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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very beautifully written...could u extend this...I mean a another part or so
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dil❤️...I just read it in the comments that u are going to continue it..thats wow😛!!!Pls continue soon Dil..waiting to witness their relation blossom❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was an amazing OS Dil! I loved how understanding and gentle RK was to Madhu. It was refreshing to see Madhu's innocent naiveness. Please I'm begging for you to continue it! 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ow wow.. awesome os dil... 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
You are back with an OS
I really miss your stories dil 😊
The OS was awesome. PLSSS make it a SS 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was LOVELY!

i'm a fan of casual conversations...i loved the convo betwn them! 👏

luv 🤗
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update, Dil!

Thanks for turning the OS into SS. Good to see a happy Madhu and RK, she was very sad in the first part and I hated that much. They seemed really friendly and comfortable with each other ... and the sadist in me loved that Madhu sent her ex and his better half off to Alaska. Umm Antartica would have been a better choice. 😆

Thanks for the PM! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

that was LOVELY!


i'm a fan of casual conversations...i loved the convo betwn them! 👏

luv 🤗


Thanks Hiya.. 🤗This is a new writing style for me. I'm usually very descriptive..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited.
its gud they got friendly in 3 weeks or more thn tht 😉
OMG jealous Madhu..RK ko maza aata hai pareshaan karne mein...he is really kameena..😳
haila...kiss kar daali..😲 ahaan RK ji.☺️
awww...hugged him hiding her face in his T-shirt.😳ahh finally accepted.

these two paragraphs r amazing..
RK pulled her ...to...My knight in shining armour, My Rishabh"

wow..he presented a ring to her..proposed her..😃
beautiful ending..

superb piece of writing Dil..
Loved it !
it was perfect.👏
n yes it was different...n awesome.
Edited by sush12_DD - 12 years ago

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