i'll pray for your good life - my stone heart

Will always remember you
Madhu



Then it striked RK that last night trishna told about him and in a fraction of second, he called trishna and compelled her that he needs to meet madhu, before wherever she start and never inform about this to madhu. But trishna replied that it was too late and she left to the station, RK cut the call and went to railway station. He prays to god, that he should meet her before she start and he was in dilemma, whether he loves her or pity her. But first he want to meet her and ask sorry for being so rude with her.Madhu was waiting for her train and she felt a pat on her shoulder and she turned with teary eyes.

Rk entered the station and traced madhu, the scene before him shocked him completely, madhu was in arms of another man, and he felt a jealous burning within him, he stopped moving and was about to turn when he heard his name being called.He turned to see that person and it was Mukund who called him and he was the one who hugged madhu few moments before. Then Trishna's word rung through his ears

"Mukund is really a nice guy, we need to think about this, will talk to you regarding this later"

"So madhu accepted Mukund's proposal, how can she do this"he fumed then he heard bittuji speaking " I know what you are thinking chief, she had never expressed her feelings,and you have never accepted her,so there is nothing wrong on both your sides." RK thought for a while and told bittuji " You were correct" and turned to move, when Trishna came in front of them and told " I am getting married to Mukund soon" and she blushed, and those words made 1000watts electricity effect on RK's face😃, Madhu who came near RK told" Hope you would have got that letter, so am leav..." she was cut off and RK slammed his lips over hers and hugged her tightly " You are the one for whom i have been waiting for years, you came near me, but i didn't sensed , it was all my mistake and i'll never let you go and only death can separate us" and he scooped her in his arms shocking every one and took her back to his mansion.




So how was it. Pls tel me your views and comments and pls do like it, as will encourage me for further writing.


Love
Uma



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Forever_Komal thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
unRES 😃
woo hooo I am first! 😃
Uma this was really nice and well written 👏
felt so bad for poor Madhu with RK paying absolutely no attention to her 😭
But he realized her worth! 😳
reading the ending with Mukkunds proposal.. I got a bit worried! What if you were gonna turn the tables in a completely opposite direction! But you didn't, now only did RK have that 100 Watt smile on his face, I did too 😆😆
again, really nice OS! thanks for the pm 😊
Edited by Forever_Komal - 12 years ago
aDarkAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it😛..the end was just too good☺️
LoseYouToLoveMe thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os uma 😳 thanks for pm 😊
My_VivJaan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really amazing os dear...do write more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was waaaow!
Just luvd it..
uma88 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Forever_Komal

unRES 😃

woo hooo I am first! 😃
Uma this was really nice and well written 👏
felt so bad for poor Madhu with RK paying absolutely no attention to her 😭
But he realized her worth! 😳
reading the ending with Mukkunds proposal.. I got a bit worried! What if you were gonna turn the tables in a completely opposite direction! But you didn't, now only did RK have that 100 Watt smile on his face, I did too 😆😆
again, really nice OS! thanks for the pm 😊

Thank you Komal for your valuable comment, surely will write more for you all.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really well written...luvd the ending...thnks for the pm and keep writing...😊
uma88 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rg0782

really well written...luvd the ending...thnks for the pm and keep writing...😊


Sure dear😊 and thank you for the comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os...I liked the ending...😊

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