TS : One Night in Manhattan (REPOSTED) - Page 7

Originally posted by: sush12_DD

edited.

its gud they got friendly in 3 weeks or more thn tht 😉

OMG jealous Madhu..RK ko maza aata hai pareshaan karne mein...he is really kameena..😳

haila...kiss kar daali..😲 ahaan RK ji.☺️

awww...hugged him hiding her face in his T-shirt.😳ahh finally accepted.

these two paragraphs r amazing..

RK pulled her ...to...My knight in shining armour, My Rishabh"

wow..he presented a ring to her..proposed her..😃

beautiful ending..

superb piece of writing Dil..

Loved it !

it was perfect.👏

n yes it was different...n awesome.

Originally posted by: ennishet

Nice update, Dil!

Thanks for turning the OS into SS. Good to see a happy Madhu and RK, she was very sad in the first part and I hated that much. They seemed really friendly and comfortable with each other ... and the sadist in me loved that Madhu sent her ex and his better half off to Alaska. Umm Antartica would have been a better choice. 😆

Thanks for the PM! 😊

Originally posted by: cool_sri

SUPERBBB UPDATE...

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Loved the ending. It was awesome.

Originally posted by: aahaaan_rk

Great OS/SS watever u call it. Just read it in one go and it was beyond romantic!! U truely are a giftedwriter honey well done on this one 👍🏼

Originally posted by: -CuteChic-

Aww.. Dillu it was amazing reading this OS.. I loved their convo.. It was fantastic ❤️❤️
Nw m getting greedy.. I want one SS/FF from you 😈 😆

Originally posted by: zoshad3119

really lovely ending dil dear...
awesome convo writing...
also last 2 lines r superb...

Originally posted by: Shree.123

Amazing Update 😳

U r an amazing writer

Plz do write more 😃