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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: janvie

Oh Your Most Welcome Akhil.😊
Well,About those clashes,The Charachters of Vivian and Rithvik in PKYEK respectively was Vampire Abhay Raichand and Werewolf Jai Khurana.And Apart from their usual fights and revenge,They even used to past sarcastic comments to each other.😆They even have a Super-Hot chemistry and fans named them as Ajeh.😉 🤣That's why asked you for RK and Arjun's fights and clashes.😳 😆
You know,You seemed to have watched most of Ekta Maata Shows like Bade ache,KHTV and also Pavitra Rishta.You haven't watched PKYEK on star one?!😲Well It was a Youth Show and so far the Best I have watched on Indian TV inspite of all the bloopers.😳
I can send you link to Some Hilarious Ajeh Fun posts with Pics and Trust me You'll cracked up ROFLing.😆

waiting for those links!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnk u zina!!
will cntu soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waitingg
next update kab milega?
plz aaj try karo
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Chapter 3


Madhu got up as her alarm ringed. She wants to sleep sum more!!

Common its just 6:30!!!

She got up and she freshed up!!

She came in a beautiful deep blue salwaar kameez!! And that colour is complimenting her porcelain skin.


Unique Deep Blue Salwar Kameez

Madhu: omg!! 8:30 bajh gayi!!

She just wore kajal , strawberry chapstic and a bindi!!!

Madhu: ready!!!!

And so she began to walk to meet her grandfather.

Dining table:


It's a rule their that everyone shud be here and then only the breakfast will strt!!

Evry1 are there except madhu and rishabh!!

Nanu: yeh bacche bhi!!! Kabhi disciplained nahi hote!! Aur mere bacche toh bilkul bhi nahi!!

Bulbul: nanu!! Aap kiske baat kar rahe hai??

Nanu: tumhari!!! Zara tumhare kapde toh dekh!!!

Bulbul: nanu just sleeveless hai!!

Nani: ji!!! Aur kya galati hai isme??

Nanu: mujhe kya?? Bulbul hi aise kapde pehenthi hai toh uski kya??

Nani: uski matlab???

Nanu: madhubala ki!!

Priya: papaji

But sumone intereppted them

"sorry for the delay"

Evry1 turned towards the direction frm wer that sweet voice came!!

Madhu: wo!! Kal raat neend hi nahi aayi toh thoda late hogaya!! May i??

She said pointing towards her chair which is opposite to an empty chair!!

Priya: haan beta!!!! Beto !!

Madhu is going to sit while evry1's eyes r fixed on madhu and she's feeling very awkward!! She's gonna sit wen a voice intrppted her act.

Nanu: tumhi madhubala malik ho??

Madhu: ji!!!

Nanu: ohh!!

Madhu is different in evry1's expectations!! They thought she'll wear short skirts , dresses n all but she's cmpletly diff!!

Nanu: tum kya karti ho??

Madhu: ji mein singer hun!!

Nanu: singer??

Madhu: haan wo…

Their conversation is again intereppted by a male voice!!

"singer banne ke liye engineering karne ki kya zaroorat hai??"

Evry1 luked at rishabh but madhu was like that itself!! That cllg incidents again came infront of her.

Madhu turned and luked at rishabh who is busy admiring her frm her back!!

Madhu: ji?? Mein kuch samjhi nahi!! (she said wth newly gained confidence)

Rishabh: madhu!! Bala!! Smasher!! Malik!! Wow!! Wat a name!! naam mein hi sherni hai!!

Madhu luked at him wth I'll-kill-u look!!

Rishabh: singer banne ke liye engineering karne ki kya zaroorat hai??

Madhu: actor banne ke liye engineering karne ki kya zaroorat hai??

Rishabh: degree??

Madhu : pinch!!

They copmletly forget the world and busy staring at eachothr!!

Madhu felt awkward as soon as she looked away!!

And here evry1 are luking at them .

Madhu turned and sat in the chair.

Anika: madhu wo chair

Rishabh: its okay anika!!!

Poorvi's and anika's eyes popped as they listend this frm rishabh!!

"he'll kill if anyone sits in that chair!"

Poorvi: but!!

Rishabh luking intensely at madu said: kuch pane ke liye!! Kuch khona padtha hai meri jaan!!

While madhu is lukin down in awkwardness!!

Rishabh came out as he heard nanu's voice:

Nanu: rishabh!! Aaj kyun late ho??

Rishabh: ji wo!! Kal raat neend nahi aaya!!! So woke up late!!

Evry1 luked at madhu who by nw knws evry1 r doubtin her nw!!

Rishabh too sat opp madhu : btw! Gud mrng!!

Madhu in tension took water and strted drinking wen nanu gave her a shock!!

Nanu: rishabh kal raat kiske saath tha??

Nd madhu strted coughing badly!!

Priya and mona came near her!!

Rishabh: mdhu take this!! (he gave her water)

But madhu didn't took it as he gave it!!

Poorvi thought "kuch toh hai!! Dono ko kal raat neend nahi aayi!! Dono late hei aur dono young bhi hai!! Kuch toh zaroor hai!!"

Breakfast went very badly for madhu as its not less than an interview!!!

And madhu left to her room as soon as her breakfast is completed!!

In hall:

Poorvi: bhai!! Tum kya madhu ko

Rishabh: poorvi mein bas thodi der mein aata hun!!

Saying this rishabh went upstairs.

Poorvi: kuch toh hai!!!!

Anika and bulbul came there and patted poorvi!!

Bulbul: kya baat hai??

Anika: aisa mosquitoes ko welcum kyun kar rahi ho??

Poorvi: chup ani!!! Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki madhu aur bhai ke beech mein kuch hai??

Bulbul: kyun?? Just becoz they came late??

Poorvi: nahi!!! Hw com they both knw eachothr that they did engineering?? Itna openly baat kar rahe the dono jaise bohoth saalon se jaanthe hai ekdusre ko!! Toh dono ka same reply ki unn dono ko neend nahi aayi!! Madhu ko saet de diya!! Yaad hai kaise chillathe hai humpe jab hum uss seat mein by mistake betthe hai?? Aur tho aur jab mera spoon gir gayi tab maine dekha!! Ki bhai table ke neeche madhu ka haath pakadne ki koshish kar raha hai!! Aur bhai madhu ke pair ko scratch kar raha hai!! (horrified face)

Bulbul: he! Scratch nahi caress kehthe hai!!

Poorvi: jo kuch bhi hai!! Hume kya?? Par madhu ne bhi kuch nahi kaha?? Kyun??

Ani: haan!! Kuch toh hai in dono mein!!

Bulbul: toh common chalke dekhthe hai!!

Saying this three of them went towards madhu's room!!

Madhu's room:

Bulbul: lagta hai room mein koi nahi hai!!

Anika: ab kya kare??

Bulbul: aur kya?? Chale jaayenge!!

Poorvi: nahi!!! Poorvi haar maanne waalon mein se nahi hai!! Jab tak mera bhai ka sach mere saamne nahi aati!! Tab tak koshish karti rahungi!!

Bulbul: tere bhai ki tarah tum bhi pagal ban gayi?? Great!!

Poorvi: yeh jokes ki samay nahi hai!! Dekhna hai ki mere bhai aur teri behen ke beech mein kya hai!!

Anika; hum karenge kya??

Poorvi looked around the room and said: hum waha balcony mein chupthe hai!!!

They all went to balcony and hided their

Poorvi: be quite!! Okay!!

Anika and bulbul nodded!

Bulbul: poorvi! Tumhe kaise pata hai ki rishu yahi aayega!!

Poorvi: I knw my bhai very well!! Who jo chahtha hai use badi alag tareeke se paata hai!! Aur I knw ki

'HAWWW"

Luking at poorvi anika and bulbul also turned to see that HAWW scene and they themselves did that!!

Rishabh came inside and luked at the whole room!! He luked evrywer to hide and thought to hide in balcony.

He is cuming near the balcony and trik…

Seem sumone is cuming inside!!

So rishabh hid himself in bathroom which was near him at that time.

Madhu came inside in a very annoying face!!! She's having her phone in her hand!!!!

Madhu: god!!!!! Y my life is a living hell??

"coz I'm not there in ur life"

Madhu eyes popped out and turned .

Madhu: rishu??

Rishabh luked at he wth amusement!! That rishu word is soo special to him frm madhu's llips!!

Madhu: I mean MR . KUNDRA?? Aap yaha??

Rishabh: aahaan!!

Madhu: aapko job hi kehna hai aap jaldi se

MUMMM!!!!

Poorvi: omg!! Bhai!! (horror strucked face )

Bulbul: W*F!! (same)

Anika: wt's happening?? (same)

Madhu is struggling to get free frm him. She strted hitting him while he caught her hand and deepend his kiss!! Madhu pushed him wth her super woman power and gasped the air as soon as she pushed him!!

Madhu is in one corner whilr rishabh is in othr!!

Poorvi: bhai ??

Bulbul: bechari madhu!! Kya kar raha hai tera bhai?? Omg! Hume rokhna hoga!!

Anika: bulbul chup raho!! First time in my life aisa scene dekha maine!! (excited)

Poorvi: bhai aise kasie kar sakthe hai!! He didn't even had a girlfriend frm 5 yrs!!

Anika: chup raho tum dono!!! Pakde jaayenge warna!! See them!!

Three girls luked at the room again!!

Madhu: kya kar rahe ho??

Rishabh; kal raat jho beech mein chod diya!! Wahi khatham karne aaya hun!!

Madhu: rishabh stay in ur limits!!

Rishabh: sorry darling!! Mere haathon mein nahi hai!!

He pulled her and again slammed his lips on hers!! And madhu again strted hitting him but all went in vain as she's tired of hitting him nw!!

Bulbul: hightime! I think he'll rape her nw!!

Poorvi: bulbul beto!!

Bulbul: noo!! And stopped as she saw madhu also kissing him!!!

Anika: jo dekhna hai dekh liya na?? ab beto!!!

Anika pulled her!!

Bulbul: hey!! Hey!! Yeh bhi???

Poorvi: hahahaha!! Mera bhai hai!! Dekho! Ur behen too!! Clean bold!! (proud)

Bulbul: tum ladki hi hona?

Poorvi: haan!! Ab dekh!! I'm proud of my bhai!! (she said patting her shoulders)

Rishabh is not luking like he's gonna leave madhu nw!! madhu too strted kissing him vigorously! !! and as soon as madhu is out of breath!! She again strted hitting him!! Nw rishabh also left her!!

Madhu: idiot!!! Ek min ke liye aisa laga ki mere saansein chali gayi!!

Rishabh; aur aaj subah tumhe dekh kar mujhe bhi aisa laga!!

Madhu luked up at him!! She said while still struggling in breath

Madhu; tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?? Dekho rishbh!! Kal raat maine tumhe kuch nahi kaha kyunki ..

Rishabh: kyunki?? (mischevious)

Madhu: kyunki!! (finding words)

Rishabh; kyunki?? (he said while cuming near her)

Madhu: rishabh wahi ruko!!! Plz mere paas mat aana!!

Rishabh: sorry madhu!! 5 saal hogaya hai! Ab dur nahi reh saktha!!

Madhu strtd moving and turned and chuk!!

Her duppata!!!

She turned and saw that her duppat is in his hands!!

Madhu: rishabh kya kar rahe ho??

Rishabh: madhu madhu!! Plz mujhe abhi mat rok!!

He came near her!! And caught her through waist!!

Madhu: rishbh plz no!!! my lips are paining nw itself!! Haa!! Dekho!! Khoon bhi aa rahi ahi!!

Rishabh: u don't knw madhu?? I'm a vampire and 5 saal se iss khhon ko peen eke liye taras raha tha!!

Madhu is struggling: plz rishu!!

Rishabh just gave a peck on her lips and strted giving cntus pecks on her lips!!

Madhu: rishbh!

Muaah!!

Madhu: tum!!

Muahh!!

Madhu finally stopped him wth her hands in between them and said: plz rishabh!!! Meri concert hai!! Baad mein !! pakka!! Warna breathing problem hojaayegi!!

Rishabh smiled at her!!

Rishabh: all the best and aaj 10:30!! Sharp!!

Madhu nodded in anxiety!!

And rishabh left not before giving her a soft kiss on her already cracked lips wth his ataack on her!!

Madhu: hey bhaghwan!! Maine yeh kya keh diya?? Hw cum I kiss him?? Y is he forcing me in it!! Ab rishabh mujhe nahi chodega!! Is it my fault that he was my boyfriend!!

Poorvi: haawww!!! (while closing her mouth)

Bulbul: boyfrnd??

Anika: na!! tab boyfrnd!! Ab ex boyfriend!!

Poorvi: bhai ne mujhe kabhi bataay nahi??

Bulbul; y did they broke up??

Anika: who sab chod!! Zara madhu ka halat toh dekh!!

Here madhu luked at her room which is totally messed up!!

Madhu: aah!! Y do I hav a fiercy boyfrnd??? (sumthing striked) am I saying him my boy frnd?? No no!! no softcorner for rishabh kundra!!! No wayz!! No ways!!! No ways!!

Bulbul: bohoth kuch hua inn dono ke beech mein!! Isiliye they broke up!! Nahi toh dekh!! They still love eacthr!!

Anika: poorvi tera bhai movies mein hi nahi life mein bhi khatharnaak hai!! Kya scene tha yaar!!!

Poorvi: ab yaha se jaayenge kaise???

Bulbul: madhu balcony mein aagayi toh??

Tring!!

Tring!!

Madhu's phone rang!!!

Madhu found it on the floor !! oh yaa!! It was in her hands but rishabh!!!

Urghh!!

She went and lifted the call!!

"mam!! Concert aaj 5:30 baje hai!!"

Madhu; okay!!

"mam!! I'm cuming there!! Plz address bata dijiye!!!"

Madhu: likho!!

Saying this madhu setted herself while talking wth her secrectery!!

She kept the call!!

Madhu again luked at her room and again got that tingles wen she got while rishabh was kissing her!! Images are cuming in front of them!!!

Madhu; haadh hai!! Do I still love him?? Then itna gussa kyun aa raha hai mujhe??? Agar haan toh kyun kiss kar rahi thi use??? She is totally in a dilemma!!

She strted crying!!

Madhu: kyun mere saath aisa ho raha hai?? Kyun rishabh?? I don't want u in my life!! Plz!! Mein kya karu??

She said while sobbing!!

Here poorvi , bulbul and anika found tears making their way out of their eyes seeing madhu who is crying!!!

Poorvi: bechari!!! Bhai is soo bad!! Kya hua inn dono ke beech mein??

Madhu got a call and she went out of her room!!!

Bulbul: poorvi!! Yahi samay hei!! Chalthe hai!!

Poorvi nodded and stud up!!

Anika: hume kuch karna chahiye!!

Poorvi; don't worry anika!! Jo karna hai!! Hum zaroor karenge!!

Saying this all of them went outside!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg loved the update
rk apna kaam pura jaroor karna😉
poorvi is soo cute <3
amazing..
Rocking update as always!!
Akkhu next update jaldi post karna
can't wait 4 it
Edited by Miss.Perfectiie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Yiiipppeee!!!! me 2nd to cmmnt...
it was amzing update full of kisses...
Edited by zoshad3119 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Awesome update. Eager to know their past.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
it was awosum update..loved it..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Awesome Update 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
once again a superb update
you need an applause👏
loved ur writing
thnx for pm
waiting for the next

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