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Hello everyone!

U know what I have never written an os in my life...OK maybe once I pkyek forum..and that too only bcoz I love abhiya.. no one can take their place..
m not a wonderful writer... but trying isn't harmful right..? And moreover I like writing!
So here is an os on rishbala.. hope you like it and do comment.. they mean a lot..!

It starts after the night when sultan came to the hospital to blackmail madhu once again..

RK is lying on the hospital bed and as soon as the first ray of sun falls, he opens his eyes... which are looking everywhere to find his beloved wife...

*RKs POV*
Where are you madhu? I don't know when will I be able to see you again but have to do this for this case madhu..for us..for you.. I want to spend my every day and night with you madhu and that will only be possible once I win this case and for that I will have to stay away from you although it is silently killing me... it hurts.. the pain that I felt when sultans men bet me was nothing compared to the pain I feel while staying away from you.. u think I don't believe you..? That I don't know sultan is behind everything..? I know madhu... I know...

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Just then bittuji enters the room..

Bittujis eyes were swollen and he said "how are you feeling now chief?"

RK smirks and says "I m completely alright bittuji just reahersing for a scene"

Bittuji laughs and slowly his smile fades.

"what happened bittuji? And where's your bhabhi Ji? Dikh nahi rahi h?"

Bittuji smiled and said "she must be coming chief. Auntyji sent her home to freshen up."

"OK bittuji now you can go. Your chief needs to rest...alone."

Strong wind blows and some papers fall down from the table kept at the corner of the room. Due to the sound made by the papers RKs and bittujis attention goes towards it and RKs asks, "bittuji what are those papers? Bring them to me!"

"I don't know chief..must be some hospital papers" saying this bittuji moves towards them and slowly bends down to pick them up. He picks them and his face goes blank. His face looked as white as a paper.

"Bittuji ab ap saari zindagi wahin guzaar denge ya Idhar bhi ayenge..? Apka chehre Ka rang toh aise ud gaya h jaise apne koi bhoot dekh Liya...!" And he laughs.

Hearing RK,bittuji comes back from his shock and while keeping the papers at his back as if to hide them, he says,
"Chief.. arre chief Kuch nahi hain yeh... voh bus Kuch hospital me papers hain.. mai abhi doctor ko deke hun" . He turns to leave but his chiefs voice stop him In the middle.

"Bittuji agar ap apne chief ko uthaana nahi chahte toh chup chaap un papers ko idhar layiye"

He knew he won't be able to fight him and some way or the other he will get those papers. He didn't want chief to get up in that condition but god there is something wrong. How can bhabhiji do this to chief? No definitely there is something. Bhabhi ji loves chief and she won't do this for sure but right now he has no way other than handing those papers to his chief.
Oh how he wish he could turn Mr India right now.

Bittuji slowly walks towards him and stand in front of him.the papers still at his back.

"Bittuji Maine aapko yahan kade hone ke liye nahi bulaya h...jaldi papers dikhaiye..."

Bittuji slowls brings those paper in front of him and RK has to literally snatch those papers from him but what he see next blows his mind away. His face turn pale. His mind goes blank. His eyes are just stuck on one word...*divorce*...

*Rks POV*
What is this? What the hell is this? "ye kya bhadha mazaak hai? Ye kisne rakha yahan pe? Kaun kar sakta hai aisa kaam? Kisne kiya ye? I don't believe this! Itna behudha mazaak? Aur ap isse dekh Kar dar rahe the bittuji? Kisine mazaak kiya hain? Kissi ki himmat bhi kaise hui aisa mazaak karne ki?" I don't believe this. Who the hell kept this here? And why will anyone do this? If someone thinks that I will trust these papers over my wife then they are wrong!! Hell wrong..!!

****

RK was not in his senses when someone walked in "ye mazaak nahi hai RK" and that someone was none other than madhu. She had no expressions on her face. She kept a straight face all throughout!

Bittuji walked out of the room.

"Madhu ye sab --

"Asli hai. Divorce papers jispe mai already sign Kar chuki hun. Bhehtar yehi hoga tum bhi jaldi se jaldi sign kardo."

"Madhu tum jaanti bhi ho tum kya ke-

"Haan RK mai bahut ache se jaanti hun ki mai kya keh rahin hun. "

"Madhu tum pagal ho gayi ho. Ham ek dusre se pyaar-

"Pyaar? Kaisa pyaar RK ? Maine tumse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi. Voh toh suirf tum the Jo mere pyaar me pagal ho chuke the... itne paagal ki baaki Sab cheezen andhekha Kar din... jaante ho kun shaadi ki Maine tumse dobara..? Paison ke liye RK paison ke liye.."

"Main nahi maanta madhu. Meri madhu paison ko dekhti tak nahi"

"Tumhare manne na maan ne se Kuch nahi hota RK.. aur tumhari madhu? yaad hai jab tum mujhe us mandap mein chod me gaye the..? Us din tumhari madhu mar chuki thi! Mar chuki thi tumhari madhu...ye aishoaraam ki zindagi se pyaar hone laga tha mujhe... aur jab ek itna bada superstar mere peeche pada hua tha toh mai us mauke ko kaise gawa sakti thi...?" Although its killing her but this one is her last chance to make him believe her.."aur mai toh hamesha rehti bhi par afsos apne ap ko dekho tum.. kahan the RK the superstar aur an kya reh gaye ho... ab tumhare pass Kuch nahi bacha RK.. Kuch bhi nahi...yahan tak ki tumhara naam bhi nahi.." she knew this one has done her work but she didnt have the courage to look up at him.

RK couldn't believe this was happening to him but after hearing her say those things he couldnt help but believe. In complete traumatized state he signed the papers and moved his hand forward like a lifeless body.

Madhu came up to him ,took the papers ,turned and started going out of the room. At the door she stopped and looked back which she instantly regretted. Her rishabh was looking at her as if she was a ghost. His eyes were completely blank except with a big 'why' and pain... he was sitting as if he had no life inside him... just staring off Into space. She couldn't bear more..she turned and fled away. As soon as she was out of the hospital and in a secluded place around the corner she let herself away. Her tears and emotions now came out freely. She cried and howled. She looked at the sky as if asking god 'why us?' But who can answer her? Who will answer her? A couple tied with the threads of destiny.

Few minutes later:

Madhu was still standing there and crying when she got a phone call from an unknown number .
*The caller*: kaafi achi acting Kar leti ho!
*Madhu*: sultan tum yehi chahte the na ki mai RK ko divorce dun,Maine de diya. When are you going to complete or end of promise and free RK?
*Sultan*: RK RK RK...tsk tsk tsk...madhu kitni baar kaha hai us kutte ke liye mat Roya karo par tum sunti hi nahi ho... chalo aj ke liye Kuch nahi kahunga. Aur itni jaldi bhi kya hai chudwa dunga..Pele tum meri toh ho jao...madhubala..
*madhu* (seething in anger): sultan baat sirf divorce tak ki hui thi.
*sultan* : theek hai madhu.. itne ache kaam ka reward toh tumhe milna hi chaiyen par pele tum mujhe ABC aake milo...
*madhu* aarahi hun sultan.
The call ended.

Madhu could do anything for rk and if hers going away from his life will help rk them she was just going to do that.. irrespective of the pain she feels.. and for RK she has to be strong.. for him.. for them..
*****
Madhu reaches the place given by sultan. She goes and stand near the door when suddenly the door opens and a hand pull her inside.

The hand was of no one but sultan. His back was towards the old wodloden door and madhu stood in front of him.
Sultan had that lusty smirk on his face when he said "madhubala... kya acting kar leti ho... agar RK ko pata chalta toh bada kush hota but now u r mine.. only mine.. aur us kutte ki nahi...mai tumhe bata nahi sakta ki mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai madhu .."

The moment madhu opened her mouth to reply, a beep sound was heard which came from madhus cell...she looked down at it and then laughed... laughed loudly..

Sultan got confused but still smiled thinking its bcoz of him.

From behind a voice came "haan sultan kaafi achi acting Kar leti hai MERI madhu."

As soon as he heard those words his smile faded and he turned back to look at the figure standing by the door. The man moved towards madhu and kept a hand on her waist. "RK?"

"Haan RK sultan! Tumhe kya laga mai madhu ko divorce de dunga..? Haar gaye tum sultan haar gaye"

"Par tumne un papers par sign kiya tha--

"Haan kiya tha par papers nakli the"

"Kutte Teri himmat bhi kaise hui ye karne ki" as soon as sultan moved foreword to attack RK, dozens of hands were all around him..stopping him... police...

"Ye toh mujhe puchna chahiyen sultan..par mera mood nahi h... chalo mai tumhare sawaalon ka jawaab hi de dun.. ye sab hamara plan tha.. mera aur madhu Ka... jisme tum faste gaye.. mai jaanta tha tum koi na koi galti toh zaroor karoge..aur tumne ki.. hospital mein mere room me aake... mai sirf naam ka superstar nahi hun sultan..mai us time jag raha tha.. saari baaten suni Maine aur tum he pakadne ka plan banaya... mai jaanta tha ki tumne hidden camera lagae hain room me isiliye tumhare jaate hi divorce papers badle aur voh divorce ka naatak kiya... tumhe kya laga tum madhu ko blackmail karoge aur voh hoti rahegi.. nah sultan.. day 1 se mai tumhare baare .me sab jaanta tha... tumhari saari black mailings aur plans..! Maanna padega sultan kaafi ache plans bana lete ho par tumhare saamne koi Aam aadmi nahi tha... RK tha... THE RK..!" While saying this he stretched his hands outwards. "Btw voh qaynaat wala dialogue sirf super stars par Acha lagta hain... tum jaise don pe nahi..chalo bahut hua..tumhara time over sultan.. inspectors lejayie isse"
Police grabs him and starts taking him outaide.. sultan used all his force to come out of their grip and kill RK but couldn't do anything.. they take him to the van, make him sit inside and take him to the police station.
*RK-madhu*
Madhu hugs RK and says "I missed you RK.. btw tumne sultan ko Kuch nahi kiya?"

Rk says " tum kya jano biwi Maine kitni mushkil se roka hai apne aap ko.. nahi toh uska muh dikhaane layak nahi rehta" ;)

Madhu laughs and Then wince when she notices a scar and recalls the day when he was beaten up and asks "how are you RK?"

RK says in a playful manner "zinda hun biwi!" :p

Madhu says "shut up RK!...I love you!"

RK smiles and says "I love you too biwi!"

Both come closer till their lips are locked in a promising kiss... promise of always being together...promise to never let go of each other even in most difficult time...and promise to always love each other..



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Well guys that's the end of it...nothing special... just changed the direction of the story..! But will still love to see the comments..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice OS. i hope something like this happen in the show.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You should be writing more Stories.
This was amazing. I loved RK's plan.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chittu!!!!! chittu fabulous writing. 👏 👏

main toh teri writing ki pyaar mein padh gaayi hoon re. 😛 😆

Gosh!! wat a superbly u created tht divorce situation, it was Brilliant. 👏 👏
honestly my eyes got teary to feel RK's pain of loosin love..

& last!! wat a fabulous ending!! 👏 👏

kash!! ye shw mein hota toh @least we can back our shw to us 😳

Overall awesome OS. ⭐️ ⭐️
U Rocked It!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks..! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: afghangirl

nice OS. i hope something like this happen in the show.

thnx.. 😊 I hope so too that written this.. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS, hope this happens in the show :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful os chitto
I wish aise track chnge ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope esa show me ho jaye...nice one chitti❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os . hope something like this happens in show.

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