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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Hey Guys I have to tell something first -

I am thinking to divide this OS into Three Parts.
Well you all have read Part 1 and in Part 3, They will have their Suhag Raat...😆*
OK DON'T BE MAD AT ME!
Here's Part 2 -
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PART 2
RK returned from his shoot, it was 9 PM in the night. RK was very exited as today's night is going to be very special. RK ran up to his room. He opened the door; and walked in.
There, he say his BIWI combing her long, beautiful, open hair with a brush.
Madhu's face then turned up at RK's direction.
" Good evening Patidave! "
She said teasingly, still combing her hair.
" Good Evening Biw..i.."
RK's last words became slow when he saw Madhu's bare back.
( Madhu had taken her all hair in front, and you all know that Madhu wears deep-back anarcalies..😆 )
He almost lost himself seeing her back.
On the other hand, Madhu's eyes looked at RK's direction,
' Where is he looking? "
Madhu thought confusingly.
Madhu copied RK's direction and SHE BECAME SHOCKED when she realised that RK is looking at her bare back.
" R-RK? "
" Yeah Biwi? "
Madhu's voice broke RK's attention.
" Don't you want to get fresh? You will be tired right.."
" Oh...Yeah! "
RK said smirking.
' W-Why is he smirking like that? '
Madhu began to become more confused.
RK got up, still with a dirty smirk; looking at Madhu.
RK first kept his hand on her shoulder, and dropped it down and walked to the washroom.
MADHU NOTICED IT.
Madhu was beginning to feel uncomfortable by RK's new behaviour.
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After 15 mins -
RK got out of the washroom, and then he saw Madhu removing her bangles.
Madhu saw RK from her mirror, she again felt that feeling in her.
She looked down and again began to continue her work with a little hurry.
RK walked up to her, Madhu finished removing her bangles.
And now RK was behind her, admiring her face from the mirror.
Madhu decided to ignore him.
She again took her hair in front, and started making her plat which she makes daily. She was just going to; but suddenly;
" Keep your hair open...it really suits on you "
RK said keeping his both hands on the table, blocking Madhu's every way to leave.
Madhu first noticed RK's hands, then, she kept silent and dropped her hands down.
And then, RK noticed that Madhu's dori ( of her anarkali ) is loose.
RK removed his hands and then,
Started tying it slowly...
After feeling RK's every slow touch, Madhu felt goose-bums on her back.
RK noticed it.
After a few seconds, RK was done tying her dori.
Madhu felt relief.
Madhu was just going to leave but just then,
RK wrapped his hands around Madhu tightly.
Madhu looked down at his hands, and gulped.
" Biwi, don't you want to give some love to your patidave? "
Madhu felt goose-bums on her arms. She began to become a little scared.
RK closed his eyes, and bent his head down, and nuzzled Madhu's neck. Madhu closed her eyes, feeling his warm breath touching her skin. RK eyes slowly opened, He saw Madhu's face from the mirrow. He loosed his grip. Feeling his loosing grip, Madhu; too; opened her eyes. RK raised his hands up and help Madhu's shoulders. He turned Madhu in front of him, Madhu looked at him. RK's hands slowly slipped down from Madhu's shoulders, then her upper arm, then elbow, then her down-arm, and then reached her waist. In the mean while, Madhu's eyes were closed, feeling RK's every touch. RK had made Madhu off guard, RK held her waist, and then in a sudden move, RK pushed her up. As Madhu was fully off guard, her hands automatically held RK's back so that she can balance her self. She opened her eyes. She saw RK's face a little hanged down, looking straight into her eyes. RK could feel Madhu's breath touching his skin.
" Spend this night with me Madhu..."
Madhu looked up at RK with a shocked look.
" W-Why? "
She asked him with a calm voice.
RK removed his one hand from her waist, And then moved Madhu's hair with his index finger. Madhu closed her eyes.
" Because..."
RK said calmly and cupped her face with his hand..
" Because...? "
Madhu asked him with the same tone. After a few seconds -
RK replied -
" Because I Love You...''
RK said the truth. A big smile slowly came on Madhu's face, and a lone tear dropped down from her eye.
" D-Do you Love Me? "
RK asked her. Madhu removed her hand from his back, and cupped RK's face with both her hands.
" I Love You Too.."
They Both Smiled at each other...
RK picked her up,,,
And slowly started walking towards their bed....
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In the third part, They will have s**.
Please do leave your comments and TELL ME ABOUT MY WRITING SKILLS.
Please motivate me.
Thanks!
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-Vinu- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Yay!!!🥳 I'm first to comment on the 2nd update in your hot OS!😉 wow! ☺️that's indeed hot ☺️ just loved it!! But I expected more!!😡 hehe😆 My gutter mind is 24 hrs active😉 Please update fast!!! Eargly waiting to read the next! Btw please give us a more lengthy one next!😳
Edited by VinuRox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: VinuRox

Yay!!!🥳 I'm first to comment on the 2nd update in your hot OS!😉 wow! ☺️that's indeed hot ☺️ just loved it!! But I expected more!!😡 hehe😆 My gutter mind is 24 hrs active😉 Please update fast!!! Eargly waiting to read the next! Btw please give us a more lengthy one next!😳

LOL I will Try my best..Thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Loved it...! It was very romantic ... Eagerly Looking forward to the next update... 😳 Thanx for the PM 😊
Edited by mevanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

superb dear ,👏

confession to ho gaya

waiting for the censored part


type & upd soon

Edited by VIBS_DD - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
super romantic..luved it..continue soon nd thanx 4 pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Hot hot hot😳
Continue soon!!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Awesome Vibona..U just rockked it!!👍🏼my gutter mind is on full swing..☺️
update soon plzzz
😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: VinuRox

Yay!!!🥳 I'm first to comment on the 2nd update in your hot OS!😉 wow! ☺️that's indeed hot ☺️ just loved it!! But I expected more!!😡 hehe😆 My gutter mind is 24 hrs active😉 Please update fast!!! Eargly waiting to read the next! Btw please give us a more lengthy one next!😳


effect of my teaching...🤣 u r good student.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
it was fantastic update.👏.continue soon..thanx for pm

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