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Posted: 12 years ago
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Warning - This OS is for Matured Readers.*

( PS ) - I am writing this OS because I wanted to test myself; that how I can write adult's novels.*
( well you all know what I mean )*
I am again reminding that this OS is for Matured readers.
Ok, after reading this, plz leave your comments and plz like. SO I KNOW THAT HOW YOU ALL LIKE MY WRITING SKILS.
AND ALSO - I am dividing this OS into 2 parts.
The first Part ( which is below ) This is the starting.
And in the SECOND PART - Rishbala's Suhag Raat will BEGIN...😆😆**
So plz read Part 1 and do tell me weather I should continue or not.
Thankyou!
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PART 1
RK's friend Aditya had came to meet him.
They both were in RK's room, sitting on the red couch.
They both were chatting, and Drinking.
Aditya was DRUNK now. But RK was not.
Aditya was married just 1 year ago.
RK and Aditya were discussing about his marriage.
RK said -
" What was your wife's name? Some Shi-she? What was it? "
" HER NAME WAS SHIFALI DAMMIT! Why do you always forgot? "
" Man I really don't like her name. SHI-FA-LI! "
" So I also don't like YOUR WIFES NAME!!? MADHU-BA-LA!! "
They both laughed, fought, discussed about their married lives.
And then - A question came in RK's mind.
" Hey Adi! "
" Wha~? "
RK came near his ear and whispered -
" How was your SUHAG RAAT? "
After 2 or 3 seconds, RK turned his head and looked at Aditya.
ADITYA WAS ALREADY BLUSHING.
" Uh..~Huh...~~? Tell me how was your Suhag Raat? "
RK asked in a teasing way. Aditya sighed, and looked up -
" It was a pleasurable night..."
Aditya said looking up dreamingly..
On the other hand, RK BURSTED OUT INTO LAUGHTER.
Aditya looked at RK with a dump look.
" Why are you LAUGHING?! "
Aditya said but still RK was laughing.
" WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING?!?!?! "
Aditya said and punched RK on his stomach.
" OUCH!!!! "
RK shouted. And then looked at Aditya.
There, Aditya was trying to control his giggles.
" OK-OK. let it be..."
Aditya said and kept his hand on RK's shoulder.
" RK.."
" What...? "
RK said and took his glass in his hand and started drinking.
" How was YOUR SUHAG-RAAT? "
After hearing what Aditya has just asked him,
RK ON THE SPOT SPITTED THE BEER OUT OF HIS MOUTH.
" What the..."
Said Aditya looked at RK's SHOCKED FACE.
" YOUR SUHAG-RAAT DID'NT GO WELL OR WHAT?!?! "
Aditya said and bursted out into laughter.
" Aditya..."
RK said in the same position.
Aditya was still laughing.
" ADITYA??!! "
Aditya stopped laughing and looked at RK.
" Aditya you know that my marriage was ONLY A 4-PHERA MARRIGE!! "
RK said looking at Aditya angrily.
" Ya I know it was a 4-Phera Marriage but still YOU ARE HER HUSBAND. "
Aditya was fully drunk and he didn't knew what he was saying.
But RK, like a mad person, took it seriously.
' Hmm...Yes...No matter its 4-Phera Marriage but I am still Madhu's husband..Hmmn..."
Thought RK to himself.
After a long chit-chatting and drinking, Aditya finally left.
********
It was 12:30 AM in the night.
Madhu was fast asleep, But RK was awake.
' Whatever Aditya said, was it really true? Should I really do this with Madhu? '
RK turned his face on his right side, and looked at Madhu. And then looked at the pillow wall between them.
RK had already developed some feelings for Madhu.
And the Main Thing IS -
RK really wanted to have s*x with Madhu.
But then also, he was confused.
" YES RK, YOU CAN DO THIS WITH HER!! "
Thought RK to himself. A smirk came to his face.
" Wait for Tomorrow's Night..Madhubala..."
Thought RK and he slept..
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So tell me guys do you like it? because in
PART 2 - Rishbala will have their Suhag-Raat..😆*
This was just the starting.
Plz do tell me.
And leave your comments.
If I don't get good responses I will not continue this OS.
Thankyou for reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww great start & well written. I'm so interested! Please do continue for us gutter minds 😆 & thank you for this! If the Cvs decide to skip SR or postpone it, atleast we have our wild imaginations and ffs hehe 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I would suggest to make it 3 chapters...nxt one u can do their full marge.nd in the last one suhaag raat...u r really a good wrter...i love it...its just a suggestin do as u please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: revti21

I would suggest to make it 3 chapters...nxt one u can do their full marge.nd in the last one suhaag raat...u r really a good wrter...i love it...its just a suggestin do as u please...

Hmn..Actually you are right..There should be three chapters..I should really think about it..Ok, I will see..BTW, Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww sounds interesting!! loved the first part. These days we are doubtful about their SR in the real story😕 Good atleast you are going to write about that!😉 Please do continue soon!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow excellent well written.👏.eargerly waiting for the next update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Real good start…looking forward to the 2nd part…update fast!!!😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahem ahem..very very nice..that red line RK really want to have S*X with Madhu...☺️
thanks vinu for the link..
TM plz send me PM when u will update part 2!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaahh.. Sounds interesting.. Do continue 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: titli4love

Ahem ahem..very very nice..that red line RK really want to have S*X with Madhu...☺️
thanks vinu for the link..
TM plz send me PM when u will update part 2!!😉

you're welcome Titili Di anytime for my SR Queen!!😆

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