RM FF-The Story Of Both Of Us Note on PG 38 21 September

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Ridhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv
this is amazing tinker😃 thank you for da pm😛

Thank You Syanti ...and you can call me Ridhi or Ridz ..ur wish :)

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Ridhi

@tinkerred10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: smdosi
Amazin yaar...plz pm me whenever you update...

Thank You :)
And I've already sent u a buddy req ...so accept it for pm's :)

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Ridhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Shree.123
Loved the Update

Thank You Shree :)

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Ridhi

@tinkerred10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Phew! Finally replied all . Thank you for the feedback and your wishes guys ...I'm truly overwhelmed :) love you all ..muahh..<3..

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flowing_river

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Its a very interesting plot... liked it very much...

do continue soon...

pls add me in your PM list and PM me for next update...

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Ridhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: flowing_river
Its a very interesting plot... liked it very much...
do continue soon...
pls add me in your PM list and PM me for next update...

Thank You :)
Sent you a buddy req. :)

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Ridhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Hiii :) I'm finally back after a looong time, so without wasting any time here goes the next chapter .
Tell me your views about it in the comments below :)

*Chapter Eight*

"Lights , camera and Action !!"
The scene was going perfectly until the heroine messed it up .

Slightly irritated with her I said "CUT !! " .
The heroine i.e Aashima Roy has given fourteen takes for this single scene and the last one being fifteenth .
" Aashima loosen up a bit . Feel the scene ...you are dancing with the guy whom you love "
She nodded . " OK , then Action !"
God!! This girl is giving me a headacbe . " CUT "

I was about to open my mouth but Mr. Superstar cut in saying that , " Why dont you show her ?"
And how could miss that taunting tone to his voice .

" Aashima , just see how I do it " I said .

I went and stood where Aashima was standing earlier .
RK 's one hand went around my waist and he pulled me close .
Soon the music started playing in background.
Both of us were lost in each other . Slowly we started moving along with the beats .
My one hand was on his chest and the other in his hold .
I couldn't help but notice how his silky hair , the slight stubble , his lips and his beautiful eyes that were holding me captive .

We were so close that I could feel his minty breath on my face .
For a second his eyes flickered to my lips .
My brain was processing all of this when he started leaning in .
Our lips were just mere inches apart . I closed my eyes and my breathing picked up .
Before anything could happen we were interrupted by a loud applause from the crew .

My eyes snapped open and I quickly got out of from his hold .
His face displayed shock . I'm sure that even my face would also be having the same expressions .

I quickly moved back to my place and the scene started again .
My mind drifted back to little moment that we just had .
It was as if we both were in some other world . Both of us were loat in each others eyes .

It felt like we were in love . Wait a minute why am I even thinking about him .
I hate him. He is just an actor in my film and nothing else .
I closed my eyes and took a deep breath to clear my head of all thoughts regarding - HIM .

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A/N :

I know this chapter is way too short but I promise that the next update will be longer and it would be on 17th Sept.
I replied to all your comments and big thank you for all your wishes and feedback . :)
And as my exams are iver the updates would be a bit gaster and longer :)

PS : All those who have sent me pm's ...I'll reply soon .
My inbox needs cleaning so byeee !! :):):)

^_^

Edited by tinkerred10 - 12 years ago

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-Vinu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

OMG RK asked her to do it 😉 ahaaan smartie 😉😆 Madhu is a good director! & this is short 😭 I expected a page long update 😔 please update the next part ASAP! 17th September nah!! In 2 days! waiting! 😃

PS- Congratulate me!! I'm the first to comment 🥳

PPS- Aku be fast next time 🤣

PPPS- Ridhi, you can see what me & Aku have done in your thread 😉😆 like you & Aku used to do in my BYLM thread 🤣

Edited by VinuRox - 12 years ago

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Aakriti

@CrazyCryztal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

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Lovely ridhi !!!!!

Loved it <3 <3

i guess madhu should act in her own movie 😆

That wud b awesome...

Glad the crew applauded or else they wud hv...hehe 😆 PDA 🤣

Will b waiting for nxt update :D

i hv exam on 18th..so ll probably read it after i m back home that day ^_^

Yayy !!! I m second !!!!! 😆

PS: VINUUU 😭 😭

I saw last post by tinkerred10...43 sec ago...

rushed nd posted res...

just to see that vinu is already there

u did the same to me in titli di's update too 😭

Edited by aakriti18 - 12 years ago

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-Vinu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: aakriti18
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VINUUU 😭 😭
I saw last post by tinkerred10...43 sec ago...
rushed nd posted res...
just to see that vinu is already there
u did the same to me in titli di's update too 😭

Aww soweee Try your luck next time sweetheart 😉😆

Edited by VinuRox - 12 years ago