Protecting my Best Friend -Madhu part 1 page 1

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short OS
Will be uploaded soon
Before I start Sultan is NOT the hero but the villain in this os!

1. RK- cool stylish rich but down to earth guy. Caring sweet person and best friend of Madhu. A fierce and protective and lovely best friend of Madhu. He loves her a lot but has always kept it in his heart as Madhu has never seen anything more than friendship on their relationship.

2. Madhu - Sweet beautiful girl . Kind to everyone loves everyone. RK is her best friend. She loves him as a friend. She cares for him as a friend. Currently in love with Sultan
She is a happy go lucky free person. Always smiling making others smile. Sometimes emotional.


3. Sultan- a dark mysterious guy who falls for Madhu and Madhu falls for him. He wants Madhu and sees Madhu no one else. He cannot stand RK and Madhu's friendship. But he is planning to Marry Madhu n take her away in his world where nothing can seperate them.


Concept

RK returns from a business trip and goes to meet Madhu and tell her what he feels when she tells him about Sultan and she will only marry him of RK agrees. Rk meets Sultan and he feels something is off about him and that he has seen Sultan before and it's not a good thing


Will RK be able to save Madhu before Sultan takes her? Will he save his best friend

Will Madhu realise the danger she is in? Will she realise her hearts true feeling ?

Will Sultan be successful?

Guys please comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting Concept
Waiting for the update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1

Madhu screamed as soon as she saw RK walk into her room casually with Madhu only wearing her vest and shorts.
'Rk don't you have any shame walking into my room like that ' Madhu shouted as she grabbed a duvet and covered herself. RK laughed 'as if I haven't seen you like that before anyway we've known each other since we were tiny and I've seen you naked as a baby' RK smirked.
Madhu rolled her eyes and 'eew RK shut up just because your 4 years older than me and hold on..omg your back from London when how ?' Madhu just realised that her Best friend RK just returned from London where he has been for the last six months and both have been chatting on Skype and the phone.
'Behold the great Madhubala notices' RK raised his hands up and bowed down to her. Madhu dropped her duvet and ran up to him and jumped and hugged him with her legs around him forgetting what she was wearing.
RK hugged her back.
'I missed you Rishu' Madhu said in tears of Happiness'
'me too oh and Madhu don't you have any shame clinging onto me like that ?' rK raised his eyebrows. Madhu came out of the hug and smacked his shoulder.
'get lost RK and let me get dressed I need to tell you something it's very important and it affects our lives'

RK loved Madhu since they were children. He never told her as he believed in their friendship. But hearing Madhu he wondered what if she loved him too.
'Madhu come to Redroses cafe for lunch I've got some work to do we will talk there' RK said leaving realising he had to get flowers and a diamond ring for Madhu.

At 1pm, Madhu entered the cafe and saw Rk seated on the table. He had a ring in his hand and the roses with the waiter to pass to her once he had proclaimed his love.
'Woahhh RK i don't know how to say this to you. But your my best friend and I wanted to tell you first..you know like my mum is like your mum and your dad is like my dad, RK mum was dead and Her dad . 'We have always shared everything even our live secrets. But I kept this from you until you were back because this will be a shocker for you. But I don't know if you will accept it or not but I promise I will do what you say' Madhu said sincerely putting her hands on RKs.
'I am in Love RK' she said. RKs eyes and heart gleamed in happiness. 'Im in love with Sultan' Madhu said shying. RK heart broke -as he heard the last word.
'It happened when you left . We met in the local library and we just started talking and we fell in love. He asked me to marry him but I said I can't until I've asked you. You know Rk I've never taken any decision without you. If you say No I won't marry him RK what do you say?' RK dropped the box on the floor. But nothing else mattered as his heart was broken. He smiled and took her hand even though his heart was crying.
' I'll have to examine him Madhu. Lets See if he can take of my crazy Madhu '
'Omg RK thank you I love you ' Madhu exclaimed hugging him. The waiter came forward with the roses when RK motioned not to.
'No' RK said the waiter went back.
'Hr right here RK' sultan walked in.
'madhu leave us for a while and let me talk to him.

Sultan sat down with RK.
'Madhu has told me a lot about you Rk your her best friend and all..she is a sweetheart RK and I promise i will love to the extreme of madness. She is my life RK. I love her a lot'
'What can you do for her?'
'I can die and even kill for her..I will tear apart the world for her but I will never leave her'

RK nodded and asked Madhu to return.
'Congratulations both of you I accept'
'Thanks RK' Madhu hugged him. Sultan fisted his hands and had a fake smile. But he controlled himself. The water came forward with the flowers and RK gave them to the couple.

'Right ill be off i have some important work' Rk said leaving them behind. As soon as RK got up Sultan put his hand around Madhu shoulder warning him she is his. RK noticed sultans stance and knew something wasn't right.

Sultans pov

How dare she ask me to ask RK to marry her? She is mine. Even if he says no I will take her by force but then she will be upset. I have to do this for her happiness. So what he said yes. But how dare he touch her or hug her. Once we are married ill take Madhu far on my island where no one can touch her. She is mine soul body life and love. I will teach her after we get married.

RK pov

RK sat in his office and leaned his head back on his chair and closed his eyes. Sultan the name sounded familiar and so did he face. Trishna, RK friend come sister walked in.
'What's wrong bro? Weren't you going to tell Madhu your feelings ?' Trishna asked. RK looked at her and told her what happened . Trishna hugged him.
'But trish there something wrong with Sultan I can feel it. '
'What did you say his full name was'
'Sultan Singhania'
'RK google it I've heard it before too on the news'

RK and trishna found his picture and details on the news and were shocked.
'RK your best friend is in danger'
'Wr have to save her but she loves him so much and she won't believe me'
' this is what we will do'

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me first yay!! 🥳..
Loved the story..am quite excited to read ow Rishabh is going to deal with sultan and save Madhu from this monster😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Me first yay!! 🥳..

Loved the story..am quite excited to read ow Rishabh is going to deal with sultan and save Madhu from this monster😡


Thank youuu

Sultans past is dark


And here a little teaser
Sultan picks up Madhu's phone
'Hello Madhu main sanjana.. Sultan is nit what he seems,, please madhu come and meet me your in danger ' sultan heard the name n crushed the phone

Trishna he is coming u sure nah
Anything ti save madhu rk
.Shree. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Update 😳
Hope RK will save Madhu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww, I love the friendship.

I hope RK tells Madhu the truth about Sultan. Sultan can lie all he wants but then I want Madhu to believe RK as she knows he would never hurt her. just a thought ...

ps. I love the title!
Edited by 4ever4love - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing story plz update soon...

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