Rishbala OS: Sultan/Divorce Just Pack Up!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello me again!!!
Thanks to all who commented on my last os nd encouraged me to write more...
It's my 3rd os means hattrick...
Ok i thought to write smething gud on current track so here it is...
Hope u enjoy it...


Sultan/Divorce Just Pack Up!!!!


At rk mansion,

Rk comes at home on 2 days bail...madhu get faints bcoz of stress...rk take her in bedroom...after sometime madhu wakes up become happy on seeing rk by her side...rk mischieviously says "biwi tum koi sapna nahi dekh rahi ho..." nd pinch her...

Madhu caress his face nd ask him "rk tum thk hona tum kahan chale gaye the??"..."biwi i m fine wo me or bittuji court gaye the papers sign karne nd nw everything will be ok biwi don't worry..." just den madhu's cell ring up...she try to get up bt rk stop her nd take d call...bt no one speaks on otherside so he cuts d call nd says "biwi lagta h kisiko meri awaz pasand nahi ayi"...madhu gets tense on thinking it might be sultan so she speaks up "nahi rk wo subah se blank calls arahe h..." rk ans her back wid smirk"biwi blank calls to koi chahnewali ya chanewala hi karta h???" madhu get more tense on hearing dis "nahi rk wo me" " biwi relax me majak kr raha hun"...

After a min cell buzz again bt dis time madhu recieves d call nd rk xcuse himself to go for freshen up... from otherside of call sultan speaks up "agar tumhara romance khatam hogaya hoto rk se divorce papers pe sign le lo madhu as ur time is running"... madhu hearing dis felt really hurted she cuts d call nd goes to kitchen to make lunch fr rk in turmoil wat she will do nw...

Half an hour later madhu comes in room wid food trolley nd make rk sit on d couch...den rishbala feed each other lost in their own world...after dey complete their lunch rk try to find his script of movie as he has to join shoot frm tmrrw...bt in between he finds divorce papers nd get shocked after reading it "biwi!!! biwi!!!..." shouts in anger...madhu comes hastily nd see rk holding divorce papers nd she too get shocked..." biwi wat is dis??" holding papers infront of her... "wo rk ye me wo..." "biwi kya ye me wat is dis or divorce papers banvaye kisne???"...

Madhu come to point dat nw is d time to tell rk dat she want divorce frm him for his life sake..she push back her all emotions nd love fr rk nd wid straight face she said it "dis is prepared by me rk bcoz i want divorce frm u..." after hearing dis rk's whole world turns into 360 degree he just get freeze "biwi tumhari tabiyat to thik h???" he try to touch her face bt madhu back off nd speaks wid angry face "i m all ok rk nd i m saying truth only , i want divorce frm u..." "bt y madhu???" madhu turns around as she can't hold her emotion nw nd says "bcoz i m tierd of u rk, tierd frm dis fights, tierd frm being ur biwi... i want to live happily rk nd it can be only possible wen u will not be their in my life..." the arguments between rishbala cntinue for several time in between everyone gathered in their room radhaji, padmini, sikki, dips nd bittuji...just quitely listening to dem try to make out wats going on...

Finally madhu wins d argument nd forcefully make rk to sign d papers by saying "rk if u want me to be happy in my life so plss sign d papers..." den she collects all her luggage nd leave rk mansion wid padmini all broken frm inside...otherside rk too all broken hearted throws nd destroy everything in his room...dips watch dis drama nd leaves frm their wid winning smirk...

At chawl,

Madhu is leaving to meet sultan bt padmini stops her "madhu tu kahan jarahi h???"... "maa u trust me na i m doing dis all fr my love only plss ma be wid me..." nd start crying...padmini console her nd says "madhu beta mujhe tujh par pura bharosa or me tere sath hun..." nd give her purse...after dis madhu leaves frm there...

At sultan's place,

Sultan speaks wid evil smile "aao madhu me kabse tumhara hi intezar kr raha tha...sign hogai??" madhu wid shaking hand gves divorce papers to sultan nd he read it... he smiles more evilly "nw madhu u hv to go nd file dis papers in court or presswalon ko ye breaking news bhi tum hi dogi nd after dat u will be mine..." madhu gve back to him saying "ye tmhari galatfamily h sultan kyun ki me sirf rk se pyaar krti hun or ye kagaj tukda us pyaar ko khatam nahi kr sakta...or before filing d papers i want u to gve statement for rk's release..."

Sultan smirks "tum bhul rahi ho madhu me jo chahta hun wo pata hun, tumhe yaad h tumhare rk ne bht ghamand se kaha tha ke mere pas madhu h jo meri kabhi nahi hosakti bt see aaj mene uska wo ghamand bhi tod diya...ha par uskeliye bht mehnat krni padi...tumhe pata itna asan nae h ye sab kuch fake killing, to bribe cheif inspector nd..." sultan narrates all his sins infront of madhu as giving interview of his great works... "or agar tum pehle tum mera statement chahti ho to mein itna to kr hi sakta hun tmare liye par yaad rakhna tumhari ek galti or rk khatam..."

Den sultan makes a call nd madhu hesitantly leaves from their to file d divorce papers in court knwing after dis her whole life will be destroyed bt to save rk dis nothing for her...

At some hospital,

Sultan is in bed wid fake bandage nd all a men standing near by him...after some mins cops comes dere nd dat men gives statement dat he had save sultan...den sultan gives his statement by saying dat rk didn't kill him it was an accident nd he himself fought wid rk as he had been jealous on seeing dem together...

After 2 hours rk release papers r filed nd he is free from case...otherside all news channel giving breaking news of d day stating "one side superstar rk is release from sultan murder case as sultan is alive nd otherside madhubalaji had given divorce to rk wen reason was asked to madhubalaji she stayed silent only"... sultan's face lit up wid winning smirk after watching d news nd he switch off d tv...

Just den rk nd bittuji comes to his hospital room nd rk speaks wid smirk"ahaan picture abhi baki hai mere dosst ooppss!!! sorry dushman"...saying dis rk switch on d tv again... reporter "another breaking news of d day just a min before we get d cd in which sultan confess his all sin hw he planned to trap rk in his fake murder case nd all other his illegal sins...we will show u d cd..." after dat d cd is played nd sultan turns in all red blood anger as realizing his time is over nw...

He stand frm his place nd shouts madhu ye tumne thik nahi kiya nd pulls rk by his collar just den cops team come inside d room nd mr. joshi arrest him under many illegal charges...d senior inspector nd lawyer shivdutt marathi is also arrested as sultan had told about dem also in cd...rk says"meri biwi ne to kuch kiya bhi nahi sultan...it was all planned by me... ab tum sochoge mene ye sab kese kiya so take ur time nd think wese bhi ab to tumhara pas waqt hi waqt jail me... nd yes kya kaha tha tumne "madhu ko paake mera ghamand tod diya bt u don't knw ke madhu mera ghamand nahi pyaar or us pyaar ko mujh se koi nahi cheen sakta..."

Mr. joshi take sultan frm hospital...as dey all were going nd rk is standing behind just den sultan snatch revolver frm his side by cop nd fires on rk bt bittuji notice dis before only nd pushed rk so he falls on ground...after dat three gun shots r echoed in hospital which directly hits in sultan's heart by inspector joshi...sutan died at d spot only...(yippee🥳 sultan ka pack up... me don't want him to go in jail nd cme back to seperate out rishbala again)...

Rk nd bittuji r safe (bittuji ki height kam agayi kyunki bullet unke sar ke uper se pass out hogai😆😆)...nd again news channel showing last nd final breaking news of d day about sultan's death...

At chawl,

Madhu nd padmini sees d news nd gets shocked just den rk cmes their...madhu rush to him all crying nd hugs him tightly "rk tum thk ho na..." rk try console her nd says "biwi me bilkul thk tumhare samne to khada hun all fit nd fine or mene tumse kaha tha na biwi everything will be fine..." madhu confusedly ask him "par rk ye sab kese hua or tumhe kese pata chala sultan ke bare or wo cd???" "biwi relax me tumhe sab batata hun..."

"biwi us din jab sultan tmse milne aya tha hospital me tab mene sari baatein sun li thi or phr ek planning mene ki... mene bittuji se keh kr bail krwayi den wo divorce papers drama jab mene sign ki thi infact wo papers fake the mene unhe change kr diya tha biwi...or phr mujhe pata tha tum sultan se milne joagi to mene padmini maa ko call krke sab bata diya or unki help se tumhare purse me video cam lagwa diya or ye idea tumne hi diya tha biwi...yad h tumne sultan ki video record ki thi hospital me bt sultan ko pata chal gaya bt dis time he didn't get it..."

"wo apni khushi ki jeet me itna pagal hogaya tha ke use ye bhi nahi dikha ke divorce papers fake h or tumhare purse me cam h nd i was knwing khushi me sultan apni sari ki hui harkate tumhe dubara sunayega nd it happened or wo record hogaya sb..."

Madhu giving him angry luks says "rk tumne mujhe ye sab pehle kyun nahi bataya???" "kyunki biwi tumhe acting krni or jhut bolna ata hi nahi pr phr bhi tumne divorce drama me kafi a6i acting ki thi manna padega tumhe...(winks)"😉 madhu hits him on chest "rk tumhe ye sab majak lagta tumhe pata me kitni pareshan thi mene wo sab kuch kese kiya kitna mushkil tha..." saying dis she start crying "biwi i knw or ye sab mene tumhari pareshani dur krne keliye to kiya nw stop crying biwi..."

Rk dry her tears nd hug her madhu speaks "ab hume koi nahi alag kr sakege rk koi nahi..." "ha biwi pr abhi sirf ek villain safaya hua h dusri vamp baki nw let's go home..." madhu gve him confused luk nd both leaves frm chawl...

At rk mansion,

All r waiting for rishbala nd both comes happily hand in hand...radhaji becomes very happy nd dips is hell shocked... rk left madhu's hand nd walk to dips "deepali ab tum konsi nayi planning kr rahi ho apne ghatya dimag me..." dips ans angrily "wat d hell rk tum kya bol rahe ho???" "oh me kya bol raha hun tumhe nahi pata...kya tumhe ye bhi nahi pata tha ke sultan jinda or usne ye sab tumhare sath milke kiya tha..." "rk ye tum kya bol rahe ho mujhe kch bhi nahi pata..."

Rk speak wid smirk "ohh really to sultan ko hamare divorce ki khushkhabri tumne nahi di thi dips..." after listening dis everyone is shock nd dips is numb as she has been caught... "dips wo jo divorce drama ke waqt mene thod fod ki thi aise hi nahi ki thi...it was all fr u kyunki mene tumhe dekh liya jb tum hamare room se spy kr rahi thi nd mene tumhari help se sulan tak ye news poncha di ke mene madhu ko divorce de diya or puri tarah se tut chuka hun...aaj tum bht a6e kam ayi dips..."


Radhaji cmes to dips nd gve her a tight slaps (a big applause👏 fr radhaji)"dipali tum is had tak gir joagi mene aisa nahi socha tha... tumhe bilkul bhi sharam nahi ayi apno ke sath aisa krte hue..." dips stands their wid "who cares luks" expression nd madhu speaks "dipali ab tum khudse jana chahogi ya me dakkhe mar ke nikalun tmhe is ghar se..." dips gve her glare nd rk yells "dipali get out isse pehle me tum he bhi arrest krwaun just get lost..."

Dips walks frm their nd tells sikki "chalo yahan se sikki..." bt sikki back off"wife me is bar tumhari ye ghatya sazish shamil nahi tha to tum akeli jarahi ho yahan se..." dips gve him a deadly luk nd leaves frm rk mansion madhu close d door on her face... (i knw i knw mene dips ko jinda chod diya bt we need at least 1 vamp to run d show...)

Radhaji walks to rk nd speaks "rishu beta..." bt rk left frm there widout listening her...madhu sees dis nd cme to radhaji to console her just den she hear rk's shout "biwi!!! biwi!!!"...madhu also left frm there...
Madhu cmes in bedroom nd ask him "kya hua rk tum chilla kyun rahe ho..." "kuch nahi biwi i was just missing u to tumhe apne pas bula liya..."by saying dis rk cmes near her nd pulls her by waist madhu bumps in his chest nd says angrily "rk!!!" "kya biwi ab me tumhe awaz bhi nae de sakta??? btw tumhe meri planning kesi lagi...see all villains of our life r finish...nw u get it i m hero in real life also..."

Madhu gve him fake smile nd says "ohh really joa pehle apna chehra dekho real wale villain to tum lag rahe ho is heavy beard me..." rk make puppy "don't say dat biwi it luks nice...don't u like it???" madhu try to cme out frm his embrace bt fails nd says "no i don't like it pati..." "bt y biwi??"madhu preten to think fr a while nd says "i don't knw bt i really don't like u in dis heavy beard so go nd shave nd plzz leave me na rk..." rk smirks nd says "no biwi dis is not a reason i knw y u don't like it bcoz u r tense dat hw will u kiss me wid dis heavy beard right na???"

Madhu get shy nd hit him on chest "rk tum bhi na..." "wat me bhi na biwi we must try dis..." by saying dis rk start reducing d distance between their lips nd TAN TADHAA!!!
(sorry i really don't know hw to define dis kiss wid heavy beard so imagine it urself rishbalians...kidding...😆😆)



Hope u all like it nd sorry fr any flaws in story it was just my imagination...

Nw plzz share ur views in cmmnt hw u like it or not nd do hit d like button...

THANKS
SURU...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS 😳 loved it & I'm sorry I saw your previous PMs about your OSs but didn't have time to read as I am on my vacation. Will read all & give a feedback later ok? 😳 & Keep writing more 😃 Good Luck
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Wow loved it. Very positive one, the one we need it in show too.
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@zoshad3119: Awesome OS!!!!😊
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Owsome imaginatn dear.. Bt CVS R CRAP.. I lovd it.. Specialy Sadakchap encounter.. Nd dat beard part.. Even i thnk he luks nc in it.. Bt i luv hm without it... Nc Os..
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nice OS .
(yippee🥳 sultan ka pack up... me don't want him to go in jail nd cme back to seperate out rishbala again)...
Even I want him to die rather than be arrested .
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It was mindblowing!!Loved it...
Plzzz write a romantic os too..
I luv d way u write..so plz...
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Tan tadha..Awesome OS!! Hope Rishbala develope some brains in the show too and beat Dipz and Sultan in their own game!!
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Awesome, loved it , sare villains ka pack up :)
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